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f9fc11ee62d4 | B799DAFE0950 | They shed have your best intros in mind. | Claim | Ineffective |
075290173112 | B799DAFE0950 | What dies that mean?
It means that they wont gave you bad advice.
they will tell you what to do bast on their own experts. | Evidence | Adequate |
cfd7e8722755 | B799DAFE0950 | Instead of just getting one way to what ever you need you will get multiple ways to do it. | Claim | Adequate |
a490c16a3c3c | B799DAFE0950 | For example I was layering to throw a cove ball in baseball.
I had two people helping me one of them had one way to throw it and the under one had a defeat way.
I lest to both of them and I had to throw the first way that the first person told me.
You would see what they would do.
everyone has their own ape an just like you you mint have a deft ape an then your friend that is human.
So asking multiple people is not bad.
It will help you if length so dont let anyone tell you that getting multiple opinions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
11a7da23faed | B799DAFE0950 | In closer I thing that asking for multiple opinions is good become. You would see what they would do, if they are all good pople they will have your best in mind,and You will get multiple ways to do what you need to do | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
7bdde2374c9d | B7ACED7ED339 | Students can benefit by taking online classes or by video conference | Position | Adequate |
716989c57921 | B7ACED7ED339 | Students will be able to take online courses from their computers. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c046531e6243 | B7ACED7ED339 | Now, students can't pretend to be sick because they will still have to do their work from their classes. | Claim | Adequate |
bc632026f71c | B7ACED7ED339 | Students can take notes, do homework, and take tests online. Students will make sure they do their work and send it to their teachers online. | Evidence | Adequate |
e5a03831bc38 | B7ACED7ED339 | Students will pay attention and the teachers will tell that student what day they will have a test. Students will get notified by their teachers when they have work to turn in. Students can't lie and say they didn't have homework because the teacher notified them when the homework was due. | Evidence | Adequate |
5bd7ae90b194 | B7ACED7ED339 | Students take will take their work very seriously and the teachers will check their work to see if they did it correctly. Students were offered this opportunity to take online classes so they shouldn't ruin their chances. | Claim | Adequate |
b242cc358251 | B7ACED7ED339 |
Students will always have time to work online because there's no time limit. | Claim | Adequate |
ccf122248983 | B7ACED7ED339 | There is always a time limit in school but, when you take online classes you don't have to worry about completing you work because you have all day. Every school has a time limit but online classes don't. Students stress about not finishing classwork while online students don't have to stress. Students taking online classes should be happy they are taking online classes. | Evidence | Adequate |
d5b5c110a2c6 | B7ACED7ED339 | Taking information down tot study helps you because you can save those notes you wrote down online. | Claim | Adequate |
5ac1ac6fb4c7 | B7ACED7ED339 | Students can take notes on paper but, they can lose their notes easily. You can also send your notes to yourself if they ever get deleted. Students prefer online notes than paper notes because they are easier to find online. Students taking online classes will think it was a good idea choosing online classes. | Evidence | Adequate |
77abdfdc2aa7 | B7ACED7ED339 | Students made a good choice. But some students can cheat by using their phone by turning their face cam off. Students can copy other peoples work online. Students computers could have a virus on their computers. Students always find a way to not do their work easily. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
94aafcd8cd66 | B7BD520BE938 | Sometimes having to make a decision is pretty hard thats why we ask for advice from some people. | Lead | Ineffective |
98c1f53172d5 | B7BD520BE938 | Seeking multiple opinions can help with making a better choice | Position | Adequate |
bbc297d79b1c | B7BD520BE938 | seeing other viewpoints on the topic may help , | Claim | Adequate |
2d4022d9e0e5 | B7BD520BE938 | having other viewpoints can also help with making a decision | Claim | Adequate |
4580fec83f48 | B7BD520BE938 | it can help with having the feeling of assurance that you went with the right decision. | Claim | Adequate |
c02082687bd8 | B7BD520BE938 | Making a better choice may sometimes always need the advice of other people, this is because people that need to make a decision want to see other viewpoints on the topic. | Claim | Adequate |
f8bfc67f09c4 | B7BD520BE938 | When having to make a decision its better to see other viewpoints because some people speak from experience to help the person making the choice. Some people give their opinions based off of what they think would be better for yourself and your future. Lastly, some people may give pros and cons of each choice to help the person making the decision. | Evidence | Adequate |
6fef6811f6c4 | B7BD520BE938 | Seeking multiple opinions can help make a better choice by helping you make a decision | Claim | Adequate |
70b02ce9dad8 | B7BD520BE938 | Other opinions can help you choose because if multiple people give the same type of advice on what you should choose you should go with it. Although, you may think what if they're lying or what they say may not be accurate, the most important thing is to go with your gut feeling and if you do have the same opinion or idea as the person your talking with you should always go for it. At times when your not feeling the best connection with the advice you were given you should go with the other choice, there is never a requirement that you have to go with the advice your given when your not feeling it. | Evidence | Adequate |
404da2dd7cce | B7BD520BE938 | When getting advice from multiple people its important to keep in mind when decision making because it can influence the decision you want to make. | Evidence | Ineffective |
06a6cbf50854 | B7BD520BE938 | The reason as to why people want multiple opinions on a topic is because they want to have an assurance that whatever advice one person gave you is good and can agree with what someone else was thinking or even yourself. | Claim | Adequate |
0248add6b3dd | B7BD520BE938 | When seeking for multiple opinions we always keep in mind what would be beneficial from making a certain choice. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1f75e39b03a2 | B7BD520BE938 | Seeing viewpoints from others, having assurance that advice you are given is good and beneficial, and lastly can help make a decision are all reasons why people seek advice and opinions from multiple people. These reasons are main reasons why most people seek multiple opinions and use to make a choice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
689e398e82ae | B87D59512568 | Asking for advice is a crucial part of making a big decision. Many people ask for second opinions when they don't know what they should do, or can't decide on their own. | Lead | Adequate |
e5b00c14e55c | B87D59512568 | it benefits you by giving you a chance to learn from the experience of others, | Claim | Effective |
d34e25b980c7 | B87D59512568 | view your situation in a different perspective, | Claim | Effective |
8433fcf33841 | B87D59512568 | learn more about your choices. | Claim | Effective |
1e5c6b01c9f3 | B87D59512568 | All of these are valuable assets that will help you later in life, and maybe even help others if they come to you for advice. | Claim | Effective |
b4ec1cf1590c | B87D59512568 | People who have had to make your decision before will have experience with what happened to them when they made the decision. This will help you try to find the result that will best benefit you. My friend Generic_Name always asks for the opinion of others when trying to make a decision. A great example of this is when she couldn't take a important test, but didn't know when she should make it up. She asked me what she should do, and I told her that when I missed a big test, I tried to find a solution with our teacher beforehand, like taking the test early, or a few days after the actual test date. Generic_Name knew she couldn't take the test early, as she had another activity taking up her time, but she went to our teacher and asked if she could take it later. Generic_Name figured out a solution by asking others for advice, and found the best choice for her using my experience. Now, she can also use both mine and her experience to make decisions later on inn life. Using my experience to find a solution is not the only way for Generic_Name to solve her problem though. She could have asked for a different perspective instead. | Evidence | Effective |
02bf54dff6a0 | B87D59512568 | Different perspectives help others understand your problem so they can help you, and also you can now rearrange the pieces of your situation to find a solution. It's always better to look at your choices in a new perspective, because you might find it easier to choose the best one for you from that angle. When I was trying to decide which sleep-away camp I wanted to attend this summer, I had to ask my parents and my friends to decide. My parents told me that because one of the camps was extremely expensive, it would be better for me to go to the other one. My friends, on the other hand, told me that instead of choosing one or the other, I should go to a completely different camp, one that has the activities of both previous camps mentioned and cost less than each one. I did not know about this camp, and didn't even consider trying to find a camp with the benefits of both the ones I wanted to attend. But using my friends' wider perspectives, I was able to find a completely new and customized solution for me. They also could have provided important information about the new camp that I was not aware of to advise me on my decision. | Evidence | Effective |
902a073d86b6 | B87D59512568 | Different people may know certain things about the decision that you need to make. Asking for advice from these people will allow you to gain this information and make a better choice. A study from Harvard University found that when given the choice, 99% of people chose to make a decision with advice from multiple strangers who has had to make the same decision before. Out of that 99%, 98% believed that the choice they made was the best for them. They also believed that the knowledge they gained from talking to the strangers was a big contributing factor to their success. This study shows how truly beneficial advice from others is. It not only helped people make the best decision possible, but also provided new information for the decision maker, who can now pass on that knowledge to others who need help from someone with experience. | Evidence | Effective |
5d354d71883a | B87D59512568 | when making a decision, asking for multiple opinions is extremely beneficial. | Position | Effective |
8bc86225ce4a | B87D59512568 | You can learn from the experience of others, choose the right choice more easily when looking at different solutions in a new perspective, and gain new information you can pass on to others, thus helping the whole process come full circle. It will benefit you greatly in the long run as well, as you can use anything you gain from these different opinions in future decision making processes. Clearly, it is always better for you to ask for a second opinion, no matter the decision. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
7bfca01ae677 | B947F9493FAF | I think that you should seek other peoples opinion on something | Position | Adequate |
7e2316336c22 | B947F9493FAF | it gives more viewpoints | Claim | Adequate |
09e7752c3a83 | B947F9493FAF | critisim constructive or not | Claim | Ineffective |
1628c4499f60 | B947F9493FAF | it could stop from making a rash mistake that could cost your life. | Claim | Adequate |
3cb6ffc7f0de | B947F9493FAF | Its also not a weakness to ask for help even presidents and powerful world leaders have to get and gie opinoins on how good someone would be at a job or too even run a country. Generals need opinions on what attack method they are going to use.
| Evidence | Adequate |
301a8288a1e8 | B947F9493FAF | One of the reason you need to seek opinions on advice is because it gives you more viewpoints on the matter | Claim | Adequate |
60a5f1af3a04 | B947F9493FAF | If its about what you want to wear today and you ask someone they have given you their viewpoint and their constructive critisim about it. If you are asking people to give you advice about what type of people you should be around with then your getting more viewpoints on the matter. It could even be a viewpoint that saves you from a deathly mistake like if you were thinking about joining the army and you friend says, "I dont think your ready for the army maybe somethig that could help but less physical like the airforce". Then you sign up for the air force and in two weeks you hear on a sad gloomy day that the whole troop you were about to join was sent to the dark jungles of vietnam and now was all killed in action. That tiny viewpoint and good advice just saved your life. | Evidence | Effective |
080bc1ba8b2c | B947F9493FAF | The next advice on asking for opinions on your advice is critisism. The reason critisism is good is becuase it tells you (in a kind or not so kind) way of what you need to do better at | Claim | Effective |
37c35445080b | B947F9493FAF | Like if you were going to try out for a safety for football and you havent played safety and you've been a wide reciever your whole life your going to get people that will tell you to stick to what you are good at. That is helpful in some senarios but the true help critisism is constructive critisism. The reason construcetive critisism is so helpful is the person wont say stick to what you are good at they will say, "Here lets go to the field and do some drills and then hit the gym to build muscle and then a 1 mile run to finish it off". That is not only advice about thinking your ready or not thats also showing that they care about you and some of the best opinions and the best advice comes from constructive critisism . | Evidence | Adequate |
724185a4d78d | B947F9493FAF | Here is the final advantage of asking for opinions on you advice is it could save your life. | Claim | Adequate |
cc387ac9636c | B947F9493FAF | This point is going back to the military part of this essay. Say I want to jump out of airplane and skydive down. Then say you've been my friend for almost 5 years ever since junior year and your like, "Hey man I don't think we should do that I've never known you to be a risk taker like that". Then we could find out that those parachuets were jammed and we would have plummed to our deaths. That is why this advice isn't just for clothes this is about a possible life or death situation. That is why I think you should ask for peoples advice or opinions on something because it could just be for popularity and fashion or it could even be so helpful to save you from a life or death situation. | Evidence | Adequate |
26c2e9e2242b | B948C72229B3 | Do you have trouble making choices by yourself? Sometimes people aren't sure what to do in certain situations so they ask for advice. | Lead | Effective |
44005eb6a472 | B948C72229B3 | I believe seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice | Position | Effective |
9fdf61fb2429 | B948C72229B3 | other people may have more experience with the topic, | Claim | Effective |
e3fabdf8e7cd | B948C72229B3 | you can learn a lot from others, | Claim | Effective |
7639b5e556fd | B948C72229B3 | getting multiple opinions can help you feel more confident in what you are choosing. | Claim | Effective |
352e245e4e98 | B948C72229B3 | If you haven't dealt with something much then it will be very useful to get advice and opinions from multiple people who have dealt with your problem before. You should ask numerous people about their past experiences to find out what worked best for them. All of that will help you come to a decision that will hopefully work out. Humans who have more knowledge on your subject will be wiser and can give you a lot of important input to think about when it comes to making a choice. I personally like to talk to my parents about issues because they know much more than I do and usually make the right choices. | Evidence | Effective |
178d6f662b5f | B948C72229B3 | When talking to multiple people they may point out some things you never noticed or thought about, they can also look at your situation from another point of view. This is good because you may be focused on one thing but there could be many other important details that you overlooked. You should always ask more than one person about your problem so that you get a range of opinions and not just one that could be biased. Others may also have more information that you were not aware of. | Evidence | Effective |
c000eff3e50b | B948C72229B3 | If you are making a hard choice, it is important to feel good about what you decide. Knowing that other people agree with you and having a lot of feedback will make you more comfortable with your choice. It can also be less stressful if you know that others believe you are doing the right thing. Many people greatly care about what others think so it can be a relief if they are helped and supported in making a good choice. | Evidence | Effective |
497201589152 | B948C72229B3 | listening to others advice can be very beneficial. You should always talk to numerous people about important decisions. I think that getting multiple opinions will help people make the best choice because they will gain more information on their problem, they will be more comfortable with their choice, and others might have dealt with similar problems before so they have more knowledge on the issue. No one has to try to find a solution on their own. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f8a676a860ce | B962DFFBD558 | Seeking opinions can help you make better decisions. "Two brains are better than one." See now everyone has heard this quote at least one time in their life. And that's because it's true! | Lead | Effective |
fac271f4c9cc | B962DFFBD558 | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make better choices | Position | Adequate |
21a1a2451d16 | B962DFFBD558 | more minds the better, | Claim | Effective |
fccd121370d1 | B962DFFBD558 | different people from different cultures can have other ideas. | Claim | Effective |
49f1884c4e4d | B962DFFBD558 | it's good to have conversations about something that you're not sure on. | Claim | Effective |
0ac65eeb107f | B962DFFBD558 | You know all those tall buildings built in the city? Yeah, those took many minds to make, over 1,000 engineers worked on the worlds tallest building. What if only one engineer made the design plans? I bet you it wouldn't even get past the drawing board. Everyone has heard the "We're stronger together" or "Team work makes the dream work." Now, do you know everything about airplanes? I bet not, so that's why you would talk to someone that does know something about planes. 99% of engineers need someone else to work for them because they don't know something. See, that's a perfect example of a way that we need other people to help us by using their knowledge that they have and that we don't. But overall everyone is better together and not better divided. | Evidence | Effective |
3de6a17db12e | B962DFFBD558 | You may think that one word is good, but then your friend from a different country might think that that word is horrible! See now no one person is the same so that's why sometimes if you have and opinion on something then maybe you should ask someone else that has a different cultural background from you. One thing that famous politicians do is check with other people with different backgrounds to make sure that they don't offend people when they don't want to. Before you go out and start blabbing on about some other country maybe you should try and talk to the people from that country so then you don't offend them? You as a person will never be the same than anyone else. I personally have friends from other countries that eat dogs but look here, in the USA if someone eats a dog, that is very illegal. That's a perfect example of how people with other backgrounds will differ in opinions. So as you've read, most people that are different from you will widely differ in opinions from you. | Evidence | Effective |
bf19684f837a | B962DFFBD558 | Everyone that is successful right now has asked at least one person for help, I can guarantee you that. So if you need help just ask! It's one of the best ways you can get help anyways. There are over 1,000 different information data bases that can help you find information on anything. One that I like is Wikipedia it may not be 100% reliable but that's only if you're ignorant while reading it. Wikipedia has over a million topics of information that you can browse. See this may not seem like your asking for help but it is one way you can. I only listed one good source of information but overall there is hundreds of sources for information and you can get help from any of them. | Evidence | Effective |
e0db5670947b | B962DFFBD558 | the best you can do is always seek for more information and keep on learning. That's why more than one person's advice is better only one person's advice. So I challenge you to go out into the world and to keep asking questions and to stay educated! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8b9687d27f40 | B967FC913839 | So many of us like to ask a variety of people for help when we are faced with a dilemma, and by doing so we give ourselves the best chance of picking the best option for us. | Lead | Effective |
2ea63b123903 | B967FC913839 | We gain many advantages by doing this, compared to if we relied only on our own knowledge.
| Position | Effective |
4e86916956d3 | B967FC913839 | When we ask a variety of people for their opinion on a matter, we get many different solutions to solve a problem | Claim | Effective |
d758b606acae | B967FC913839 | . We can then compare each of the positive and negative side effects of every option, and find which solution best fits us and our needs. Another advantage to getting numerous inputs on a topic is that we can then refine a majority of the bias out, and make the best choice according to the facts.
| Evidence | Adequate |
9154dc35917e | B967FC913839 | As a quarterback for my football team, I am in constant need of improvement on my skills to further our chances of success. I always ask my coach on what he thinks I need to improve on. He always gives me his feedback, and a way he thinks I could improve on that problem. Sometimes his advice doesn't completely fix the issue, so I go to my parents for help. My parents know my strengths and weaknesses, and help my to fix the problem tailoring my coach's advise to me. This gives me an option that not only works, but fits me as a person.
| Evidence | Effective |
e562f6c6b206 | B967FC913839 | I ask many people for advise to find the best solution possible, because when I get a group of opinions from everyone, I can use them to build off of each other. By doing this, I can build a stronger opinion that goes more in depth, and fits my needs like a glove. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c8639c3061f9 | B996860E00A4 | In a study conducted by Stanford University, scientists found that humans are proven to perform best and make the best decisions when working in a group of people. My mom has always told me that more brains are better than one, and I would have to agree with her. In the past, I have made poor decisions on my own, but when I ask somebody for a second opinion or idea I am able to use what they tell me to improve my own ideas. | Lead | Effective |
fca7e96fe65e | B996860E00A4 | Seeking out multiple opinions helps people make the best choices | Position | Adequate |
7ee5f5af8c50 | B996860E00A4 | all people have different experiences | Claim | Adequate |
849c19e83dbd | B996860E00A4 | different knowledge | Claim | Ineffective |
8c21ea44ca57 | B996860E00A4 | different perspectives | Claim | Ineffective |
3f1dc8d1a9f3 | B996860E00A4 | Everybody has different experiences that they use to make decisions | Claim | Adequate |
901643b2089f | B996860E00A4 | It is helpful to have multiple people's experiences to make the best choice possible.
9 out of 10 people say that they make the most effective decisions when they seek others for advice. They also said that because the people had different experiences than them it helped them choose what would be most efficient under a certain circumstance. Experiences affect what a person chooses to do, so it is advantageous to ask others about their opinions. | Evidence | Adequate |
5c064aa0cd6d | B996860E00A4 | People have different knowledge of topics that help them throughout the choice making process. | Claim | Adequate |
015347c0c7d5 | B996860E00A4 | My mother and I have completely different knowledge bases because she is a physical therapist and I am still in middle school. Once, I had a knee that was inflamed and I thought that the problem was I had twisted it, but my mom observed how I was walking and realized that my shoe was causing the problem; my shoe didn't support my arch, so my foot would roll inward, causing my knee to as well. I had no idea that it was my shoe that was causing the issue, but because my mom had different knowledge than I did she was able to figure it out. Problem solving and choice making both involve using past knowledge to do the best thing now. Having a second person with different knowledge than you gives you a second opinion which is extremely useful to make the best choice. | Evidence | Effective |
e65fdbc17b54 | B996860E00A4 | When you ask somebody else for a second opinion they bring a different perspective based off of their knowledge and experiences | Claim | Adequate |
a8f3bb97fe09 | B996860E00A4 | It is similar to when I went to an art festival in Utah and there was artist who did pavement murals. They looked interesting and beautiful, but to see what the artist wanted you to see you had to stand on footprints that had been painted on the asphalt and look to see what the mural was of. When you have a second person to give you their opinion it is similar to looking at a mural from a different perspective. The first way that you look at the mural is interesting, but it is even better when you change to where the footprints are: the best choice to stand. Having a second opinion can help you choose the right perspective and right choice. | Evidence | Effective |
b4367604e445 | B996860E00A4 | Asking for multiple opinions helps people make the best choices. Getting a second opinion helps you make the best choice because you have another person's opinion based off of their experiences. Every person has different knowledge of topics and they use their knowledge to make decisions. Listening to the opinion of someone else is useful because they will know different information and facts than you. Perspectives that people have are developed from what they know and have experienced, so getting multiple opinions helps you learn another perspective that could be more helpful towards making the correct choice. In conclusion, getting the opinions and ideas of others assists you in making the best choice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
91af836e8dc6 | BA0183CB23C5 | People all around the world go through different things, but it's those who are there with you that help guide the way | Lead | Adequate |
7364a7d25590 | BA0183CB23C5 | In times of a tough decision, seeking multiple opinions will help in making a better choice | Position | Effective |
c4c35777d059 | BA0183CB23C5 | Everyones opinion gives a different point of view and can help pick out what decision is best | Claim | Effective |
92c13d2d1649 | BA0183CB23C5 | As well as, some people have gone through similar things and can help talk out the situation | Claim | Effective |
3b99a1465c03 | BA0183CB23C5 | In my lifetime I have experienced my friend go through a rough path. Because of the people who helped her, she is now happier and living much better. | Evidence | Adequate |
2f85eb2962a2 | BA0183CB23C5 | Many people will have different perspectives. | Claim | Adequate |
127eb22dd72d | BA0183CB23C5 | They all can influence a decision, because everyone is different. We are raised by our culture and environment. Therefore, no two minds are alike. Situations are seen differently, giving an abundance of different solutions. Imagine a parent and friend helping out the same person, now compare the two. As a parent they want what's best for their child and try to look to steer them in the right direction. While a friend may want the same thing, but at the end of the day they are looking to have fun and may not always give the best advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
33948912cf7e | BA0183CB23C5 | When people are getting someone else's a opinion they are making themselves vulnerable to the fact that different possibilities could happen. People can get strongly judged or rejected on their opinions they've made, as that could heavily impact a choice. | Counterclaim | Effective |
1785a0b02ee4 | BA0183CB23C5 | However, getting multiple views on a decision is always the best option, because everyone sees things differently. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
b805395a85c2 | BA0183CB23C5 | Throughout our life people have been through hardships. Some may be similar situations which include ways it's been dealt with in hopes of others making better choices. With the help of someones past, it can help pave a way for someones decision. Knowing peoples mistakes and consequences can differ what others choose to do. When making a choice some people visit professionals. A few include psychologists, therapists and counselors, they help listen to a problem in hopes of breaking it down and seeking best possible outcomes. These people are there to help drive a path for healthy decision making. Another reason is that knowing other people struggle with things too and that no one is ever alone. It provides at least a little comfort understanding everyone goes through something. Those people who decide to open up about their problems can also help determine a choice. Most people care for the well-being of people in hopes for a successful and enjoyable life | Evidence | Effective |
e097db3f864c | BA0183CB23C5 | Talking to people who have dealt with similar problems or people who are professionally trained, can help bring ease to making a decision. | Claim | Effective |
2e728aaff962 | BA0183CB23C5 | At one point in life everyone has gone through or knows someone who has been through a tough decision. A couple years ago I had a friend who always gave advice to everyone's problems. She was beautiful, intelligent and fun to be around. However, she did not feel this way about herself. As time went on some situations became too heavy to handle, the stress grew on top of her. At school she only showed perkiness, meanwhile, she was in a darker place. No one was aware of this until a few weeks later when she spoke to her friends, then counselors, next teachers and eventually her parents to get the help she wanted. She was afraid of what the world would think of her if she wasn't perfect. These people all helped her find ways for comfort and how to get the treatment needed without doing something harmful to herself or others. She was steered back into a safe and happy pathway thanks to the help of those around her. | Evidence | Effective |
05f6e44e3c9e | BA0183CB23C5 | To finish off, when seeking multiple opinions it can help someone make a better choice. As said in paragraph one, throughout life people have different views on situations and how to resolve them beneficially. As restated in paragraph two, people in life are faced with many challenges. Knowing others struggle can help bring together different ways to handle a decision. Lastly, when my peer was faced with a problem she sought out help, this brought her to a happier place. She is now better than she ever thought she could be. Making a decision shouldn't be done alone, we need to use the people around us to help guide our journey. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
df2f53bb3513 | BA881F8A8909 | Many students choose to participate in traditional and online schooling.
Online schooling can include video conferencing with teacher or enrollment in a class taken on the computer.
Giving students the ability to take classes from home is a widely debated topic. | Lead | Adequate |
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