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d65f0cd61edb | C2A6C69714EC | so why not get the second or maybe third opinion on something it will only help. | Position | Effective |
4a7a61a8a231 | C2A6C69714EC | you are getting multiple different people who have different experiences and opinions so you have many to choose from | Claim | Effective |
224663b94de9 | C2A6C69714EC | f the first person gave you bad or false info getting a second opinion could help, | Claim | Adequate |
8d20303796e6 | C2A6C69714EC | if you are playing a sport and your getting a doctors opinion on an injury getting a second opinion could keep you playing or help you big.
| Claim | Adequate |
d4d572062018 | C2A6C69714EC | getting multiple opinions gives you lots of things to choose from. | Claim | Adequate |
e613a88bf05a | C2A6C69714EC | If you just get one opinion on something then you are only have one thing to go off of but if you have multiple than you can choose which one you think is best. This means a lot because the first opinion might not always be the best one for you. So go and get that second,third or maybe fourth opinion it won't hurt it will only help and you have many different people with different experiences in there life to help you. For example you could ask someone who dose not have much experience in what your asking but then if you get a second opinion they could help you because maybe they have had experience with it sometime in there life. So if you would have just got the one opinion it might not have turned out good as it would if you got that second opinion. So just getting one opinion may not be the best choice. | Evidence | Effective |
a3e4511bf43b | C2A6C69714EC | how you could get false or bad information from someone so getting a second opinion could help | Claim | Adequate |
4d2aa2f83c0a | C2A6C69714EC | Well not everyone you ask could have the right information, some could be telling false or just bad information. So getting other opinions could come in big for you if the first opinion was not very good. For example if you are trying to get a opinion on what you should buy a family member for a gift and you only get one opinion and they say that the person likes something but they really don't then that could be pretty bad for you. I don't think you would be to pleased either if that happened so just get a second opinion so everyone can be happy. Also sometimes the opinion could just be really bad and not help you at all. So do your self a favor and get multiple opinions.
| Evidence | Effective |
ceb98dbe13f8 | C2A6C69714EC | if you play a sport then getting a second opinion is huge especially if it deals with an injury | Claim | Effective |
7daf56fd34a6 | C2A6C69714EC | When athletes get injured they get an opinion from the doctor if they think they should get surgery or whatever and most of them go to other doctors for more opinions to find there best option. This helps them a lot because some doctors could say they need surgery but then others they go to could say that they won't need surgery and that they just need rest or physical therapy or something. sometimes the doctors will even say they might need career ending surgery but another doctor says that he can still play after a surgery he just need to recover. As you can expect that other opinion helps big time for them so they won't have to possibly end there career. Or it could be the other way around that one doctor says he dose not need surgery but other doctors do then he should go with surgery so whatever is hurting does not get worse and force him to stop playing. For example a couple of weeks ago there was this pitcher in baseball that got injured and was going to doctors to see if he was okay one doctor said he would need Tommy John surgery which usually puts you out for a whole season and he didn't want that so he went to two other doctors who both said he wouldn't need it so that saved him from missing a entire season which helps him a lot. | Evidence | Effective |
7c9232b1960c | C2A6C69714EC | Now
I will conclude my reasons on why people should seek multiple opinions to help them later on. So as you can tell after reading this finding more opinions is very helpful and could change your life in some ways. However this does not mean that every first opinion you get is wrong it just means that it dose not hurt to have multiple opinions to choose from. Like I said in sports and In basically anything in life it helps because you will always have choices to make and getting more opinions might just come up big for you. After going over my essay of why you should get multiple opinions then I hope you consider seeking more than one opinion next time you need an opinion on something. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
9c6ea2618402 | C38334385924 | Their are some schools that offer to attend online classes or video conferencing | Lead | Adequate |
0171e256b193 | C38334385924 | what if they don't have a computer at home for to be able to use it for the online class. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
a887061f643a | C38334385924 | Some parents will not agree I think because they will be working and they don't know with who they can leave their kids with. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
bb47fd2d6395 | C38334385924 | Video Conferencing could work for students instead of online classes because that way the person that will come to teach you can explain more better from the assignments that your suppose to do. | Evidence | Adequate |
dcccc9ab12f1 | C38334385924 | Some students just prefer someone to teach them for they can help with what they are doing | Claim | Ineffective |
54d032ca37d6 | C38334385924 | Students will benefit from being abkle to attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
39c9db15325e | C38334385924 | will some students they would rather take classes home then school because in school they think it's more harder for them for the reason of being with alot of stusdents | Claim | Adequate |
063fbfac51ce | C38334385924 | They like to work alone quite and with someone who can have patients and work slowly and have time | Claim | Adequate |
09f405d067dd | C38334385924 | Same thing with there schedule when you have classes at home you can choose the time and day that you want to do the class. | Evidence | Adequate |
4dd6492ed5ad | C3A369E86900 | when people ask for advice is they might want help | Claim | Adequate |
e5f17faa887e | C3A369E86900 | a good understanding, | Claim | Adequate |
bb034ad48cd4 | C3A369E86900 | to see what others are thinking, or to see a situation in somebody's point of view | Claim | Adequate |
fa6ee59e168f | C3A369E86900 | Most of the time, when you talk to multiple people you most likely really want an answer to something. Thats why most people go ask others so they can find what cab be the best answer and what makes the most sense.
| Claim | Adequate |
74f99f966adb | C3A369E86900 | It could be better because the answer that the person is giving could be the answer they're looking for. | Position | Adequate |
22536c43599d | C3A369E86900 | Seeking for opinions is actually a good idea sometimes, you get to know what other people are thinking or others point of view of the situation | Claim | Adequate |
d25991186538 | C3A369E86900 | if your close friend is in a different mind set as you and he/she is confused with what is going on or dont understand yall can help each other to understand and get to know whats going on in the situation and how to get a good answer and result. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9af93684d61c | C4FC27B38A8F | When it comes to seeking advice, most would go to more than one person lurking for answers. Searching for advice is a common thing in our life time, nothing to be embarrassed about. Gaining advice is an important thing in our life. It helps us all grow and understand the things we don't. Don't know something? Just Ask. | Lead | Adequate |
0fabd0422963 | C4FC27B38A8F | people would seek out multiple people, | Position | Adequate |
775624c6955a | C4FC27B38A8F | being to be able to listen to all perspectives, | Claim | Effective |
09680d2739ca | C4FC27B38A8F | getting an all around better answer, | Claim | Effective |
35e3c76a3b14 | C4FC27B38A8F | being able to understand the concept more clearly. | Claim | Effective |
80d2af6ee03c | C4FC27B38A8F | It would cause you hear out all sorts of opinions to see the view of all the people you asked. Gaining all of the knowledge will cause a bigger solution that would most likely end out in the way you'd like it to be. If you were to only listen to a single answer, you would only get that one and only opinion that could not work as well as you thought it would. Gaining knowledge of other's opinions are important, they're everywhere, in presidential election, government decisions, FCPS decisions, etc. | Evidence | Effective |
1b3804a0f2a5 | C4FC27B38A8F | The reason for that is because you're looking at a wide variety of answers rather than from one person. You'd get a broader knowledge of the subject, and you probably don't have to ask again. The information is likely more accurate since it came from multiple people. One single person could accidentally give you the wrong information causing a possible bad outcome. For example, there are many wars caused accidentally just because one person made a minor communication error. | Evidence | Effective |
84ff691f2749 | C4FC27B38A8F | All the information that you've gathered from multiple perspective will all combine into a more suitable solution. That one solution will become bigger and bolder than the separate answers. It's like engineering, they discuss about each of their ideas, plan it all into one, then creating their first prototype. | Evidence | Effective |
c43103346120 | C4FC27B38A8F | it's recommended you ask more than one person for advice for the most accurate answers to your desired questions, more broader information and solution. There's no downside for asking multiple people, all upsides for searching for advice. Just takes time. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
09cfdd8e39e4 | C555B9B02440 | "When people ask for advice, they will most likely ask multiple people". | Position | Adequate |
668d4d0cd0c3 | C555B9B02440 | The reason people seek for advice from multiple people is because seeking advice from one person is way too easy | Claim | Adequate |
e4f8f465a2cc | C555B9B02440 | by now some people have figured out that god laughs at us when we try something thats too easy and says, "Hahaha you really thought you could do that, thats to easy your gonna have to do more if you want to do that!" | Evidence | Ineffective |
db130db90807 | C555B9B02440 | asking more than one person you can have different opinions but eventually you will get they same answer more often then you have what you should do, | Claim | Adequate |
a415f211061e | C555B9B02440 | just don't ask old people or they will give you a story and it will be long and boring. | Evidence | Ineffective |
64349772fae2 | C555B9B02440 | asking for help from multiple people, can give you multiple opinions | Claim | Adequate |
28a39c248ce8 | C555B9B02440 | which ever one you get you get more of the same answer and you us that one because it seemed to have worked on other people or there just lying to you and saying "finally that kids gone". | Evidence | Adequate |
4196334f296c | C555B9B02440 | ask multiple people for help, not just one. | Claim | Adequate |
27365180387a | C555B9B02440 | Asking one is just plain stupid, but asking multiple will give you multiple reasons why you should go with that answer. | Evidence | Adequate |
80d172dc5775 | C584DEDB2BAB | The more people you talk with, the better information you will get. | Claim | Adequate |
cc362ef7a4ae | C584DEDB2BAB | During the summer of 2018, I was torn between two decisions. I had the choice to go to a famous baseball tournament in Cooperstown, New York, or go to Europe with my family. I was thinking about this tournament since the day I started playing baseball, but going to Europe is also very fun and I get to spend time with my family. when I was trying to decide between the two destinations, I consulted some of my friends and adults that I know. My parents wanted me to come with them to europe, and my coaches wanted me to go with them to Cooperstown. My teameates wanted me to go to Cooperstown, but my siblings wanted me to go to Europe. they all gave me some advice on where I should go, and my coach said, go where you would feel the most comfortable, and where you will have the most fun. Hearing all of these opinions and getting advice from everyone allowed me to make the best decision, I ended up going to Europe with my family.
As you get more information, you might run across a new option that you didn't know was available. | Evidence | Effective |
bff4aab51d74 | C584DEDB2BAB | Getting advice from several opinions can often open up new options | Claim | Effective |
ad0413f91a48 | C584DEDB2BAB | Before my 11th birthday, my dad gave me the choice to get a new Xbox, or a new beseball bat. He gave me the day to devide which one he should get for me. When I went outside to play with my friends, I decided to ask for their advice. Some of my friends that play Xbox told me to get a new Xbox so that I could play with them. My baseball teammates told me to get a new bat so I could share it with them. One of my friends that I asked, played neither Xbox, or on my baseball team. He told me to take the cash value of the more expensive item, and spend it how I want. I was so thankful I had asked for his advice, because I never would have thought of this in a million years. Along with opening new options, seeking advice from more people might open you up to new perspectives. | Evidence | Effective |
01f707d49958 | C584DEDB2BAB | Asking for advice from different people can help give more perspectives on the situation | Claim | Effective |
4a395347216c | C584DEDB2BAB | During the summer of 2017, I had a big growth spurt, leaving me with a bunch of clothes and gear that does not fit me anymore. I was going to sell my stuff for profit, so I started to plan a garage sale and sorting out how much I would sell everything for. When I was asking for advice on how I should sell my stuff, most of my friends told me to sell the so that I could make as much money as possible. when I asked my teacher for advice on how I should sell them, she told me that I should not sell them at all. she told me that I should donate it to a charity that she works for in her free time. she told me about the organization and how it gives back to kids that are less fortunate and can't afford clothes like us.
This helped me get a new perspective on the situation that I didn't know existed. | Evidence | Effective |
a97871048ff6 | C584DEDB2BAB | Asking for advice from different people will be more beneficial than asking for advice from just one person.
If you're asking for advice, ask for several opinions, it is more beneficial and will get you the best answer. | Position | Effective |
4935b675dcdc | C816339C4D91 | Distance learning is a new tool that some schools are using in order to give students an option of taking a class at home instead of at the classroom. This is an interesting way of teaching because it provides the comfort of working at home for students, which is becoming an increasing trend as of 2019, while still providing high-quality education from professional educators. | Lead | Effective |
a8187196629d | C816339C4D91 | Nevertheless, while distance teaching is an innovative idea in theory, this method will have a negative impact on students | Position | Effective |
cec1d7f1fb91 | C816339C4D91 | there will be too many distractions that will keep students from growing through educational means | Claim | Effective |
f743ebcaac0f | C816339C4D91 | developing life skills. | Claim | Effective |
152ebb49f159 | C816339C4D91 | One of the reasons why video based learning will negatively influence students is that this option promotes weakens one's work ethic. | Claim | Effective |
c0c00fd6ae03 | C816339C4D91 | One's house will most often contain most of their sources of entertainment, such as video games, food, hobbies, electronic devices, and more. As children with developing brains, staying on task with all of these factors can only be accomplished by a few, but not the majority. A study conducted by the University of Virginia states that, "almost 90% of students under the age of 18 have an attention span of about 10-30 minutes before becoming distracted" (Generic_Name). This exemplifies how most students cannot stay focused in a video based classroom when there is no adult supervisor or teacher directly making sure they listen, which is quite difficult to achieve via distance learning. With this in mind, it is harder for students to have motivation to complete work during class time when they have easy access to other sources of entertainment right at their fingertips. Thus, video based learning is detrimental to student's work ethic because it gives them no motivation to complete their work whereas in the normal school system, they would be forced to work on it during class because of a direct presence of an adult supervisor keeping them on track. All in all, a world without video learning for all students is a one that strengthen's one's work ethic through practice in the work place rather than at home. | Evidence | Effective |
ed69c8d9b118 | C816339C4D91 | Secondly, distance learning encourages antisocial behavior among students, especially in the elementary and middle school level where their brains are developing social skills. | Claim | Effective |
5bf66cc38e19 | C816339C4D91 | According to the New York Times, "children at the earliest age of 6 years old begin developing social patterns that they will continue to emulate throughout their entire lives" (Generic_Name). This proves how these years in a classroom are a crucial time for developing young minds to nurture and grow into mature adults. The reason why video based learning will tamper with this stage in student's minds is because if they only work at home, then unless they go to after school activities, they will not experience how to physically develop long lasting relationships with other people in a work setting. When a teacher assigns a group project, students not only learn about a the topic of their assignment but how to work with and interact with other humans beings of a similar intellect. | Evidence | Effective |
e78feb84f753 | C816339C4D91 | While human interaction can be achieved through video calls, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
926d1336893f | C816339C4D91 | the experience is way different then if they were to be with each other physically learning how to productively cooperate with people sitting right next to them. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
c5b3f7a48942 | C816339C4D91 | This is an important skill to develop because it reflects how people in the real world work in corporate settings to solve a problem together. If one cannot work with other people with differing perspectives in a constructive manner then they will struggle their entire lives. Thus, distance learning also negatively impacts students by denying them the chance to develop social skills that will be vital to them when they become independent adults. | Evidence | Effective |
e30bb45adabf | C816339C4D91 | Lastly, video based learning should not be mandatory for all students because it is more difficult for teachers to give individual assistance to students who are struggling in the class. | Claim | Effective |
620392a1bbc3 | C816339C4D91 | Most often then not, there has been a time where everyone has not understood a concept in a class, or has had a question about an assignment. Video based learning does not help these people since it is more of a hassle for teachers to continue on with a lesson and answer a hundred different questions simultaneously.
Recently, a poll taken in 2019 with the schools who attempted to use distance learning reported that, "almost 95% of students had their grades drop between half and a full letter grade in the past semester because it was more difficult for them to ask questions and succeed" (Generic_Name). This statistic shows from a student's perspective how this educational system is not even increasing the rate of obtaining high grades, which is what this option was meant to do. The interactions between a teacher and a student in a physical setting is what makes the standard class a successful system since it ensures that teachers have an equal opportunity to make the lesson as clear as possible. Video based learning completely takes that function of a classroom away, which hurts students by making it harder to do well in school. Thus, distance learning should not be implemented in schools all around the world since it will only work against students goals. | Evidence | Effective |
6ed11b765685 | C816339C4D91 | In conclusion, distance learning is a system with good intentions, but has its flaws that makes it far inferior to the standard classroom. This is because it limits the ability to have a strong work ethic, to develop social skills, and to have the option to ask as many questions as students need. All in all, this educational system will result in an ill equipped generation that is not ready for adulthood and the workplace, and should not be used in schools in the coming future. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e289f172e33b | C8FB2508978A | Did you know that when people look for opinions they look for advice? | Lead | Adequate |
a13d51291631 | C8FB2508978A | seeking multiple opinions when seeking for advice can help make a better choice. I agree with this statement | Position | Adequate |
4a76afecac31 | C8FB2508978A | choices | Claim | Ineffective |
d9c17f7d8b7a | C8FB2508978A | opinions, | Claim | Adequate |
e1b090461677 | C8FB2508978A | point of view of | Claim | Ineffective |
65771854576c | C8FB2508978A | the point of view.
| Claim | Ineffective |
821e5e804bda | C8FB2508978A | persons point of view, the opinions you get from the people is their opinions but sometimes the person whos asking for advice will have to go to another to get their point of view. Depends on situation, the point of view really depends on how and what your situation is, like lets say they are in a fight with their best friend and they go to there parents for help, the mom might just say to talk to her and their dad might say dont talk to her anymore. Many different choices, before the person chooses they usually gets points of views from other people for advice some of these choices can be tricky to choose from. | Evidence | Adequate |
9b72380e4fc2 | C8FB2508978A | opinions, | Claim | Ineffective |
d290295e7e9f | C8FB2508978A | the point of view, this person who is looking for some advice. The opinions really depend on the persons point of view. different opinions, opinions can be tricky some opinions are a lot of different then others. Seeking opinions, opinions are the point of view towards the choice this person is about to make so sometimes people ask more than one person to get a different point of view. | Evidence | Adequate |
247d1c922753 | C8FB2508978A | choices, | Claim | Ineffective |
8f48c725dc60 | C8FB2508978A | hard choices, choices can be a whole lot better when you seek different opinions from other people. Like lets say the person has a choice between their best friend and their new friend they get along with so well, this choice is very hard to choose from. Many choices, choices can come in many different ways like lets say one person has a choice to eat pizza, pasta , or eat a salad they have more then two choices and they are only aloud too choose one. When one person is looking for advice on a choice one will usually would go with the opinions that work the best for his or her choice. It really doesnt matter what they choose it only matters what the opinion, and situation, or the choice this person is in | Evidence | Adequate |
f45738d67de2 | C8FB2508978A | Seeking multiple opinions when seeking for advice can help make a better choice. I agree with this prompt because of the point of view, the opinions, and finally the choices. Opinions and choices happen in our everyday lives. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f6c0df6889b0 | CA4E67209D3C | Why is it important to ask multiple people for advice than just to ask one person. If you ask one person for advice you will probably get the same answer every time. Also you would be able to see how some of the ideas that are wrong | Lead | Adequate |
94d9074a7629 | CA4E67209D3C | asking advice from multiple people can help you | Position | Adequate |
1e48d3bb4df9 | CA4E67209D3C | different point of view on things | Claim | Adequate |
1346fe9d358a | CA4E67209D3C | so you could try new ideas | Claim | Adequate |
7848a9fd279c | CA4E67209D3C | so you could see the bad idea.
| Claim | Adequate |
6caeb1a63ad7 | CA4E67209D3C | it would let you see things in different perspectives or point of views. | Claim | Adequate |
ec0e414b21a8 | CA4E67209D3C | One point of view could be like you should sell drugs. The other point of view is that you should not sell drugs. Then you start asking more people and more people are saying that you should not sell drugs. | Evidence | Adequate |
aa4202367f7a | CA4E67209D3C | you could try a new idea. | Claim | Adequate |
3e2c0e97b73c | CA4E67209D3C | lets say someone says "you should go rock wall climbing". Then another person says "you should go swim with sharks". You start asking and you go swim with sharks and then you climbed a rock wall. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a04adae36dcf | CA4E67209D3C | it will show you all the negative ideas. | Claim | Adequate |
07a87e22ec3b | CA4E67209D3C | One of those ideas could be to go break into a bank. Now this could be your best friend saying this. then you start asking around and people are saying that this is a bad idea. Right then and there the guy realized maybe my friend is not who he is. | Evidence | Adequate |
67e83fb775c5 | CA4E67209D3C | looking for advice is a good thing. one reason is that it will show you all the different point of views from people. Another reason is that it will show you new ideas. Finally it will show you the bad ideas. All these show that asking multiple people for advice is a good thing. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
16d38d75195b | CA582B3F191F | If you wanted advice who would you talk to? | Lead | Adequate |
25082729783d | CA582B3F191F | When people seek multiple opinions it can help someone make better choices | Position | Adequate |
74f0efd453e9 | CA582B3F191F | . i agree with this because people attend to help others and be there with you when you need someone to talk to. And also help you to make better choices for you.
| Evidence | Adequate |
8c8cc5f54a4d | CA582B3F191F | it helps you think what choices are best for you when you need them | Claim | Adequate |
3da575d41782 | CA582B3F191F | second, people that know you well like for an example your family, knows what's right or wrong for you. so you dont have to worry of what they're going to say. Because they know that they wont make you think more. finally, you will hear multiple opinions to hear from. Until you feel that you agree with any opinion. and knowing that it could help you prevent anything that could happen in the future when you need it. | Evidence | Adequate |
d55857a0dd7a | CA582B3F191F | it could help you get rid of the negative thoughts and thinking less when you know you have multiple advice and opinions | Claim | Adequate |
ce0e8a8687ee | CA582B3F191F | second, the more people you have by your side are the best choices you make. because they support you and will give you great advice. And also giving small talks (advice). because they know how you feel and know what you like to hear from others. finally, it could help to improve ideas and thoughts you might ve had in your head. because you think how you plan out your ideas without making a mistake. | Evidence | Adequate |
6bd53d9b6266 | CA582B3F191F | you have a chance to make better choices when you get advice from others | Claim | Adequate |
bac46bd2556f | CA582B3F191F | And it could also help not to make mistakes. And that the one of reasons you get advice is because you learn from your mistakes whether its something bad or good. second people who offer you advice, often could lead you to a right path. if you trust them. Mostly people who gets lead to a right path often listens to people's advice and follows their heart to whats right or wrong for them. And usually thinks if it's worth it or not. finally you dont have to be alone when you need advice because their always that one person that is there for you to talk to even if you dont seem them familiar. | Evidence | Adequate |
e7024c59f0a4 | CA582B3F191F | We all ask for opinions right? and its normal that we do because it could help us during life. Not everybody gets that chance like we do because some people been doing by their own and thats totally fine you could also do that but | Evidence | Ineffective |
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