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cc4a6100241e | D282E21C2DB1 | All people have a bias that is favored in some situations. It is human nature! These thoughts can be pushed aside though. The simple solution is asking multiple people for advice. It sounds easy, but most of the time, we still make the same mistake. We put our personal thoughts in the way of making the best decision. | Evidence | Adequate |
982b771692ef | D282E21C2DB1 | We can learn from their mistake or build off their previous choice. Again, the only way to learn these stories is to ask more than one person for advice. People that base their advice from what they have experienced normally have a good reason for a certain solution. People do have different experiences, though. This is important to know so that we can see the differences and similarities of their past. Their opinion might strengthen your own and give a reason to choose a different option. | Evidence | Adequate |
0b06d4526fce | D282E21C2DB1 | We all want to make the right choice when we come across a problem. The only way to do this is to ask multiple people for advice. Asking more than one individual helps us know the options, stay away from bias, and learn from others' past experiences. Once we do this, it is our turn to choose what is the best choice. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
32fddac8b014 | D30614F0911F | Some schools are considering the idea to offer distance learning for students to attend classes from home. Many students can benefit by considering this new idea for students to take classes from home by the way of online or videos. Although, many other students would not be agree with this idea. | Lead | Adequate |
fc2d2584d214 | D30614F0911F | I am not agree with the idea for students to attend classes from home. | Position | Adequate |
df6fbe64a305 | D30614F0911F | First, if the students are in their houses they would have more distraction, | Claim | Adequate |
89fad007a753 | D30614F0911F | for example; they can get distracted by the food, many time food is a big distraction for students to concentrate in classes. They can also get distract because of the television, they can see something interesting in the TV and they would quickly get distracted. Also one of the biggest distraction for everyone is the cellphone. If a student is taking classes at home; no one would be responsible to tell him/she not to use their cellphones. | Evidence | Adequate |
88e88f6203ac | D30614F0911F | Second, they would not take it seriously. | Claim | Adequate |
5d984091d97d | D30614F0911F | They would feel free because they are in their houses. Sometimes they might take the classes; and sometimes they would not take them because no one would be telling them to do it. They would feel allow to do whatever they want because they would not have the rules like in a classroom. If the student is in a classroom; he/she receive more information, more examples, more attention, and more help. Every teacher has rules in their classrooms; rules that help students to be successful. | Evidence | Adequate |
a1fb30162d56 | D30614F0911F | And third
They would not be able to learn as much as they would in a classroom. | Claim | Adequate |
b081f4eead2d | D30614F0911F | They would not be able to ask questions and get the answer they would need. They would not receive as much attention as they need. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6a230dd6aeba | D30614F0911F | However, many students support the idea for students to attend classes from home. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
1cfd008b46e7 | D30614F0911F | It can be considered a good idea for many students; because they would not be traveling from one place to another; it would safe them time. Also many times when there is a bad weather outside; many schools cancel classes; because they can't travel. And by considering this idea for students for students to attend classes from home would help them; because even if is raining or snowing, they will not cancel their classes. Therefore, many students agree with this idea because is not only going to safe them time; it would also help many students. Many students do not have transport. Sometime they have to walk or even pay so that they can go to school and attend to class. using the online program would give them a big support. | Evidence | Adequate |
ee480979f5a8 | D30614F0911F | In conclusion, considering the idea for students to attend classes from home by the way of online or video can be a good or a bad idea for many students. I do not support this idea. Students should not attend to classes online or video. Students can get distracted easily by anything or anyone in their house. Many time studying at home give students many issues; there can be many people at home and too much noise that the student would not be able to concentrated and will get distracted. It can also happen that watching a video and that there's no one there to explain it; can make the students tire and he/she can fall sleep. Also, students will not take it seriously because there's not a teacher telling them and explaining them what to do. They would not receive as much education, information, and attention as they need. My position on this issue is to maintain the students attending to school. The students will learn more if they receive classes in school. Attend classes in a classroom with a teacher will provide students more support and it would help them in many ways to be successful in the future. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0a894b6e557d | D31481D3B465 | People ask for advice and feedback almost everyday. It could be advice regarding fashion, education, or artistic feedback. For example, imagine a student finishing a project she's been working on for quite awhile. Before turning the assignment in, this student will most likely ask her peers for their opinions on it. However, notice how she won't ask one single person, rather multiple people for feedback. | Lead | Effective |
f3a417f7e3bb | D31481D3B465 | Seeking multiple opinions and advice can help someone make better decisions | Position | Adequate |
1ca55e7e9e29 | D31481D3B465 | understanding and seeing different perspectives on the subject, | Claim | Adequate |
304ba5b31cf5 | D31481D3B465 | receiving new ideas they previously have never thought of. | Claim | Adequate |
1f6679ce60a0 | D31481D3B465 | Asking a single person for his opinion will only result in one perspective of the topic | Claim | Effective |
1bbd5a30a101 | D31481D3B465 | . If people were to ask and receive only one response, the outcome becomes very limited and may not connect with a large audience. In order for it to apply to the audience, everyone would have to have the exact same thought process and opinions as the person the author asked; which is very unlikely. If someone wishes to connect with a variety of people, in this case a larger audience, they must have an understanding of many perspective and points of view. This way the outcome will apply to more people with different thoughts and opinions. | Evidence | Effective |
966e5a5f8151 | D31481D3B465 | When someone gives feedback, it's usually based off of the original idea that was given. However, there are scenarios where the advice given provides a brand new idea regarding the topic | Claim | Effective |
10d74890431a | D31481D3B465 | Asking more than one person for advice and feedback allows a person to suggest ideas and concepts one may never have thought of. To put into context, a student asks her peer for feedback regarding her art project. While most of her friends give feedback and opinions that relate to her project, one of her friends gives advice that suggests a new idea to add onto her original project. Not only does the student know how to strengthen what she has already made, she can now add a new element that benefits her assignment.
| Evidence | Effective |
d187a05e2051 | D31481D3B465 | Seeking multiple opinions and advice can be beneficial to someone because it can provide new ideas that previously have never been thought of, and help understand different perspectives on the topic. It's always important to ask for assistance and feedback when you need it. Because receiving that constructive criticism and working with it reassures the outcome is successful and applies to a larger audience. Overall, asking peers for their opinions can be an eye opener, and refresh one's mind in order to get their point across a variety of people. The more feedback one receives, the stronger the outcome becomes. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e3f8cb75ff37 | D326DB3F4FCF | yes becuase students would have more time to there work | Position | Ineffective |
6f1fa0a46c48 | D326DB3F4FCF | and is give more time the techer plan out the lesson but thye got give a time limeit to finsh the work cuz then students can get done the work and it would be hlepful to some students cuz some learn better by them self and they wouldnt feel rushed by the teacher to finsh the work before class ends but some other students learn better when ther is a teacher right there teaching face to face some students learn diifernt then others and there would be problems with students like getting trouble and it will teach students responepillity and it would show if they are willing t the work or if they care or dont care cuz now a days students dont really care about school they just come cuz they have to cuz if they didnt need to come they wouldnt come they just think that school a waste of time for them but they dont know how much they need school and how much school os gooing help them in the futer but it will give students more time to sit dont and work maybe they like it more then coming to school | Evidence | Ineffective |
39774207ded4 | D43178C538DF | Different people have different answers depending on what they mean. one example would be if you asked for a science question, the easiest answer would be... the perpendicularity of the potosytithsis crosses the bisector witch then the kinetic energy will bounce off the radios and hit the diameter witch then will colaps on the pythagerm therom,So now the genetic energy will explode like if it was uranium 232 witch then the servers will connect and create millions of nitros and million of galaxies will explode, all of these thing combined will make the Mississippi river,BUT I'M NOT DONE YET, after that is done the microwaves fusses and make the chemical reaction witch is using thermal energy ,so then the protons,electrons,neutrons,and the nukul s combines witch then you use length times wight and also height. So that brings us back to the question,"when people ask for advice they sometimes talk to more then one person." So you see that the potato has nine lives and the cat has 1 what is the difference between the two. that one cannot die and the other one can | Lead | Ineffective |
11f7af1d6354 | D43178C538DF | People ask more than one person because they want to hear something good,or b ecuse they want to get better advice form different people. | Position | Adequate |
ff930e239e39 | D43178C538DF | In the show Sonic X, sonic asked one of his friends on how to get all 7 kaos emeralds. wait wrong story [music stops].........I meant the Japanese story
The Question, the story talks about a kid, and this kid was trying to be the strongest kid to ever be ,so then the kid started to ask people how to get strong , and that was the question the question he asked him self and the choices he was going to make. another kid showed up and the kid asked the other kid "do you really want to be strong" the other kid said"yes" the ghostly kid said "you have to choices to make one is you have to 10 people 10 question about why you want to be strong the second choice is you have to slay the super dragon" the kid chose number one, the ghostly kid said "well done" .The kid went off to the mountains and asked the 10 people and after he was done he came out of the cave with the power to destroy the universe. | Evidence | Adequate |
d1b579d57588 | D43178C538DF | You should always remember that perpendicularity of the potosytithsis crosses the bisector witch then the kinetic energy will bounce off the radios and hit the diameter witch then will colaps on the pythagerm therom,So now the genetic energy will explode like if it was uranium 232 witch then the servers will connect and create millions of nitros and million of galaxies will explode, and after that is done the microwaves fusses and make the chemical reaction witch is using thermal energy ,so then the protons,electrons,neutrons,and the nukul s combines witch then you use length times wight and also height. but i am not done yet ,so you see that 111=34=345 that is a very important number . as you can see that theses numbers connect the servers between the gaps of the potosytithsis, so then if you sad Creeper awwwww man, so we back in the mine got our pickaxes swing them side to side, side side to side , just task the gruling one hope to find some diamonds to night , night night night diamonds to night, because tonight the creepers are going to blow up our stuff tonight...[music stops] "wait a minute..... this is not time for mine craft songs" now back were i was talking about", every day people die for a unknown reason, about 10 billion die a second because of it. some say the reason was because of potatoes and the only solution is to stop the potato and the only was to stop the potato is to go the the potato tree where the magic potato will be there and the only way to stop the potatoes is to eat the magic potato the heroes will face 0 challenges for 2+2 is 4 - 1 thats 3 quick maths. | Evidence | Ineffective |
56c9e2f662dd | D43178C538DF | Now what did we learn today. that some types of people have good advises and some people don't witch is very sad | Claim | Adequate |
1370341eb674 | D43178C538DF | another thing we all learned from reading this is that you can't trust people on this earth, and how you can't trust humanity, and we all learned that every war was a mistake , and we all learned that the government just wants peoples money.1919, almost to the end,1894, close to the beginning of the mad world and this was another reason people ask for advice, | Evidence | Ineffective |
20c41d8cc80b | D43178C538DF | you see secretly i was showing examples of people asking advice to other people, another reason of why would people ask meany other people for advice its because the person asking needs help in some way, or it needs the right advice for the right thing it wants. | Claim | Effective |
5801cf27cd33 | D43178C538DF | The person might be asking for a advice but they give the person wrong one so the person will go to a different human and ask for a different advice. people listen to get smarter and by liaising to a good advice the person will know what to do and whet not to do. one advice would be "it is not strength that wins for its skill that matters" that is also a quote so its pretty much the same. | Evidence | Adequate |
4e50a832a041 | D43178C538DF | Always remember that the perpendicularity of the potosytithsis crosses the bisector witch then the kinetic energy will bounce off the radios and hit the diameter witch then will colaps on the pythagerm therom,So now the genetic energy will explode like if it was uranium 232 witch then the servers will connect and create millions of nitros and million of galaxies will explode, all of these thing combined will make the Mississippi river,BUT I'M NOT DONE YET, after that is done the microwaves fusses and make the chemical reaction witch is using thermal energy ,so then the protons,electrons,neutrons,and the nukul s combines witch then you use length times wight and also height so then the electrons can symthisissize the H2O so then it connects the pontentchal energy and kinetic energy to fuse ,and to cause a rerefration to cause a refraction to case a reflection. The diameter of the cercumfrance gets cut into a cubic meter ,witch then goes 9,233,525,623,6326,464,999,000 miles per second . It then hits the hit box from the perpendicular outer space to hit the chromosomes witch then the American dictator takes over the plant bye. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c3441bf47f21 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Distance learning gives students hope for the future. Incorporating distance learning for students gives them a chance to stay on track with the rest of their classmates from home when circumstances disallow them from coming to school. | Lead | Adequate |
aea2d06112c9 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Some people might say there are no benefits from distance learning, | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
6d13098b6ebd | D5A0A8C83A60 | however, they are wrong because distance learning reduces chances of receiving or giving illnesses and gives students a chance to not fall behind in school. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
04babd77a142 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Students will benefit from being able to attend school from home | Position | Adequate |
f97a83bf6637 | D5A0A8C83A60 | because they won't get behind when they miss school | Claim | Adequate |
79cb12c08443 | D5A0A8C83A60 | it reduces likelihood of getting yourself or others sick. | Claim | Adequate |
1e0ad80a660f | D5A0A8C83A60 | Distance learning benefits students that are unable to go to school because they won't fall behind when they return and allows for time to complete assignments independently. | Claim | Effective |
6abcfca4a107 | D5A0A8C83A60 | In 8th grade, I went on vacation for a week during the school year. When I returned to school, I had numerous of classwork assignments and tests that I had to make up. This was difficult to complete because I was expected to study for tests, finish assignments, and continue to learn new material simultaneously. Distance learning would have benefited me in this situation because had I attended my classes through video conferencing during my vacation, the amount of work I would have to had completed when I returned would have been reduced. Distance learning provides more time for students to work on assignments independently. | Evidence | Effective |
93a4c829bb2e | D5A0A8C83A60 | A friend of mine, Generic_Name, constantly has a hard time concentrating in school. When she is home from school, she is able to complete her assignments more efficiently than she would have at school because there is less noise to distract her at home. | Evidence | Adequate |
0bb1b7bee4ff | D5A0A8C83A60 | Distance learning is also beneficial for students who struggle in a school setting because it gives them a chance to attend class without becoming distracted of what's happening around them. | Claim | Effective |
4e1c875e5b35 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Some might say that distance learning does not help students who are unable to go to school, | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
ddf76873380a | D5A0A8C83A60 | clearly, they are wrong because they won't fall behind in their absence and it gives students and alternate learning environment. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
252383fc3480 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Attending classes from home can reduce the likelihood of getting others sick or becoming sick because it's impossible to spread germs from home and you are not aware of how clean your school is. | Claim | Effective |
27bcf8baf686 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Currently, their is an virus spreading that has resulted in a pandemic in the United States. Many colleges and universities have decided to extend spring breaks and move classes online as a result of the flu-like disease. To prevent the spreading of this virus, schools decided this would be the safest option for their students because many students have gone out of the country for break and can possibly bring the virus back with them. This provides students who traveled time to be tested and cleared for school if necessary. Since most people have cleaned and cooked in their own house, they are aware of what they are eating, breathing, and touching. Students are unaware of what is done to clean the school or cook lunch food. Last year, I was eating a chicken sandwich from the lunch line that didn't appear cooked completely. I didn't think much of it until I went to the doctor and found out I received food poisoning. If I knew what was contained in the sandwich, I wouldn't have been sick. I realized that you can't always trust what you are eating or touching when you don't know how it was made or what it contains. You are aware of and immune to your house, but you aren't fully aware of how they clean in, cook in, or maintain a school. | Evidence | Effective |
d469fb32b5b3 | D5A0A8C83A60 | Some may say that distance learning won't reduce the likelihood of getting others sick or becoming sick | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3017f7d6c6c3 | D5A0A8C83A60 | however, they are wrong because distance learning prevents wide-spread illnesses from affecting students and students are not aware of how safe school is for their health.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
5f0bea5c8cca | D5A0A8C83A60 | Students will benefit from being able to attend schools from home because they won't get behind when they miss school and it reduces likelihood of getting yourself or others sick. Distance learning gives students access to school without having to attend. This benefits students who are missing school because of vacation, prefer home as an alternative learning environment, and trying to prevent illnesses from spreading. If distance learning wasn't available for students who fall into one of these three groups, they would have a difficult school experience. Distance learning is a great opportunity for students who want to attend school without having to deal with the consequences. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
9e0f704b4254 | D6E7A5034205 | The idea of working at home for most children would be very much exuberating. No need to rush to catch a bus, miss a morning breakfast to attend school, or miss school because one slept late. You'd simply wake up slap some pajamas on and get to working on your computer. | Lead | Adequate |
6cb56093793e | D6E7A5034205 | Although you would be sacrificing the basic one to one classic learning situation where teacher and student are face to face, it is still attainable to teach away from home | Claim | Adequate |
7a35cf499091 | D6E7A5034205 | In the eyes of a student currently attending Generic_School, like myself, working alone can sometimes be a struggle, two minds will always be greater than one. Two minds sometimes create bias, and at times bias is good. One would benefit from hearing the other side of the argument which may ultimately end one's single-sided thinking. Also having the classroom aspect where you have multiple people who look at the same thing in different ways is important as well. Maybe the way student A looks at something is more compliant to your way of thinking rather than student B. Classmates help each other if the teacher can not, there are many instances in my learning here at Generic_School where I come to the terms of understanding a subject, but once one of my classmates broke it down for me in their way of thinking and seeing, a new light shown over the way I looked at things. | Evidence | Effective |
e839dd2d5df1 | D6E7A5034205 | Schools may very well be a great thing, but they can also be damaging. | Claim | Adequate |
735d2f31916d | D6E7A5034205 | We all know where there are friends, there are foes. When you group a bunch of developing teenagers going through puberty, where emotions and hormones are swarming around, you get a sort of cesspool of emotion. Yes, at times there will be drama, fights, gossip, harassment, and many other things normal to the life of every day teens. Some may say this is a lie, but it is very well the cold hard truth. People won't always get along it's apart of the human nature, and as you're growing up you are still trying to figure out what you do or don't get along with. | Evidence | Effective |
cb8613ab3a4b | D6E7A5034205 | Even though there are negative things about attending school there are very much positive ones as well. | Claim | Adequate |
7206ec6bd16e | D6E7A5034205 | One's social skills might develop more and more as time progresses and they're surrounded by situations where they are prompted to socialize with other students. Also, a student might find his or her niche, where they belong, who they really are, what they do or don't like. I can't seem to put my finger on it, but there is a difference in learning where you sit behind a screen and listen to mind numbing concepts all day, rather than sitting in a engaging classroom where you ask questions, work out problems, and get a more hands on experience.
| Evidence | Effective |
8d5ad3cc3169 | D6E7A5034205 | So when you ask me, what my stance on working at home rather than at school. I would simply answer with, I don't know | Position | Ineffective |
ef75c9775633 | D6E7A5034205 | The beauty of the human nature is to be able to adapt, adapt through hardships, adapt to new changes. Take chances in life, be prosperous, because at the end of the day, you only get one. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
54b9589379ee | D7301CAAFAB0 | When are parents gave us advice we are able to learn do the right thing. For example if you go work with your dad he gave you advice. Also they gave us advice we learn how to do the right thing. Learning the right thing helps us to make our life better. | Lead | Adequate |
cf6c4ddebf0e | D7301CAAFAB0 | Learn something from more then one person because they help you dont get in trouble and be a good student or son if you learn from someone us. | Position | Ineffective |
6cff54fcd6f7 | D7301CAAFAB0 | Learning advice from school is good because everyone learns and get good grades | Claim | Ineffective |
d7edc58c8fbf | D7301CAAFAB0 | Do something good for school is good because when they gave you advice to do the right thing is class. For example the gym teacher gave you advice to do the right not the bad advice because if you do the bad thing you will get a bad grade and get in trouble. When we get in trouble is bad and you always have to listen when they gave us advice for you do well at your test. When we do well in our test is because the teacher was having us advice and we were paying attecion. | Evidence | Adequate |
bf25f01eff05 | D7301CAAFAB0 | Friends gave us advice out side of school and inside school | Claim | Adequate |
4e5ea7eb5337 | D7301CAAFAB0 | When friends gave us advice inside school is because they want a better life for us. When friends gave us advice for our life is because they want us to be happy and be a better person. Also when they gave us advice like when we play sports. When we play sports the coach always have advice do win the game. When coaches gave us advice to play good and win games that teams will be come so good if the players get the advice of the coach. | Evidence | Adequate |
0b6a8cb7cbff | D7301CAAFAB0 | When people ask for advice is because they want to know what things are better like to buy. | Claim | Ineffective |
a190b328c277 | D7301CAAFAB0 | If we shop somewhere then you need a advice from someone to know if is good or bad. When they gave a advice of food you have to know if is good or bad for our health. If we dont get a advice like for something maybe will be bad for us to eat or do and may have problems. The person who do not gave a advice of what they doing they will get in trouble if good for our body or not good. | Evidence | Adequate |
2d0c49a23918 | D7301CAAFAB0 | When we are in math class the students gave us advice same with the teacher. Sometimes students gave us advice how to do the work of the problem more than one student gave us advice. When teacher shows advice of our class work how to do it and know when test are coming for be ready. Also the bus driver gave us advice how to act inside the bus. If the bus driver does not gave advice everyone in the bus will act crazy and maybe a accident. Thats why everyone should said a advice for we could be safe and be good. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
70992078f9fe | D751FAE92161 |
It's becoming too much to bare. Despite the happiness and comfort they gave you all those years ago, they've changed. They're being more critical of you and your other friends, they have been asking you for money frequently without paying back their debt, and are being rude about you not spending time with them, despite them barely spending time with you. Despite you telling them about your concerns, they haven't stopped. You think it's about time you cut ties with your closest friend that you have known since your elementary school days. You ask your mother about what you should do, and she gives you her opinion from the outside looking in. You understand her thinking, but you're not quite satisfied with her answer. You feel as if you should ask someone else, but its not because you dont respect your mom's opinion, you just want another bit of advice. Why is that? Why do we feel the need to get more than one piece of advice after already receiving what we see as a satisfactory answer? | Lead | Effective |
8c511df209f1 | D751FAE92161 | There are more options to consider before making your decision, | Claim | Effective |
0fb5fe1d247a | D751FAE92161 | you can get more diverse and varying opinions | Claim | Effective |
cdc59372dd1d | D751FAE92161 | there are just some people who are more qualified to give you the help and advice that you need.
| Claim | Effective |
98d3a1a92fa7 | D751FAE92161 | Now this statement may seem contradictory at first. "How would having to go through more words, people, and ideas help me to get to a clearer understanding of my situation? Wouldn't that just cloud up everything?" you ask. Well, actually, it does the complete opposite! If you only have one opinion, there's less of a chance that you will find the right answer. It's good to narrow down your points once everything you need is presented, but when you have little to almost nothing to go off of in the first place, it's less likely that your choice will be properly informed. Another reason that you may have trouble only going off of one person, is that somebodies advice could be very biased, which could cloud your mindset from the get go. When someone's advice is based only off of their opinion of the person or thing and not your situation or well being, it can be confusing at best, and directly harmful at worst. Finally, there are plenty more options you can choose from as well. This can make it easier to get the exact answer you need. Think about it like looking for an exact brand of paper you need for work . You may not find it at the first store you go to, you might have to drive around town to find it. All and all, having multiple opinions gives you more things to consider, making it easier to come to your conclusion. | Evidence | Effective |
53eb677c3716 | D751FAE92161 | You could get people from the outside looking in, people who have been in that situation before, and even people who might be in the same boat as you. This will make it much easier to not only narrow down your views and options, but can give you all the parts of the story you need to come to a satisfying conclusion. Next,when getting your advice from different, more diverse sources, you might just find out new information that makes you less ignorant on certain issues. When getting advice from different people, you may just find a new outlook on something you hadn't thought of before, which could open up your mind to a whole new insight of your issue. When it comes down to it, getting different opinions from a more diverse crowd could be the difference between a good and bad decision. | Evidence | Effective |
5d13193c6deb | D751FAE92161 | For example, there might be some ignorant people who know next to nothing about the other side's situation. When people dont know much about another side's struggles or even their side of the story, they may place too much of their biases onto you or your situation. Another thing, some people have more experience with giving advice. Some people are just more fit to give you advice. For example, who would you be more comfortable taking an opinion from, a friend or a therapist? You may know where to look, but its probably safer to simply get more people's opinions. Even so, sometimes people who aren't in those particular fields tend to think more simply, which might be what you need along with that professional opinion to form a bigger, clearer picture. If you're having trouble picturing what I mean, think of it like a doctor. If you get back your diagnosis and it seems wrong or misinformed, you'll probably end up asking for a second opinion. That way you get a more clear and sensible diagnosis that goes with your symptoms. Furthermore, asking different people for their opinions may just bring in some more qualified ideas into your argument.
| Evidence | Effective |
667a8618ff01 | D751FAE92161 | As you can clearly see, having a variety of different ideas, opinions, and arguments from many different people is the best way to get your advice, hence why so many people do so. | Position | Adequate |
31b09635aafc | D751FAE92161 | We get a variety of ideas, get more diverse outlooks from many different people and perspectives, and some people having more qualified opinions from different people, is why its so common to get as many points of view that we can. If we want to be as thorough and informed as possible, it is crucial to do just that. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5b8779196768 | D786038182B6 | Have you ever thought about the advatages and disadvantages of learning in school? Distance learning is being consitered instead of in school learning for some students. | Lead | Adequate |
14ce754ac26b | D786038182B6 | Being taught online isin't always a good idea | Position | Adequate |
e0752b6783f4 | D786038182B6 | In school learning allows students to work at their own paste | Claim | Adequate |
487e665a5856 | D786038182B6 | work with less distractions | Claim | Adequate |
e9b9f9232806 | D786038182B6 | allows students to be organized. | Claim | Adequate |
97ef519e42ff | D786038182B6 | When students work at their own paste it can be less stressful, they can make sure everything is valid, and they can focus more on their work. | Claim | Adequate |
8d01790a479d | D786038182B6 | Stress can decrease by increasing the time you have to work on an assignment. You dont have to stare at a clock and worry about reaching your deadline. You can go back to check on your work as many times as you need to. Reviewing your work allows you to correct your mistakes. You can focus when you aren't panicing about losing time to complete an assignment. Being rushed by time can be very stressful and cause problems for a student.
| Evidence | Adequate |
d0bd00caabe5 | D786038182B6 | Distractions are never a good thing, so why work with them? Teachers in school create rules for students to be sucessful without the distraction of a cell phone, food being handed out in class, and classmates misbehaving. | Evidence | Ineffective |
8021d191b928 | D786038182B6 | Cell phones take up most of a students day and it does not benefit them at all. | Claim | Ineffective |
8ea054e10723 | D786038182B6 | Cell phones draw students' attention by a notification, phone call, or just being on a desk. Food being handed out in class creates a ruckess by everybody wanting a snack to chew. Wrappers of candy, bags of chips, and sodas being opened creates a noise that is tempting. When a student misbehaves, teachers have the ability to write them up and let upper athorities take action. Distractions cut into the time a student has to complete any assignemnt. | Evidence | Adequate |
17fb641e2a76 | D786038182B6 | Organization in life can start with school | Claim | Adequate |
48aa39506789 | D786038182B6 | You have a schedule to follow, you have different subjects, and you have a structure. As soon as your morning alarm goes off you start with your morning routine. First you shower and get dressed, next you brush your teeth, then you may get transported to school. At school they provide students with a shedule to follow. You take four classes a day and have eight in total that are seperated with lunch. Each subject has different learning styles and ways to solve problems. Everything is structured and not given to a point you can't sort things out. | Evidence | Adequate |
3354e46968ec | D786038182B6 | In school learning benifits students to be organized, gives them time to complete their work, and takes away distractions. Working in school has multiple pro's for a student's future. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
81bf46c18229 | D7B12358DBA3 | As with many students, receiving an education and taking classes is associated with a physical school building. Students are often aware of the two main options for school: attending public/private institutions or home school. Each option offers different advantages and disadvantages but seem to be on opposite sides of a continuum. The option of taking online classes provide the benefits of both attending an in person school and home school. It can be seen as a middle ground on the continuum as taking online classes in addition to regular classes at school may increase learning | Lead | Effective |
3f9b252572bc | D7B12358DBA3 | Distance learning benefits students | Position | Effective |
6ae8ed634175 | D7B12358DBA3 | it can enhance learning | Claim | Effective |
2058b36679f8 | D7B12358DBA3 | provide a more comfortable environment | Claim | Effective |
311a8a17cbf8 | D7B12358DBA3 | give students the opportunity to take classes not offered at school. | Claim | Effective |
5aee2afd1b86 | D7B12358DBA3 | Online learning can be beneficial to students who have a different learning style. They tend to be more heavily technology based which can enhance learning of those who thrive on more technology incorporated lessons and assignments. | Claim | Effective |
a91650dec7da | D7B12358DBA3 | Because classes are taken online, the teacher or instructor utilizes different technological tools and resources for lesson plan and activities. It broadens the possibilities of how information can be delivered to students and the different class work students can participate in. Online classes can also seem a more appealing option to in person classes, as lessons and assignments tend to be more direct and straight forward. Often times, school teachers give "fluff" assignments that don't necessarily have a purpose or that don't offer much learning potential. These assignments are given to pass time and give students an activity to do whether in class or for homework. I have endured my share of "fluff" assignments throughout high school. During my sophomore year, I despised English class because I didn't seem to gain anything out of it. My teacher would assign miscellaneous assignments such as a food poem or a repetitive packet of work. Online classes tend to include less of these "fluff" assignments because they differ from traditional in person classes where students meet personally with teachers. There is less of a worry to keep students occupied with different assignments each class. With the Generic_School Online Campus, students are given assignments to complete each week with the due date at the end of that week. Teachers tend to give less unnecessary assignments because the class can be more spread out throughout the course. | Evidence | Effective |
a2b65067d3e6 | D7B12358DBA3 | Taking online classes from home provides students with a more comfortable learning environment. | Claim | Effective |
3748b750dfae | D7B12358DBA3 | They are in the comforts of their home and have the freedom to attain food or use the bathroom at any given time. Video conferences can be held once a week and may not even reveal a student's appearance, so students can wear whatever clothing they desire or feel most comfortable in. Students are not in the high stress school environment and can feel more relaxed. This may lead to an increase in productivity and focus on one's schoolwork. | Evidence | Effective |
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