tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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e1dc9870e9cd	CA582B3F191F	having others help you and giving you multiple options is a way easier to get a better future	Claim	Adequate
529b1f67de51	CA582B3F191F	i know not all of might not agree with that and its fine because all people have different ideas!.	Counterclaim	Adequate
206c8af2dab0	CA582B3F191F	advice could take people anywhere even if you dont believe me. But it does. having a good variety of choices is better than having none. Because the good choices could take you to a better future, better education and good career. but having none could take no where. Unless you ask for some advice trust me you wont regret it. we only live once, try to make good life deiscions by letting others give you advice.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
0931cdcd12e2	CCA7A1220DA0	Have you ever had to make an important life decision? It can be very difficult, depending on the impact of your decision, to choose right away. As a result, you might ask your peers to give you advice to make the right choice. You may find that you agree with some people and disagree with others. Other times you might have to meet in the middle and find pros and cons about everyone's opinion and then make a decision with that information.	Lead	Effective
744609b84b69	CCA7A1220DA0	ask multiple people for advice on your decision,	Position	Adequate
c2d6fc949ad1	CCA7A1220DA0	you can gain multiple points of view,	Claim	Effective
810c3644d81b	CCA7A1220DA0	you might find it easier to make your decision with other opinions,	Claim	Effective
7a454e8faa33	CCA7A1220DA0	you might find a better option through multiple opinions rather than just one.	Claim	Effective
7bd79da8e09c	CCA7A1220DA0	Everyone has a different way of thinking. Your best friends way of thinking is very different than yours. Sometimes you might have the smarter idea, sometimes they will have the smarter idea. I know if I had to make a big, life-changing decision that I would ask all of my closest friends. I can recall one time when I was making a personal decision about a year ago, and I did not know what to do. I asked my closest friends what I should do, and almost all of them responded just about how I expected them to. Most of them said they wanted to see me happy, so they encouraged me to choose the decision that would make me the happiest. Others gave me facts, pros and cons, and why they would be disappointed if I made one decision over the other. They then told me that they believed in me, and I would eventually make the right decision. Having those multiple points of view on what they thought really helped me decide on what I should do. I think if I had not have asked them for advice, I would have made a decision I would have regretted.	Evidence	Effective
1a72c567ac75	CCA7A1220DA0	Sometimes when a decision is very impactful, you can get stressed out over the choice you want to make. Asking others may make deciding easier because all you have to honestly do is listen to their ideas and decide if you agree with them or not. Then, using your common sense and their advice, you can choose the decision you believe is best for you . Also, you actually might know what you are going to choose. But you might still want to ask other people what they think because that can "confirm" that you have made the right decision.	Evidence	Effective
fb875c787c74	CCA7A1220DA0	Let's say you have weighed your options of certain decisions that you think are the right decisions. You chose what you think, in your mind, is best. You then ask your friends for their opinion, and suddenly everyone is saying everything different than what you thought. All of your wonderful thoughts are suddenly crushed with a wrecking ball. After listening to all of their thoughts, you find some are much more brilliant than yours. You then go back and completely rethink your decisions, just because of those few opinions. After extensive thought, you decide that your original idea was bogus. When you first make a decision, even if you had thought about for a long time, the stress of making a decision quick can sometimes fog your thinking. That is why having other people's opinions can help you make the right decision, even if it is the second time trying to choose what is best for you.	Evidence	Effective
7081b448e92d	CCA7A1220DA0	having people help you is very, very important. I believe if I did not have people help me, not even just give me advice, that I would not do my best in school. We as humans need other humans! It's just how it goes. Asking for advice is a pretty normal thing to do. When asking for advice, remember it can only positively effect you by giving you different points of view, help you make a better decision, and you possibly can find a better choice than you originally thought.	Concluding Statement	Effective
478d25aab643	CE5D744B6D39	Making decisions can be difficult when people don't have the confidence that their thinking is the best choice. This is why, when making important decisions, one tends to seek multiple opinions from others.	Lead	Effective
3e80b7ebcdf1	CE5D744B6D39	Seeking multiple opinions help make a better choice	Position	Adequate
eabfdd0d3bfa	CE5D744B6D39	one can look in a different perspective	Claim	Effective
e426e90e0dd3	CE5D744B6D39	can consider the best options.	Claim	Effective
4fc4fba0007d	CE5D744B6D39	Specifically, this is because having a new perspective can provoke more options for people to choose from. Seeking more advice from people with different thoughts can lead to more choices that one can consider. This is helpful because there is a bigger chance to have ideas that would make better decisions than the other. Also, one can consider things in a new way that they haven't thought about. If people are stuck with the one point of perspective that they have, this would not lead to another way of thinking. However, listening to other people for advice may help people to consider things in a way that they have not yet thought about. Therefore, the new way of thinking can turn things around into an opposite route of the original. Another example is that someone can propose an option that is better than you. Never think that you have the best idea, because there is always another creative mind that can think in a different perspective. One should get advice from these type of people, but continue to seek other opinions that may be better than the last. It is always useful to ask multiple people for advice because everyone has a different perspective that they look through.	Evidence	Effective
d80b5f3880ac	CE5D744B6D39	First, it is important to ask people for advice because one can get multiple useful suggestions. If you have a handful of ideas in your mind, then you can ask people for the best options and why they think that. This would help people to carefully consider the options with actual reasons that support their answer. Additionally, one can make improvements to their thoughts. By getting advice from people, one can figure out what they are lacking. By knowing what has to be revised, they can make improvements to their thinking. One would also be able to gain knowledge from people. It is possible that others know more information about the topic that is being considered. From gaining new information, this could also help figure out the options that would be better overall, when considering the new knowledge into the decision. When trying to find out the best option that is on the plate, it is helpful to ask others about their opinion.	Evidence	Effective
e27578501a34	CE5D744B6D39	Considering the best option and looking into things with a new perspective can help people make better decisions. It is important to carefully consider all the options that you have, and a great way to make sure is to ask others for advice. Asking others about their opinions can clear up your path and help you easily make your choice.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7751f7745879	CE71F3B528C0	Have you ever asked someone for advice? If yes, then you know it can be a good thing. Asking for advice means to get other people's take on different options and seeing others choices. For example, teenagers ask for advice on their Instagram photos and their outfits all of the time. It helps them decide what they want to post or wear. Also, just know that there are no strict rules on how or what to ask advice for either, it is a very casual thing	Lead	Effective
533d197315ee	CE71F3B528C0	There is no harm in asking for advice and this action is a very common thing to do. Asking for advice can be very beneficial	Position	Adequate
4b2f23dfc333	CE71F3B528C0	by having multiple options	Claim	Effective
02feb5a31580	CE71F3B528C0	seeing different point of views,	Claim	Effective
3b18b8bbd2e0	CE71F3B528C0	increase the chance of having a happier life.	Claim	Effective
ebf1176863e6	CE71F3B528C0	One time, there was a women who had a medical emergency, so she decided to go to a hospital. The hospital said she had a really bad disease, and that there was no cure. To double check that information she decided to visit another hospital, they said it was just a simple sickness and they prescribed her some medicine. She then went on with her life and she was fine, but now she knows to double check things, especially if they are going to cost a lot of money. Having multiple options can save you money and stress. In conclusion, always get a second or even a third opinion, you never know what could happen and even if nothing changes you made sure everything was okay. Having those extra opinions will save you stress and you will not have to worry.	Evidence	Adequate
6be0ce21cd21	CE71F3B528C0	Having different points of views means to see how other people react and respond. When you get a new point of view you can make a pro and con check list. A pro and con check list is when you list all of the good things and list all of the bad things for that one opinion. These check list are very versatile, and can be used in many different ways. One example is, picking a restaurant to eat at, for the pros you could say, the food tastes good, but the waits are long and the service is not that great. So now you decide you do not want to eat there and you go to an even better restaurant. Another example is, for spring break you want to go on vacation, but you also want to stay home and rest. When you make a list you can decide witch one you want to do most or the one with the most pros listed. Asking others for their opinions can persuade your choices and also give you ideas. Overall, having other peoples opinions can better your life as well as theirs	Evidence	Effective
fbbb85586bd4	CE71F3B528C0	Having a good life should be enjoying what you do and be excited about where you are and how you live your life. Having others options can benefit your life by asking where to visit in the world or where to travel to. Other opinions will also, help you realize your consequences. You may not know you are making a bad choice, but by getting others intake you will realize if you are making a good or bad choice. A parent or guardian is always a person to go to if you are not sure if you are making a bad choice or not. A teacher or school counselor can help with problems too. All of these people can give you advice that will most likely help you.	Evidence	Effective
2dbed6661fe9	CE71F3B528C0	Having others opinions and in tail can only benefit you and your life. If you are indecisive you can make a pro and con check list or just listen to other peoples ideas, but make sure you decide what you think is best for you. Only you know how to improve your life, but you may just need a little help. Always try and get a second and even a third opinion. Overall, having multiple options will make your life better and help show the good and bad consequences.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
199a810a25cd	CF89338D76B5	Schooling has been around for thousands of years, and, as the rest of society has evolved, the traditional schooling technique has virtually stayed the same. Children still remain at desks, listening to their teachers lecture; kids still take home worksheets for extra practice called "homework." Standardized tests are still given, and kids are still excelling. However, as time goes on, more people have begun to question this type of schooling, and why it has not changed for over 1000 years. A recent change people have suggested, with the rise of technology, is "distance learning", a way to "attend" school from the confines of ones own home.	Lead	Effective
2c70789524d2	CF89338D76B5	While this idea seems promising, it is not a good change for the schooling system because,	Position	Effective
911f2d2489b5	CF89338D76B5	for the vast majority of students, it will cause unneeded distractions,	Claim	Effective
4a62132296aa	CF89338D76B5	a less stimulating environment,	Claim	Effective
7bb2d15aced5	CF89338D76B5	and the inability to distinguish home and work life.	Claim	Effective
0d0e7881bbb3	CF89338D76B5	As children grow and learn, they are more likely to choose play over work. Because of this, kids are often distracted from their assignments in school,	Claim	Effective
558552fec68a	CF89338D76B5	whether it be with the thoughts of their Buzz Lightyear action figure they can not wait to play with or with the drama on their cell phone. When children are placed in the sterile environment of the school system, these distractions are minimized because the child's surroundings are sterile, solely containing learning materials and peers who are trying to accomplish the same task. If a child were to attempt to learn at home, no matter what age they were, they would be surrounded with the temptations of play, and, even if they had the power to restrain, it would affect their ability to concentrate and retain information.	Evidence	Effective
ae6d2d9ada7f	CF89338D76B5	Continuing, the home simply does not stimulate the mind as completely as the school does.	Claim	Effective
c4a12c4f15eb	CF89338D76B5	In a school there are hundreds of resources at a child's fingertips: libraries full of books, teachers full of knowledge, materials full of the ability to educate. While the home may have educational resources, the vast amount does not compare to that of a traditional school.	Evidence	Effective
9ad28cccfd7e	CF89338D76B5	Not only does a classroom have abundant learning materials and information, but it also has students who help each other grow and prosper in their learning environment. For hundreds of years, the traditional desk-and-chalkboard schooling system has been used, and over those years, people are still excelling and test scores are still rising. This is because the school stimulates the mind like nothing else; it allows children a place to let their curiosity wander and lead their education. To take away the school will take away the stimulation.	Evidence	Effective
d5636e1f467f	CF89338D76B5	Finally, a common problem found in adults is an inability to separate home and work life; this begins at a young age when children fail to make the clear distinction between home and school.	Claim	Effective
1fb14c5834f3	CF89338D76B5	By allowing students to participate in school from their home, it will make this distinction even less clear which will not only affect the child's present life but also his or her future life as a working adult. when there is no specific time and place for a child to learn, their home and education lives blend together, often affecting both for the worse. An example of this is seen in Tara Westover, the famous author of the memoir, Educated. Westover was home schooled but was often given little time to learn because of her home obligations. This caused her to lack education as well as the knowledge that home and school are two distinctly different things. If students were able to mix their home and school lives, the negative results of an inability to distinguish The Home and The School would far outweigh the positives.	Evidence	Effective
afd1bdbc7102	CF89338D76B5	Many may disagree with this position, saying that this opportunity, to learn in the comfort of ones own home, would greatly benefit those who suffer from illness or other challenges that prevent them from attending school.	Counterclaim	Effective
a930e252ad04	CF89338D76B5	However, the ratio of those who are unable to attend a traditional school to those who are is very small. Many students would take advantage of this "distance learning" opportunity and use it for an easier education rather than a better one. There are several types of accommodations one can receive for illness or any other obstacle that hinders their education; allowing any person, without such disabilities, to receive these accommodations endangers them and their education.	Rebuttal	Effective
fde43e4d80b4	CF89338D76B5	Although the idea of learning from home has been widely acknowledged, it has also been widely debated. There are several positives when one looks on the surface of this idea, however when one truly delves into the logistics of such a change, they will realize that there are too many negatives that accompany it. The home is too distracting and does not allow the proper stimulation for learning that a child needs to succeed in life; the lack of a distinguishable home and school life will also harm the child as he or she matures. If a change that is supposed to bring better and more accessible schooling to children in fact causes the opposite, this change will not benefit the education system.	Concluding Statement	Effective
a1456cb80593	D1400AFDC972	People think getting advice from more than one person is to confusing to get. Some people think it's the best option. Other people that they're both right.	Lead	Adequate
ba82c35ffd10	D1400AFDC972	So people think others ask more than one person	Position	Ineffective
1caa0a552f48	D1400AFDC972	more advice	Claim	Adequate
a16b1750b97a	D1400AFDC972	wiser advice	Claim	Adequate
c0016e0fab8c	D1400AFDC972	you can get the best answer through others advice.	Claim	Adequate
6191547bc11d	D1400AFDC972	The reason this happens is because they want more advice so they can have more knowledge on their situation. Another reason this happens is because they're more experienced than you. This is just one of possible thousands of reasons.	Evidence	Adequate
109565f64af9	D1400AFDC972	The reason this happens is because they need wiser advice from wiser people for some situations. Some people have good advice, but sometimes it's not the wisest. This is another reason people ask more than one person for advice.	Evidence	Adequate
dd34d23d30ed	D1400AFDC972	Sometimes the answers you want aren't the ones you need for a situation. So you can ask more than one person if they have the answers that you need. This is another reason people ask more than one person for advice.	Evidence	Adequate
cba015dd6d1f	D1400AFDC972	So, these three reasons are because you either need answers, wise, or more advice. Every reason this stuff happens is because people just simply need advice. Other ideas are good ways to see who has the right advice. These are three of thousands of reasons, but these are a few of the reasons this happens.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
e8cd6ccce4c8	D1748C4CD7B4	As the modern world advances in technology and media, schools need to advance with it. An outdated education system leaves little room for student growth and success; it can damper the effects of the hard work that both teachers and students put into school. However, this waste of efforts can be easily avoided by means of the updating of school policies. For example, it is growing increasingly more common for schools to offer distance learning as an option for their students. Distance learning allows students to engage in online classes and video conferencing as a way of learning from home. Therefore, students would be able to attend classes virtually from their own homes.	Lead	Effective
be661ec837c2	D1748C4CD7B4	Distance learning is an absolutely essential program that all schools should offer,	Position	Effective
2d3a6ecb8d93	D1748C4CD7B4	it allows long-term home bound students to attend classes,	Claim	Effective
526156d4af92	D1748C4CD7B4	short-term absent students to make up their school work faster,	Claim	Effective
38f5c3629f1c	D1748C4CD7B4	increases the student-technology relationship, which strengthens learning as a whole.	Claim	Effective
c43d3369ea69	D1748C4CD7B4	Distance learning would allow long-term home bound students to learn alongside their peers, even if they are unable to physically attend school.	Claim	Effective
a598296f72b8	D1748C4CD7B4	Every year, thousands of students are forced to stay home for extended periods of time due to physical or mental illness or other individual reasons. These students, while they are oftentimes provided worksheets and assignments, are quite prone to falling behind in terms of the material. If they are not at school and at the lessons each and every day, it is extremely easy to lose awareness of the material being taught, especially if the only outlet for their learning is a packet of worksheets with practice problems. Without a teacher and peers, these students do not have access to immediate feedback on mistakes or teachers who are able to answer their questions. However, with distance learning, long-term home bound students would be able to work alongside their peers. They could engage in online activities and applications that would strengthen their knowledge of the material, while also allowing them to interact with their teacher and peers. Especially when it comes to video conferencing, students who cannot physically attend school would still be able to ask their teacher questions in person and potentially have private lessons. It is never a student's fault if they are unable to come to school due to an illness; therefore, it should not be difficult to learn if that is the case.	Evidence	Effective
534a8cca86ff	D1748C4CD7B4	Not only would distance learning aid long-term home bound students, but it would also help the short-term ones.	Claim	Effective
042665cbcbef	D1748C4CD7B4	Students stay home from school every day, whether it be from a minor illness or injury or a trip out of town. Obviously, these students are at much less risk of losing their understanding of the material, but absences still require make-up work. Students can miss lessons and lectures, project presentations, and critical study time with their peers that would better their understanding. With distance learning, a student who is well enough to work but contagious to their peers could still present a project, take a test, take notes on a lecture, and engage in class discussions all from home. It is unfair to limit a student's potential learning time based on things that they cannot control, like illnesses or travel. Furthermore, students that travel frequently would also be benefited, as they could work while on the go and review material when they have free time so as not to fall so far behind their classmates.	Evidence	Effective
9da4fc40d576	D1748C4CD7B4	Some might argue that the use of technology and distance learning would not be an effective way to educate students. There are possibilities for misuse of technology and applications and many people fear that an introduction of too much technology into education would lessen the quality of that education exponentially.	Counterclaim	Effective
db259e849f2a	D1748C4CD7B4	However, there are steps that can be taken to limit off-task student activity: students could be limited to certain applications or browser extensions or be monitored by a parent or guardian	Rebuttal	Effective
91c238099052	D1748C4CD7B4	All things considered, though, the potential for the waste of students' time in no way warrants a dismissal of distance learning. Especially when considering all of the students that would otherwise not be able to learn, the meager amount of work to set up technology restrictions for those schools who desire it is most definitely worth it in the long run. Furthermore, simply because some students may abuse the power of distance learning does not mean that it should not be offered to those who truly need it.	Evidence	Effective
b2d74d12003b	D1748C4CD7B4	Distance learning should be made available to all applicable students because it allows for long-term home bound students to attend classes, short-term absent students to make up their school work faster, and increases the student-technology relationship. Distance learning programs would not only help the students in keeping up with their studies, but also teachers in supplying their students with adequate learning resources for all situations. It has become even more prevalent now; as the COVID-19 virus spreads internationally, more and more schools and universities are transitioning to virtual learning for the safety of students, teachers, and staff. Truly, distance learning ensures the safety of those involved without sacrificing any of the benefits of a physical classroom. So long as advancements like distance learning continue to be made in the future, education will maintain its vital and prevalent role in all students' lives.	Concluding Statement	Effective
08dd55395e1c	D234B31FC8C0	Most high school students struggle with waking up on time or having a good nights rest. This often will cause a lack of focus and a drop in their academic success. There should be other options for students to still get their education without having to actually go to school. Having a way to work from home eliminate those factors and could possibly better students in their schoolwork.	Lead	Adequate
99de26bcdff2	D234B31FC8C0	Therefor, students would benefit from distance learning	Position	Effective
030034ba7f59	D234B31FC8C0	it will help those in need of a flexed schedule,	Claim	Effective
e77279d6ffac	D234B31FC8C0	those with social anxiety,	Claim	Effective
58088579b929	D234B31FC8C0	for those with parents who simple believe in home schooling.	Claim	Effective
42146d81b275	D234B31FC8C0	There are some people that can't be in a crowed of people because it causes them to get anxious.	Claim	Effective
f9e81608a5c7	D234B31FC8C0	There are also people with other types of disorders that may lead them to need to be in the hospitals or just unable to function well with other people. People who are in situations like this can benefit from being able to take online classes because it can take away the discomfort of being around a large group of people. I have a friend who has social anxiety, and it cause her to have panic attacks when she even sees a lot of people all at once. It would be a lot easier for her to be able to work from home so she will be able to be focused on her work, and not scared of being in a group.	Evidence	Effective
d581bf9f9942	D234B31FC8C0	Now some will say, people with those conditions need more human contact and all students need to be in a interactive classroom setting.	Counterclaim	Adequate
2500758ec1b0	D234B31FC8C0	This is just not true, if you are someone who won't be able to work with a large group going to school will defeat its purpose because you won't be able to even learn properly. Also forcing someone with anxiety in those types of situation can just make it worse. Proving how helpful away from school leaning can be.	Rebuttal	Adequate
11fcdf63b98a	D234B31FC8C0	Additionally, Not only can this make students lives easier but parents as well. There are parents out there that prefer their children be home schooled because they don't like how the school systems are run.	Claim	Effective
cf10e6d2c1ca	D234B31FC8C0	But those parents may not have the time to be their children teacher. In a situation like this having distant learning can give that child a way to learn at home with out their parent having to stop working to become their teacher. This also makes the parent feel safe knowing their child is at home and away from a the safety concerns that come from being in a school. Along with the annoying phone calls and emails about their children's behavior or any other concerns the school usually will try contact get in contact about. My mother for one, is hates getting those calls throughout the day or emails flooding her inbox. This is a solution that can better everyone involved.	Evidence	Effective
bc8a4fd3fdd7	D234B31FC8C0	Finally, having the ability to take classes online will give students the opportunity to still take care of their other daily obligations.	Claim	Effective
6a4e9ec47a83	D234B31FC8C0	Many student have to work so they can provide for their families. Others have to take care of their siblings. My cousin is one for example, My aunt passed away on my cousins 18th birthday while she was a senior. With no other family living close to her she was forced to be the guardian of her younger sibling. Having to work and take care of other people can be a full time job on its on, but still needing to finish school in the process makes it just that much more complicated. Having the chance to take classes online would make anyone in situations similar to those life much easier. This showing the benefits this distant leaning can have for certain students.	Evidence	Effective
b90cd037ec3e	D234B31FC8C0	In conclusion students would benefit from distance learning because depending on their situation that option will give them a chance to see what better works for them. And in cases like social anxiety, safety concerns of parents and needing a flexed schedule it can help them still get an education in a way that is better for them. Being that not everyone has the same life and people have different way of getting information. This simply being an option can be extremely beneficial for students who need it.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
d118b3630db6	D26C9B0368D0	No, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home. There is a lot of action students have to take from being home school.	Position	Adequate
6353ddcfff9c	D26C9B0368D0	For example the state has to make sure their doing their work instead of sleeping and lacking around.	Claim	Adequate
f72de1b67d80	D26C9B0368D0	You have to be responsible and be aware of your work	Evidence	Adequate
1369e55746ea	D26C9B0368D0	I'm not saying all students can't attend online classes at home	Counterclaim	Ineffective
0c656cd7634d	D26C9B0368D0	but most cannot.	Rebuttal	Ineffective
bd9fdf51d2cc	D26C9B0368D0	Going to school helps you learn and understand things better	Claim	Adequate
32ecf094d9d5	D26C9B0368D0	if you dont get something, you can ask for help and the teacher can explain the problem to you. You also have a person teaching you instead of you reading things by yourself and trying to understand. Being in class accurate and up can keep you from falling asleep instead of sitting around at home eating and sleeping all day	Evidence	Adequate
8404495bdd20	D26C9B0368D0	In addition of other students because i can't speak for everybody, some students can handle that and learn way better on their own than having somebody teach them.	Counterclaim	Adequate
51eecbabfb53	D26C9B0368D0	School groups is also another reason how student learn faster and better. Working in groups help you learn more from other students.	Claim	Adequate
c4c7b40c1c12	D26C9B0368D0	Other students may know more than you or you might know more than them, which is a good thing. Everybody has their own ideas and opinions.	Evidence	Adequate
0bad8a32792e	D26C9B0368D0	You can't forget some students are antisocial and like to work alone. If you are one of them people, than working alone and at home is best for you because you have nobody around to bother you.	Counterclaim	Adequate
8d03b643a7c6	D26C9B0368D0	Another reason being home schooled isn't a good idea because you have to be responsible.	Claim	Adequate
2da674253e36	D26C9B0368D0	Doing your work, making sure you up, and making sure you finishing it on time. You have to make sure you get up on time, not staying asleep to long, or staying on your phone. Being at school you have to get what you need done, at home is like you know what you need done but you can do it later. Which makes you lazy, staying at home eating,sleeping,and playing on your phone makes you lazy. Its gonna make you forget that you have school to do	Evidence	Adequate
6a3a7852b2c6	D26C9B0368D0	On the other hand some students are responsible. They know what have to get done and they get it done with or without any one telling them what to do or reminding them.	Counterclaim	Adequate
632e38d5e43a	D26C9B0368D0	School is learning place where you come and get your knowledge from. Every parent should put their child in some learning program where they get taught not taught on their own. School is the most popular place in the world. Getting a education and great job is good reasons why you should come to school. Great job equals great money. Good education equals a high advance in getting in wonderful colleges. With out school you life won't be to bad but you know you can live a way better live with school.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
f5e72c087216	D282E21C2DB1	Imagine you are applying for your dream job. You are preparing for your interview, but you are not sure how to answer a potential question. Only asking your friend might not give you the best answer to the question. But if you ask multiple people that are in the same field as you, they might answer your question the best.	Lead	Effective
07819a1c930f	D282E21C2DB1	When there is a decision to be made, it is always important to ask more than one individual for advice	Position	Effective
904aa3cf1df6	D282E21C2DB1	it helps you know all the possible solutions,	Claim	Effective
9b1e3093f8c0	D282E21C2DB1	avoid bias	Claim	Effective
a703b22436b7	D282E21C2DB1	learn from others' past experiences.	Claim	Effective
5bd77e199ed0	D282E21C2DB1	You need to understand every option by knowing the pros and cons before you make your decision. This helps you understand what your getting into depending on the options. I was asked to be on a basketball team that traveled around the country. I talked with my coach, parents, and family about the offer. Their opinions helped me learn the pros and cons of this opportunity. This allowed me to know what I was going to be doing if I accepted the offer. From their assistance I was able to make a choice that benefited me and my family.	Evidence	Effective

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having others help you and giving you multiple options is a way easier to get a better future

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i know not all of might not agree with that and its fine because all people have different ideas!.

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advice could take people anywhere even if you dont believe me. But it does. having a good variety of choices is better than having none. Because the good choices could take you to a better future, better education and good career. but having none could take no where. Unless you ask for some advice trust me you wont regret it. we only live once, try to make good life deiscions by letting others give you advice.

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Have you ever had to make an important life decision? It can be very difficult, depending on the impact of your decision, to choose right away. As a result, you might ask your peers to give you advice to make the right choice. You may find that you agree with some people and disagree with others. Other times you might have to meet in the middle and find pros and cons about everyone's opinion and then make a decision with that information.

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ask multiple people for advice on your decision,

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you can gain multiple points of view,

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you might find it easier to make your decision with other opinions,

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you might find a better option through multiple opinions rather than just one.

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Everyone has a different way of thinking. Your best friends way of thinking is very different than yours. Sometimes you might have the smarter idea, sometimes they will have the smarter idea. I know if I had to make a big, life-changing decision that I would ask all of my closest friends. I can recall one time when I was making a personal decision about a year ago, and I did not know what to do. I asked my closest friends what I should do, and almost all of them responded just about how I expected them to. Most of them said they wanted to see me happy, so they encouraged me to choose the decision that would make me the happiest. Others gave me facts, pros and cons, and why they would be disappointed if I made one decision over the other. They then told me that they believed in me, and I would eventually make the right decision. Having those multiple points of view on what they thought really helped me decide on what I should do. I think if I had not have asked them for advice, I would have made a decision I would have regretted.

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Sometimes when a decision is very impactful, you can get stressed out over the choice you want to make. Asking others may make deciding easier because all you have to honestly do is listen to their ideas and decide if you agree with them or not. Then, using your common sense and their advice, you can choose the decision you believe is best for you . Also, you actually might know what you are going to choose. But you might still want to ask other people what they think because that can "confirm" that you have made the right decision.

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Let's say you have weighed your options of certain decisions that you think are the right decisions. You chose what you think, in your mind, is best. You then ask your friends for their opinion, and suddenly everyone is saying everything different than what you thought. All of your wonderful thoughts are suddenly crushed with a wrecking ball. After listening to all of their thoughts, you find some are much more brilliant than yours. You then go back and completely rethink your decisions, just because of those few opinions. After extensive thought, you decide that your original idea was bogus. When you first make a decision, even if you had thought about for a long time, the stress of making a decision quick can sometimes fog your thinking. That is why having other people's opinions can help you make the right decision, even if it is the second time trying to choose what is best for you.

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having people help you is very, very important. I believe if I did not have people help me, not even just give me advice, that I would not do my best in school. We as humans need other humans! It's just how it goes. Asking for advice is a pretty normal thing to do. When asking for advice, remember it can only positively effect you by giving you different points of view, help you make a better decision, and you possibly can find a better choice than you originally thought.

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Making decisions can be difficult when people don't have the confidence that their thinking is the best choice. This is why, when making important decisions, one tends to seek multiple opinions from others.

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Seeking multiple opinions help make a better choice

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one can look in a different perspective

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can consider the best options.

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Specifically, this is because having a new perspective can provoke more options for people to choose from. Seeking more advice from people with different thoughts can lead to more choices that one can consider. This is helpful because there is a bigger chance to have ideas that would make better decisions than the other. Also, one can consider things in a new way that they haven't thought about. If people are stuck with the one point of perspective that they have, this would not lead to another way of thinking. However, listening to other people for advice may help people to consider things in a way that they have not yet thought about. Therefore, the new way of thinking can turn things around into an opposite route of the original. Another example is that someone can propose an option that is better than you. Never think that you have the best idea, because there is always another creative mind that can think in a different perspective. One should get advice from these type of people, but continue to seek other opinions that may be better than the last. It is always useful to ask multiple people for advice because everyone has a different perspective that they look through.

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First, it is important to ask people for advice because one can get multiple useful suggestions. If you have a handful of ideas in your mind, then you can ask people for the best options and why they think that. This would help people to carefully consider the options with actual reasons that support their answer. Additionally, one can make improvements to their thoughts. By getting advice from people, one can figure out what they are lacking. By knowing what has to be revised, they can make improvements to their thinking. One would also be able to gain knowledge from people. It is possible that others know more information about the topic that is being considered. From gaining new information, this could also help figure out the options that would be better overall, when considering the new knowledge into the decision. When trying to find out the best option that is on the plate, it is helpful to ask others about their opinion.

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Considering the best option and looking into things with a new perspective can help people make better decisions. It is important to carefully consider all the options that you have, and a great way to make sure is to ask others for advice. Asking others about their opinions can clear up your path and help you easily make your choice.

Concluding Statement

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Have you ever asked someone for advice? If yes, then you know it can be a good thing. Asking for advice means to get other people's take on different options and seeing others choices. For example, teenagers ask for advice on their Instagram photos and their outfits all of the time. It helps them decide what they want to post or wear. Also, just know that there are no strict rules on how or what to ask advice for either, it is a very casual thing

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There is no harm in asking for advice and this action is a very common thing to do. Asking for advice can be very beneficial

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by having multiple options

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seeing different point of views,

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increase the chance of having a happier life.

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One time, there was a women who had a medical emergency, so she decided to go to a hospital. The hospital said she had a really bad disease, and that there was no cure. To double check that information she decided to visit another hospital, they said it was just a simple sickness and they prescribed her some medicine. She then went on with her life and she was fine, but now she knows to double check things, especially if they are going to cost a lot of money. Having multiple options can save you money and stress. In conclusion, always get a second or even a third opinion, you never know what could happen and even if nothing changes you made sure everything was okay. Having those extra opinions will save you stress and you will not have to worry.

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Having different points of views means to see how other people react and respond. When you get a new point of view you can make a pro and con check list. A pro and con check list is when you list all of the good things and list all of the bad things for that one opinion. These check list are very versatile, and can be used in many different ways. One example is, picking a restaurant to eat at, for the pros you could say, the food tastes good, but the waits are long and the service is not that great. So now you decide you do not want to eat there and you go to an even better restaurant. Another example is, for spring break you want to go on vacation, but you also want to stay home and rest. When you make a list you can decide witch one you want to do most or the one with the most pros listed. Asking others for their opinions can persuade your choices and also give you ideas. Overall, having other peoples opinions can better your life as well as theirs

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Having a good life should be enjoying what you do and be excited about where you are and how you live your life. Having others options can benefit your life by asking where to visit in the world or where to travel to. Other opinions will also, help you realize your consequences. You may not know you are making a bad choice, but by getting others intake you will realize if you are making a good or bad choice. A parent or guardian is always a person to go to if you are not sure if you are making a bad choice or not. A teacher or school counselor can help with problems too. All of these people can give you advice that will most likely help you.

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Having others opinions and in tail can only benefit you and your life. If you are indecisive you can make a pro and con check list or just listen to other peoples ideas, but make sure you decide what you think is best for you. Only you know how to improve your life, but you may just need a little help. Always try and get a second and even a third opinion. Overall, having multiple options will make your life better and help show the good and bad consequences.

Concluding Statement

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Schooling has been around for thousands of years, and, as the rest of society has evolved, the traditional schooling technique has virtually stayed the same. Children still remain at desks, listening to their teachers lecture; kids still take home worksheets for extra practice called "homework." Standardized tests are still given, and kids are still excelling. However, as time goes on, more people have begun to question this type of schooling, and why it has not changed for over 1000 years. A recent change people have suggested, with the rise of technology, is "distance learning", a way to "attend" school from the confines of ones own home.

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While this idea seems promising, it is not a good change for the schooling system because,

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for the vast majority of students, it will cause unneeded distractions,

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a less stimulating environment,

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and the inability to distinguish home and work life.

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As children grow and learn, they are more likely to choose play over work. Because of this, kids are often distracted from their assignments in school,

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whether it be with the thoughts of their Buzz Lightyear action figure they can not wait to play with or with the drama on their cell phone. When children are placed in the sterile environment of the school system, these distractions are minimized because the child's surroundings are sterile, solely containing learning materials and peers who are trying to accomplish the same task. If a child were to attempt to learn at home, no matter what age they were, they would be surrounded with the temptations of play, and, even if they had the power to restrain, it would affect their ability to concentrate and retain information.

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Continuing, the home simply does not stimulate the mind as completely as the school does.

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In a school there are hundreds of resources at a child's fingertips: libraries full of books, teachers full of knowledge, materials full of the ability to educate. While the home may have educational resources, the vast amount does not compare to that of a traditional school.

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Not only does a classroom have abundant learning materials and information, but it also has students who help each other grow and prosper in their learning environment. For hundreds of years, the traditional desk-and-chalkboard schooling system has been used, and over those years, people are still excelling and test scores are still rising. This is because the school stimulates the mind like nothing else; it allows children a place to let their curiosity wander and lead their education. To take away the school will take away the stimulation.

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Finally, a common problem found in adults is an inability to separate home and work life; this begins at a young age when children fail to make the clear distinction between home and school.

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By allowing students to participate in school from their home, it will make this distinction even less clear which will not only affect the child's present life but also his or her future life as a working adult. when there is no specific time and place for a child to learn, their home and education lives blend together, often affecting both for the worse. An example of this is seen in Tara Westover, the famous author of the memoir, Educated. Westover was home schooled but was often given little time to learn because of her home obligations. This caused her to lack education as well as the knowledge that home and school are two distinctly different things. If students were able to mix their home and school lives, the negative results of an inability to distinguish The Home and The School would far outweigh the positives.

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Many may disagree with this position, saying that this opportunity, to learn in the comfort of ones own home, would greatly benefit those who suffer from illness or other challenges that prevent them from attending school.

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However, the ratio of those who are unable to attend a traditional school to those who are is very small. Many students would take advantage of this "distance learning" opportunity and use it for an easier education rather than a better one. There are several types of accommodations one can receive for illness or any other obstacle that hinders their education; allowing any person, without such disabilities, to receive these accommodations endangers them and their education.

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Although the idea of learning from home has been widely acknowledged, it has also been widely debated. There are several positives when one looks on the surface of this idea, however when one truly delves into the logistics of such a change, they will realize that there are too many negatives that accompany it. The home is too distracting and does not allow the proper stimulation for learning that a child needs to succeed in life; the lack of a distinguishable home and school life will also harm the child as he or she matures. If a change that is supposed to bring better and more accessible schooling to children in fact causes the opposite, this change will not benefit the education system.

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People think getting advice from more than one person is to confusing to get. Some people think it's the best option. Other people that they're both right.

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So people think others ask more than one person

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more advice

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wiser advice

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you can get the best answer through others advice.

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The reason this happens is because they want more advice so they can have more knowledge on their situation. Another reason this happens is because they're more experienced than you. This is just one of possible thousands of reasons.

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The reason this happens is because they need wiser advice from wiser people for some situations. Some people have good advice, but sometimes it's not the wisest. This is another reason people ask more than one person for advice.

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Sometimes the answers you want aren't the ones you need for a situation. So you can ask more than one person if they have the answers that you need. This is another reason people ask more than one person for advice.

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So, these three reasons are because you either need answers, wise, or more advice. Every reason this stuff happens is because people just simply need advice. Other ideas are good ways to see who has the right advice. These are three of thousands of reasons, but these are a few of the reasons this happens.

Concluding Statement

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As the modern world advances in technology and media, schools need to advance with it. An outdated education system leaves little room for student growth and success; it can damper the effects of the hard work that both teachers and students put into school. However, this waste of efforts can be easily avoided by means of the updating of school policies. For example, it is growing increasingly more common for schools to offer distance learning as an option for their students. Distance learning allows students to engage in online classes and video conferencing as a way of learning from home. Therefore, students would be able to attend classes virtually from their own homes.

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Distance learning is an absolutely essential program that all schools should offer,

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it allows long-term home bound students to attend classes,

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short-term absent students to make up their school work faster,

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increases the student-technology relationship, which strengthens learning as a whole.

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Distance learning would allow long-term home bound students to learn alongside their peers, even if they are unable to physically attend school.

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Every year, thousands of students are forced to stay home for extended periods of time due to physical or mental illness or other individual reasons. These students, while they are oftentimes provided worksheets and assignments, are quite prone to falling behind in terms of the material. If they are not at school and at the lessons each and every day, it is extremely easy to lose awareness of the material being taught, especially if the only outlet for their learning is a packet of worksheets with practice problems. Without a teacher and peers, these students do not have access to immediate feedback on mistakes or teachers who are able to answer their questions. However, with distance learning, long-term home bound students would be able to work alongside their peers. They could engage in online activities and applications that would strengthen their knowledge of the material, while also allowing them to interact with their teacher and peers. Especially when it comes to video conferencing, students who cannot physically attend school would still be able to ask their teacher questions in person and potentially have private lessons. It is never a student's fault if they are unable to come to school due to an illness; therefore, it should not be difficult to learn if that is the case.

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Not only would distance learning aid long-term home bound students, but it would also help the short-term ones.

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Students stay home from school every day, whether it be from a minor illness or injury or a trip out of town. Obviously, these students are at much less risk of losing their understanding of the material, but absences still require make-up work. Students can miss lessons and lectures, project presentations, and critical study time with their peers that would better their understanding. With distance learning, a student who is well enough to work but contagious to their peers could still present a project, take a test, take notes on a lecture, and engage in class discussions all from home. It is unfair to limit a student's potential learning time based on things that they cannot control, like illnesses or travel. Furthermore, students that travel frequently would also be benefited, as they could work while on the go and review material when they have free time so as not to fall so far behind their classmates.

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Some might argue that the use of technology and distance learning would not be an effective way to educate students. There are possibilities for misuse of technology and applications and many people fear that an introduction of too much technology into education would lessen the quality of that education exponentially.

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However, there are steps that can be taken to limit off-task student activity: students could be limited to certain applications or browser extensions or be monitored by a parent or guardian

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All things considered, though, the potential for the waste of students' time in no way warrants a dismissal of distance learning. Especially when considering all of the students that would otherwise not be able to learn, the meager amount of work to set up technology restrictions for those schools who desire it is most definitely worth it in the long run. Furthermore, simply because some students may abuse the power of distance learning does not mean that it should not be offered to those who truly need it.

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Distance learning should be made available to all applicable students because it allows for long-term home bound students to attend classes, short-term absent students to make up their school work faster, and increases the student-technology relationship. Distance learning programs would not only help the students in keeping up with their studies, but also teachers in supplying their students with adequate learning resources for all situations. It has become even more prevalent now; as the COVID-19 virus spreads internationally, more and more schools and universities are transitioning to virtual learning for the safety of students, teachers, and staff. Truly, distance learning ensures the safety of those involved without sacrificing any of the benefits of a physical classroom. So long as advancements like distance learning continue to be made in the future, education will maintain its vital and prevalent role in all students' lives.

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Most high school students struggle with waking up on time or having a good nights rest. This often will cause a lack of focus and a drop in their academic success. There should be other options for students to still get their education without having to actually go to school. Having a way to work from home eliminate those factors and could possibly better students in their schoolwork.

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Therefor, students would benefit from distance learning

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it will help those in need of a flexed schedule,

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those with social anxiety,

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for those with parents who simple believe in home schooling.

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There are some people that can't be in a crowed of people because it causes them to get anxious.

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There are also people with other types of disorders that may lead them to need to be in the hospitals or just unable to function well with other people. People who are in situations like this can benefit from being able to take online classes because it can take away the discomfort of being around a large group of people. I have a friend who has social anxiety, and it cause her to have panic attacks when she even sees a lot of people all at once. It would be a lot easier for her to be able to work from home so she will be able to be focused on her work, and not scared of being in a group.

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Now some will say, people with those conditions need more human contact and all students need to be in a interactive classroom setting.

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This is just not true, if you are someone who won't be able to work with a large group going to school will defeat its purpose because you won't be able to even learn properly. Also forcing someone with anxiety in those types of situation can just make it worse. Proving how helpful away from school leaning can be.

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Additionally, Not only can this make students lives easier but parents as well. There are parents out there that prefer their children be home schooled because they don't like how the school systems are run.

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But those parents may not have the time to be their children teacher. In a situation like this having distant learning can give that child a way to learn at home with out their parent having to stop working to become their teacher. This also makes the parent feel safe knowing their child is at home and away from a the safety concerns that come from being in a school. Along with the annoying phone calls and emails about their children's behavior or any other concerns the school usually will try contact get in contact about. My mother for one, is hates getting those calls throughout the day or emails flooding her inbox. This is a solution that can better everyone involved.

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Finally, having the ability to take classes online will give students the opportunity to still take care of their other daily obligations.

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Many student have to work so they can provide for their families. Others have to take care of their siblings. My cousin is one for example, My aunt passed away on my cousins 18th birthday while she was a senior. With no other family living close to her she was forced to be the guardian of her younger sibling. Having to work and take care of other people can be a full time job on its on, but still needing to finish school in the process makes it just that much more complicated. Having the chance to take classes online would make anyone in situations similar to those life much easier. This showing the benefits this distant leaning can have for certain students.

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In conclusion students would benefit from distance learning because depending on their situation that option will give them a chance to see what better works for them. And in cases like social anxiety, safety concerns of parents and needing a flexed schedule it can help them still get an education in a way that is better for them. Being that not everyone has the same life and people have different way of getting information. This simply being an option can be extremely beneficial for students who need it.

Concluding Statement

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No, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home. There is a lot of action students have to take from being home school.

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For example the state has to make sure their doing their work instead of sleeping and lacking around.

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You have to be responsible and be aware of your work

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I'm not saying all students can't attend online classes at home

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but most cannot.

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Going to school helps you learn and understand things better

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if you dont get something, you can ask for help and the teacher can explain the problem to you. You also have a person teaching you instead of you reading things by yourself and trying to understand. Being in class accurate and up can keep you from falling asleep instead of sitting around at home eating and sleeping all day

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In addition of other students because i can't speak for everybody, some students can handle that and learn way better on their own than having somebody teach them.

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School groups is also another reason how student learn faster and better. Working in groups help you learn more from other students.

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Other students may know more than you or you might know more than them, which is a good thing. Everybody has their own ideas and opinions.

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You can't forget some students are antisocial and like to work alone. If you are one of them people, than working alone and at home is best for you because you have nobody around to bother you.

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Another reason being home schooled isn't a good idea because you have to be responsible.

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Doing your work, making sure you up, and making sure you finishing it on time. You have to make sure you get up on time, not staying asleep to long, or staying on your phone. Being at school you have to get what you need done, at home is like you know what you need done but you can do it later. Which makes you lazy, staying at home eating,sleeping,and playing on your phone makes you lazy. Its gonna make you forget that you have school to do

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On the other hand some students are responsible. They know what have to get done and they get it done with or without any one telling them what to do or reminding them.

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School is learning place where you come and get your knowledge from. Every parent should put their child in some learning program where they get taught not taught on their own. School is the most popular place in the world. Getting a education and great job is good reasons why you should come to school. Great job equals great money. Good education equals a high advance in getting in wonderful colleges. With out school you life won't be to bad but you know you can live a way better live with school.

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Imagine you are applying for your dream job. You are preparing for your interview, but you are not sure how to answer a potential question. Only asking your friend might not give you the best answer to the question. But if you ask multiple people that are in the same field as you, they might answer your question the best.

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When there is a decision to be made, it is always important to ask more than one individual for advice

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it helps you know all the possible solutions,

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avoid bias

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learn from others' past experiences.

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You need to understand every option by knowing the pros and cons before you make your decision. This helps you understand what your getting into depending on the options. I was asked to be on a basketball team that traveled around the country. I talked with my coach, parents, and family about the offer. Their opinions helped me learn the pros and cons of this opportunity. This allowed me to know what I was going to be doing if I accepted the offer. From their assistance I was able to make a choice that benefited me and my family.

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