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eee7b51f765c | D7B12358DBA3 | Although some students lack a healthy domestic environment | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8ba39db9c7a6 | D7B12358DBA3 | online classes are an additional option for students to take. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
4628cda29450 | D7B12358DBA3 | Many students enjoy taking traditional in person school classes because they can escape an unhealthy or distracting home environment | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c5c4b563804c | D7B12358DBA3 | but distance learning simply exists as an additional option for students to take advantage of. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
03098dc42502 | D7B12358DBA3 | Students can choose to take online classes or not depending on their situation and preference. While some students have distracting homes, other students can benefit from online classes as it may provide a quiet and less distracting atmosphere. Students tend to get distracted by classmates at school, so online classes may increase productivity as students can focus more on their work.
| Evidence | Effective |
febc99ad9c80 | D7B12358DBA3 | The classes offered at each school varies. Students may want to enroll in a specific class but there can be a wait list due to the popularity of the class or it may not be offered at the school. | Evidence | Effective |
8cc13bf76e31 | D7B12358DBA3 | Distance learning allows students the opportunity to take classes which would otherwise not be available. | Claim | Effective |
d6a0448b7315 | D7B12358DBA3 | At Generic_School, AP Latin is not a guaranteed class every year. It is entirely dependent on the amount of students who express interest in the class and sign up. When scheduling classes for next year, I requested to take AP Latin, however, if the class will not be available, I will take the class online. With this option of taking online classes, my education will not be hindered or limited. Students should have the opportunity to take whichever class they wish without any restrictions or limitations. Distance learning effectively prevents this situation from occurring with the availability and different offerings of classes. | Evidence | Effective |
e98e403fcc26 | D7B12358DBA3 | The argument can be made that attending classes from home does not allow students to develop communication and social skills because of the decrease in social interaction. | Counterclaim | Effective |
63cac5a8cd30 | D7B12358DBA3 | However, students can develop and hone these skills with continuing to take in person classes at school. | Rebuttal | Effective |
1e847f16661e | D7B12358DBA3 | Online classes can be taken in addition or in combination with traditional classes at school. | Evidence | Effective |
002644e86e26 | D7B12358DBA3 | Distance learning can enhance education, increase productivity with its more comfortable environment, and expand course selection opportunities for students, but online classes still remain an additional option for students. Students extremely benefit from online classes. Schools must promote and encourage students to take online classes or at the very least, ensure students are aware of this opportunity as an alternative to in person classes. Distance learning provides numerous benefits, and students who take advantage of online classes will have a more enriched education experience. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
038ae1771910 | D8728E6AF814 | When you are asking someone about what you should do in a certain situation, you value their opinions and statements but are they the only person you should be asking? | Lead | Effective |
c9f200469de6 | D8728E6AF814 | Talking and asking for advice from multiple sources is always the way to go when you need help. Just think, using one persons experience is nothing compared to a range of different experiences, backgrounds, thoughts, ideas, etc. | Position | Effective |
4288b67d0d9e | D8728E6AF814 | If you ask multiple people for advice you would get tons of point of views you have never seen or even thought of, | Claim | Effective |
033ac5561045 | D8728E6AF814 | help you think clearly and put things into perspective just a little more | Claim | Effective |
0c4764a1b054 | D8728E6AF814 | youll be able to point things out that youve just glanced over. | Claim | Effective |
df57fb535abf | D8728E6AF814 | Asking different people advice on a certain subject will provide you will an immense amount of stuff you didnt talk about and or stuff you didnt even think about. Bringing in different point of views into a two or more person situation will help you decide on whats the best choice to make. Talking to other people will also allow an opportunity for the other person to give you important key facts to your situation. They might bring up past experiences they have had or that their friend has had in the past, they might even be in the same position as you are right now. In the end no matter how hard or difficult your situation is its always better to get extra help and advice along the way. | Evidence | Effective |
739e977c77f1 | D8728E6AF814 | Having other people around and helping you getting through this will put things into perspective and guide you more along the way. Keeping your mind clear of any false and stray details will help as long as you have a group of people always having your back. | Evidence | Adequate |
8442f75c94ad | D8728E6AF814 | Keeping people around you to support and help you see things through will ultimately benefit your situation entirely. Weather you are having problems with a friend, school, home or whatever the case may be thinking things through with a calm breath and some time to yourself for you can just process how you are feeling will benefit you in the end. Having a healthy and great group of friends will offer you the best advice of how to fix anything you are going through. | Evidence | Adequate |
27ffded873ab | D8728E6AF814 | having multiple people to talk to when you are stuck is a great way to open up different points of views, help you point things out and not to mention help you think clearly about your situation. Only having one person to talk to is great and all but at the end of the day you want more people to talk and ask for advice by so you can fix whatever is bothering you and move on with your life. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e0a50111c92e | D8C3DD3A74F1 | Other's say that students will not benefit by taking classes from online or video conferencing. | Lead | Adequate |
684f7b171dcb | D8C3DD3A74F1 | taking online classes are helpful to students who are not able to attend real classes. | Position | Adequate |
ede443b79407 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | Some students, may find it hard to actually go to school. | Claim | Adequate |
cce0f8c20a52 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | These classes are there for, students who might have serious sickness or a serious issue. They will get the education they need like every other student regardless to any problem. It might be different from a real class but, it helps the people in need. Some students might be going through stuff, for example getting bullied in school and, not being able to go back to face negativity, others will make up their minds to stay away from something like that. | Evidence | Adequate |
ca0a4b3ec6d4 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | Some people might say that you are running away from a problem | Counterclaim | Adequate |
5a1866db1c08 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | but, that probably was not "your" intention. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
396528594412 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | Others might also take online classes due to being sick and, not being able to go out without the help of someone so, a student will probably stay home and also get the help they need. | Evidence | Adequate |
1711c944987e | D8C3DD3A74F1 | The problem will not always function around critical conditions, because there are college students who take online classes and 99% of them are doing fine. Some people do not learn better online and some do but, that's fine because taking online classes are not by force, and students have the right to choose what can help them learn. | Evidence | Adequate |
d651a2181157 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | There is a lot of reasons why online classes are not good and, a lot of reasons why it might be helpful to other students and not all. | Claim | Ineffective |
784dc0f92f87 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | Some of these reasons are, transportation but that's not really common though, it can be an issue. Some students also find online classes easier because, it is basic steps and, instead of waking up every morning going to class you can just simply stay home and get the work done. Another reason why other's find real classes helpful or beneficial than, online classes might be based on their learning strategies for intents, learning better when taught to in person even though, online classes do the same with videos taught step by step. Another reason might be notes taking because, some students learn better when taking notes in class and,later on doing an assignment by looking at these notes but then, online classes is kind of similar to real classes, it is just the fact that there is no teacher teaching it in a classroom but doing it online. | Evidence | Adequate |
d1fa20a98d5a | D8C3DD3A74F1 | There are many ways both real classes and online classes are beneficial and ways they both might not be as helpful, but online classes are much easier and less stressful. Even know schools and teacher's a sign their students homework's where the computer does half the work and the teacher does the grading and a little teaching. | Evidence | Adequate |
0696c7928964 | D8C3DD3A74F1 | So, i do not see the point in going to school and taking these computer classes when you can easily stay home, study , and get your work done by taking online classes. It is an option for students to attend real classes or online classes, but of course it will be based of the way every student learn. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6f16bc282bfc | D9A9EEDB9D0C | Someone asked me for my opinion on a problem she was having the other day and well I gave it to her, but after I saw her go up to two other people and ask same thing and I felt like I didnt give the right answer, couple days go by and she comes up to me and says my advice worked! I asked her "how many people did you talk to" she said "4 I took bits of what everyone told me and used it". | Lead | Adequate |
16f7da23bbd6 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | I think you should ask 3-5 people there opinion on a problem. | Position | Adequate |
2020a0f24370 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | That way you get more advice and more ways to resolve whatever your looking to resolve | Claim | Adequate |
a75bb2813517 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | even if you tell your close friend about the problem and there advice doesnt help at least you know you have someone that'll talk with you, | Claim | Adequate |
d594ffc7765d | D9A9EEDB9D0C | also if you ask for advice and it doesnt solve the problem you have to ask more people and tell the first person there advice didnt help | Claim | Adequate |
397affcdb304 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | If you have a problem ask! if you need advice on something ask 3-5 people for there opinion that way you get multiple sources telling you things that may help you make a better choice | Claim | Adequate |
34b87a25bfb4 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | Take cooking as an example Gordon Ramsey had 4 mentors to get where he is today if he didnt have all 4 who knows what kind of chef he'd be today. When you ask 5 people you can fit there opinions together and get a better outcome. Kid President once said "Use your brain". I bring this up because 5 opinions is stronger than 1. It's using more brain power! | Evidence | Adequate |
ae65a1183e78 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | Even if there advice doesnt help, you still know that you can talk to people about what your going through | Claim | Adequate |
94190bcfddfd | D9A9EEDB9D0C | When people especially your friends know your having problems they'll reach out and ask about how you are and whats going on in your life. 1,000's of people die to suicide every year from not reaching out for help. Knowing that someone is always there is an amazing thing to know. When I have a problem I have 3 friends I always ask and it gets resolved in a short time. | Evidence | Adequate |
0d85c968696d | D9A9EEDB9D0C | If you ask for advice and it doesnt solve the problem you have to ask more people and tell the first person there advice didnt help. | Claim | Adequate |
212e33019bb4 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | Think about it instead of failing to solve your problem then going back to square one of asking then doing just start the process by asking 5 people and trying all 5 if the others dont work. If you have 5 ways of doing something and they all dont work then it may not be fixable but keep asking 5 those dont work 5 more just keep trying to solve. When the person you originally asked comes to you and says "So what happened" you have to tell them there advice didnt help which is a problem in itself for some people. When someone tells you that your advice didnt work you sometimes have that urge to argue with them which wont help the situation at all. | Evidence | Adequate |
2ac9b8d49326 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | Yeah you may say "more opinions will make you confused about which advice to pick therefore leaving you with another problem to solve" | Counterclaim | Adequate |
093469936988 | D9A9EEDB9D0C | But the solution to that is by taking bits of each piece of advice and complete the puzzle | Rebuttal | Adequate |
ff391aaf86ad | D9A9EEDB9D0C | I think you should ask 3-5 people there opinion on a problem. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a09d49103ca7 | D9B24103EA38 | A student lounges on his couch, eating cereal while listening to his professor give a lecture. While this scene may evoke a feeling of a relaxed learning environment, many, if not all students would actually find it much harder to experience a good quality education from home. | Lead | Adequate |
36fb51bdd8c3 | D9B24103EA38 | By attending school from home, students would be unfocused and miss out on opportunities that only a physical school can provide. A school provides a specified location completely dedicated to learning. | Position | Effective |
93a8fabb7e55 | D9B24103EA38 | Students from all over get together and interact, learning not only the course material, but life skills in human interaction. | Evidence | Adequate |
51981d7b700d | D9B24103EA38 |
Many homes that house one or more students are normally very busy place. Take an average middle class family, around two parents and three children. At least one parent has work, so they are away for they majority of the day. The other parent must now be the one to shuttle the students to doctors appointments, and cannot leave them home. The parent would have to decide between taking their children to everywhere the parent goes, and distracting the children from education, or leaving them home alone. Either the students would not be able to focus on their work, or the parent would not get anything useful done. Say they had a nanny to watch the children while the parents work. Now the children have to be impossibly restrained to keep themselves from bothering each other. Imagine trying to focus on a physics lecture while trying to stop a young child from coming into your room screaming | Evidence | Effective |
ecee8625ae1b | D9B24103EA38 | . Even if the conditions at home are completely perfect, a student needs to somehow remain completely focused. A screen with colors and sounds coming out of it does not hold one responsible as well as an in person teacher. | Claim | Effective |
a0bc031b329e | D9B24103EA38 | The distractions could range from "just taking a break" to "just getting some fresh air" to "I'm just going to go to the movies". There is no real way the teacher could stop them. Many students lack self-control, or need to be taught it. These students would never learn that they can not just leave because something bores them. All, but especially young students would find focusing extremely difficult when not being held accountable. | Evidence | Effective |
5f075a0b57b3 | D9B24103EA38 |
Suppose the distractions are not an issue. A student sits down at his computer, switches it on, and is greeted by a neon light and artificial sounds. After the lecture, the student reaches out, switches the screen off, and takes a nap. This seems completely fine, but the student is missing a very crucial step; actual human interaction. This is vital for any functioning adult. No matter what job one has, they will always have to interact with another human. | Evidence | Effective |
304eea6fbc3e | D9B24103EA38 | If a students life consists of just wake up, eat, watch a lecture, do the work, eat, go to sleep, then they miss out on human interaction other than their direct family for nearly eighteen years. That is absolutely not an ideal trade for the luxury of learning from home.
| Claim | Effective |
73affb8ea8b8 | D9B24103EA38 | Some classes are altogether impossible to attend online. | Claim | Effective |
cd3e0e600494 | D9B24103EA38 | How would any musician learn to play in a group? Would they turn up the computer volume all the way just to hear a few other people? How would they play together if there is a delay in transmission? That completely rules out all of the musical department. What about workshop classes? Are the students expected to purchase thousands of dollars of machinery just to do a school project? Now the only classes available online are the ones that just pump your head full of words and facts. Nearly all schools also have extracurricular sports. These sports are much cheaper and easier to participate in than private clubs. Online, students can not exactly throw a baseball to each other. They would instead have to pay hundreds of dollars, even if they made they very selective tryouts. | Evidence | Effective |
b306af79ef82 | D9B24103EA38 | After reviewing the negatives of the situation, it is apparent that they outweigh the positives. Just for the convenience of not leaving ones bed to take a class, one would have to give up human interaction, easily accessible activities, and the ability to distinguish a place of work from a place of rest. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c94b31657c14 | DAC85E32DCED | Sticky situations, we've all been through one of those in our lives. It may not always be a sticky situation, instead, just a tough decision your going to have to make. Making your own decision can lead to either a positive outcome or a negative outcome, but in order to prevent that you can talk to more than one person before making a decision. | Lead | Effective |
92292f909dd2 | DAC85E32DCED | Talking to more than one person before a choice or decision can be beneficial in many ways. | Position | Effective |
c4af9a3d29dc | DAC85E32DCED | Asking others before a though choice is scientifically proven that you will most likely end up making the right decision according to students at Howard University | Evidence | Adequate |
9b54481fce7f | DAC85E32DCED | For example, Bill Gates at a young age used to work with Steve Jobs who was a very successful businessman behind the company Apple, and Steve Jobs didnt quite acknowledge a young,bright,open-minded,intelligent
Bill Gates. Bill Gates knew that he was very smart but he had a really tough choice to make, that choice was to either surprise the world and make his own dynasty out of a company or stick with
Steve Job's Apple, What came to Bill Gates mind was that he wanted to stay with Steve Jobs
Because he was already very popular and high marketing, but before making a decision he went on and asked a few people and those people had a thought in mind that Bill Gates is very smart and that with his knowledge and study he could easily thrash Steve Jobs. Bill Gates listened to his friends and after years of work and study he made his own Company Microsoft and shocked the world and is now recognized as one of the most successful businessman in the world and one of the most wealthy as well. | Evidence | Effective |
f9ac4ff9c372 | DAC85E32DCED | when you ask people to assist you on a tough choice your going to have to make you will most likely end up making the right choice. | Claim | Effective |
0d2475fdb64b | DAC85E32DCED | Not asking for advice before leaping onto a solution can make you regret it later on. | Claim | Adequate |
6daae433853b | DAC85E32DCED | Now say if you were shopping at a local convenience store and one day you saw a bunch of money on the floor, you have no idea where it came from but still decided to take some money. Then the next day you think of all the bad outcomes that can happen all because of the money you decided to take secretly, what you could have done to make a better choice was to ask multiple people or at least someone else. Because that way the person could have told you to ask the cashier at the store if they knew someone reported that they lost their money or to just leave it their and maybe the owner of the money could comeback and take back their money. But that still can leave you with a feeling of regret, so what you can do next time is ask someone to give you advice before making an action so you don't end up with a feeling of regret. | Evidence | Effective |
d841073d8e15 | DBC53691CD0A | Do you believe that your child should grow and learn with skills that are needed for everyday life? Attending school is very beneficial, and can prepare you for the working environment that you will have to face in the future | Lead | Adequate |
a88c4da7925f | DBC53691CD0A | Some may say that online classes can be convenient for a student who has a busy work schedule because they can attend classes on their own time, and won't have to spend most of the hours that are in a day to go to the actual school | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0847d714667c | DBC53691CD0A | I believe that students would not benefit from attending online classes | Position | Adequate |
db97ccad7e81 | DBC53691CD0A | because they wouldn't build social interaction skills, | Claim | Adequate |
f01701ba9447 | DBC53691CD0A | they wouldn't know how to function in a work environment, | Claim | Effective |
94422cadb0b7 | DBC53691CD0A | and they wouldn't have the work motivation to complete their assignments.
| Claim | Effective |
ed051243197d | DBC53691CD0A | An important reason that causes online classes to be unbeneficial is the inability to create social interaction skills. | Claim | Effective |
8fe19e09247b | DBC53691CD0A | When students attend school, they have to communicate with other students and teachers. Therefore, students learn how to correctly interact with others, and build good relationships. However if a student is taking classes online, they wouldn't be obligated to actually communicate with peers in person. Having the ability to talk to others is a very important skill for their working careers in the future. During a career you will be forced to interact with many people such as, co-workers, costumers, and clients. Therefore, attending school is a great way to obtain those skills by talking to other students and their teachers. Furthermore, It is also a great way to build friendships with kids their age. Having friends can change the overall experience to a childhood because it can lead to a life necessity called "fun". Life wouldn't be the same if I didn't have people that I could call my friend because learning can be more interesting if you're experiencing it with people you know and trust. Lastly when a student can build relationships with their teachers, not only does it give you an easier learning environment, but it also provides an adult that you can ask questions or talk to. I have good relationships with many of my teachers, therefore allowing me to have a great experience in school. I am able to go to them if I ever need something or if I'm confused about a certain topic. Relationships with teachers can also "make or break" your experiences in your classes. When you look up to your teacher, it's more likely for you to want to learn what they are teaching because you have respect for them. Overall, having social interaction skills is very important for a good learning experience, and for everyday life in the future. | Evidence | Effective |
8563f6226e78 | DBC53691CD0A | Another life necessity that a student would not obtain by taking online classes is being able to function in a work environment. | Claim | Effective |
8dc027b2fe6a | DBC53691CD0A | Many jobs and careers require you to work under a schedule. This being said, if you are used to working at your own pace and on your own time, you will not be prepared to be in the working environment. Unfortunately, this can lead to the loss of your job and other opportunities because you can be considered unreliable. Furthermore if a student is used to working in a quiet area in their home, they can be at risk of not knowing how to handle busy and loud work environments. This can restrain them from being able to complete any of their work, therefore making them insufficient. When a place of business gets extremely busy, a lot of stress can be put on the employees. Attending school allows a person to be introduced to those types of conditions at an early stage, therefore making you more prepared for them than students who take online classes. Online classes do not prepare you for the real world, which can lead to a rude awakening in the future. | Evidence | Effective |
fce7b67cd500 | DBC53691CD0A | Lastly, a lack of work motivation is another important reason to online classes being unbeneficial compared to going to a school. Students can find it hard to get the motivation to complete their assignments | Claim | Effective |
c114d2096166 | DBC53691CD0A | With the flexibility of online classes, students can start getting the idea of pushing school work aside to focus on other things. Unfortunately this mentality can get extremely out of hand, for their grades can start to suffer and their work load can pile up. Many students experience this chain reaction, therefore causing a lot of stress that can lead them to giving up. Having the access to attending a school decreases the ability to start this chain reaction because facing a teacher due to you not completing your work can be intimidating. Furthermore, going to your classes in person also gives you more work motivation because most of time you don't have the option to sit around and do nothing. Your teachers encourage you to "use your time wisely" when you are given the opportunity to complete your assignments during class, therefore giving students the extra push to actually do their work. When students are able to work on their own schedule due to taking online classes, it opens the opportunity to be lazy and not complete school work. This leads to students drowning in work because of their lack of work motivation.
| Evidence | Effective |
e1cd5dc3c3f6 | DBC53691CD0A | I think that students would not benefit from attending classes from home because they wouldn't learn the ability to interact with people, they wouldn't do well in a work environment, and they wouldn't have the motivation to complete their work. Students who take online classes are isolated, therefore they are at larger risk to having rough experiences in the future due to not being prepared for the real world. They will not have the skills needed for everyday life, which can lead them to failure. However, attending an actual school gives you these life skills, therefore giving you a better chance of being successful in the career of your choice. You are also given the opportunity to making friends who can last a lifetime, and building relationships with teachers who can guide you in the right direction to being successful in life as well. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
982bec216adb | DBCC1F8F92B5 | Talking with more than one person can make decisions have a more clear best choice. | Position | Adequate |
69f40589045d | DBCC1F8F92B5 | Seeking advice from multiple people allows for learning from others' experiences, | Claim | Effective |
fb4a89ec7aca | DBCC1F8F92B5 | more inclusive actions | Claim | Effective |
f16d86cbf71c | DBCC1F8F92B5 | different perspectives on issues. | Claim | Effective |
b57cdd1f0762 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | These all help a person make the best decision, and lead to the most prosperity. | Evidence | Adequate |
5c96b5533cd3 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | When I was deciding whether I should apply to Awesome Math Summer Program, a prestigious math overnight camp at Cornell University, I was debating if this would be a worthwhile experience for me. It would have been the first ever time I stayed away from home by myself, and I was nervous I wouldn't make any friends. The camp was also highly priced, and I didn't want to put financial burden on my parents, who were already paying for my brother's expensive private college. However, Awesome Math Summer Program is known for the classes it offers, all of which would greatly benefit me as a competitive math student. Many of the courses there were perfect for my math level, and would provide a challenge I wasn't getting in normal school math. Many of my friends said it was a great experience, but I didn't know if they were providing me the whole truth on what the camp was like. I was very conflicted on what my plan of action should be, so I turned to another person who I knew had past experience and could guide me through my decision making. My brother had already attended Awesome Math Summer Program a few years back, and he said although it wasn't suited for his style of learning, it would be a great fit for me. The lessons were more problem solving based, which was my favorite type of class. His knowledge of the program allowed me to make the best decision regarding my application to Awesome Math Summer Program, which in the end I did apply and get accepted to. My brother's advice from his own personal experiences gave me a look into a camp I wouldn't have had otherwise, and allowed me to have one of the best summers of my life. His and others' advice played a large role in me attending this program, and also have made me more including of others. | Evidence | Effective |
d2cbfd31c64c | DBCC1F8F92B5 |
One of the biggest flaws I have is that it is extremely difficult for me to focus on what others need over my own needs. It can be hard to know how to include everyone so they benefit from my actions, as well as make sure no one is being left out | Evidence | Adequate |
ec6b120f60a4 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | In sixth grade, I was student council president of my school, and one of the topics many students wanted me to address was on bullying. I didn't know how exactly I could help students going through this horrible ordeal, because many victims of bullying don't like to stand up for fear of more shame. When I consulted with teachers, students, and my parents, they all had an overarching idea of focusing on kindness and the prevention of bullying, instead of bullying itself. This was something I never thought of before and never would have been able to think of, but with the aid of many others, I was able to form a new idea for approaching bullying in my school. I established a wristband kindness program, where wristbands were given out to students who were seen doing kind acts, such as helping another student without being asked or holding the door open at recess. When those students saw another student doing a thoughtful deed, they would pass on the bracelet and continue the spread of kindness. This motivated many young children to become more generous and understanding, a trait that will take them far in life. This idea wouldn't have even have been possible if it weren't for all the kids and teachers that helped me decide what I should focus on as student council president, as well as giving me the ideas for the project. I was able to develop a more inclusive program from multiple opinions, which also helps provide different viewpoints in conflicts. | Evidence | Effective |
cc7d53b616f1 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | The judicial branch has the complicated job of making some of the most difficult decisions in our country. During the Supreme Court case of Hazelwood v. Kuhlmeir, the justices had to decide if school officials could censor the school newspaper, or if this was violation of First Amendment Rights. They worked together to deliberate the most Constitutionally fair outcome, and formed the majority opinion based off of what most justices thought was the best ruling | Evidence | Effective |
3c851648d627 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | Each justice was able to provide their own perspective on the issue, which is especially important for court cases since everyone has different ideas on what is fair. | Claim | Effective |
ab81a01353a2 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | In the end, they ruled the First Amendment did not prohibit schools from censoring the school newspaper. They were able to reach this ruling from countless hours spent in debate of the conflict, and make a fair decision based off of everyone's unique perspective. The opinions from multiple individuals help make the most just decision in a court case, as well as help decision making in real life. | Evidence | Effective |
ae0cd99af710 | DBCC1F8F92B5 | Most decisions do not require much in-depth analyzing, but there are some can be very hard and draining to make. No matter how exhausting this can be though, there are always methods to make decision making more bearbale. One way to make this easier is to seek the advice of more than one person, as this can lead to the best choice. Others who have already been through what you are going to can give helpful advice, as well as make more inclusive decisions and give a different view on issues. From this, a person can take the best and most fair actions to help them succeed. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8cec30358f5c | DC364EC72968 | Reasons why you should ask for advice are so you dont make anyone mad, Get the job thats good and fits you well and so it dousnt knock you down and ruin your life. You don't want to mess up you future so ask for help and choose wisely. Never do something so suddenly without thinking because you might hurt yourself physically or mentally or other always think beofre acting. | Position | Ineffective |
e151a917e2f5 | DC364EC72968 | People should ask for multiple opinions because often their sudden choices could come back to haunt them later in life. | Claim | Adequate |
60b289666710 | DC364EC72968 | For example someone could decide to get a tattoo but they didnt ask people how it could effect them or if it was a good idea or not, then later they cant get the job they want. Later in life they might regret it or start disliking the tattoo or the decision that they made that they didnt get multiple opinions on. Because as you get older your mind set will change and the people around you will change, not everyone thinks the same though, some people might think an idea is good but a couple think its bad. If it is the idea is health hazardous then it could come back and might make you have health problems and maybe even die earlier. So the point is to always ask for advice so it doesnt come back later to ruin your life. | Evidence | Adequate |
4b349d0f2f50 | DC364EC72968 | Not getting multiple opinions could make your family mad at you for not asking them and getting their opinion on why they think its good or bad. | Claim | Adequate |
b493bc63b31c | DC364EC72968 | They might hate what the idea was and since they were not asked or told about it they feel betrayed. But if you asked for advice or help they might help you make a better decision for yourself. Everyone wants to make the right decision but if you need a little help sometimes ask someone who already does the thing you want to do, or ask your family what would be best for yourself. If you dont ask you could make the wrong decision and and end up needing your family for help later and living with your parents. So you never want it to fail that bad so if your hesitating to do something ask someone should i do this and why? Always ask people for advice and help because if you dont it could ruin your life. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5710eb73c713 | DC364EC72968 | Another reason you should ask for advice to make a better decision is so you can get more informed on the topic. | Claim | Adequate |
7cfb6d61f602 | DC364EC72968 | People that have done the job before can teach you and tell you tips and tricks, That is good because you might be good and some of the things youll have to do. Knowing the job is everything so if you can find out all the helpful tips you'll be good. They can also tell you what there favorite part of the job was and what they had to do a lot. That can be helpful because if you love working outside and on the job for example you have to work outside a lot maybe you should consider it. They can also tell u what they had to do a lot that they hated that can help because if you hate something that you have to do for work you're not going to want to do it and maybe you should consider something else. Most people want to have a job they like not a job they like part of but most of the time hate their job. So you should always asked a experienced person that has done what you want to do and ask for there advice if you should apply for the job or not. | Evidence | Adequate |
2de2116c4934 | DC364EC72968 | In all I think people should ask for advice and at least 3 people before making a decision so it doesn't come back to knock you down and slow life down for you, so no one will get mad over the decision your making and ask a professional before saying yes or no to see if the job will be good for you. Because we all want the best for eachother if someone does ask you for advice tell them what you think and how you feel because later you might need to ask them for advice. That is why you should always ask for more then 1 person for advice and ask for advice or help in general. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2a3d5a56a15b | DD1D41CC5388 | The other day I asked my mother for advice about boys. I think that I am coming-of-age, and I want to know how to get a guy's attention. I asked my mother, "How can I get guys to notice me?" My mother looked at me puzzled for a few minutes. Later, she responds with, "Honey, all you have to do is flirt!" Little did she know, flirting was not in my vocabulary. Soon after, my sister comes into the room, from eavesdropping, and says, "That's not true, mom! You need to listen to me, sister. All you have to do is be yourself. If a guy doesn't like you for who you are, then they aren't worth your time." All of a sudden my grandma, who hasn't been out on a date for a while, says, "Darling, don't listen to them. What you have to do is act dumb. Guys will be chasing your tail if you do that." Everyone started to bicker back and forth for a while. After gathering all of the advice I got, I started thinking,
"I know what to do!" | Lead | Effective |
5f1db326d0e6 | DD1D41CC5388 | getting advice from more than one person has better outcomes. | Position | Effective |
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