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Although some believe that students should only have the option of traditional schooling because they are less likely to learn social skills at home, students should be given the opportunity to participate in online schooling
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it allows them to work at their own pace
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lower their stress levels
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take multiple classes at once.
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To begin with, students will be able to work at their own pace.
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When taking a test in a traditional classroom, some students finish in ten minutes and others take the entire class. Either way, students should not feel the need to slow down or speed up in order to finish in a certain time. Forcing kids to work at the pace of their peers will produce lower test scores. With the option of online school, students are able to finish assignments at their own time. As a result, assignments will be given more attention by students and will overall turn out better than they would have in the classroom. Students are capable of producing better work, if they are able to work at their own pace.
Evidence
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In addition, stress levels in students will significantly decrease.
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Stress and anxiety among students is extremely high. Many kids have test anxiety and are not able to perform well in testing environments. Testing anxiety can be caused by numerous factors but one factor that stands out the most is feeling comfortable in an environment. If the student does not feel comfortable in their classroom while taking a test, they will not produce a good grade. If the student is placed in a well suited environment, like their home, they are guaranteed to receive a better grade than if they were placed in a classroom. Secondly, if students are able take their time and not rush through school work, stress levels will reduce and the amount of passing students will increase. Students often feel rushed to finish in a short amount of time in order to please their teachers. Although many teachers preach to their students to take their time, teachers unknowingly put a time restriction on student. Online courses allow kids to start and finish assignment when they feel comfortable doing so. Online classes lowers the chance of stress among students by eliminating classroom anxiety.
Evidence
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Furthermore, the ability to take extra classes is given to students.
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In order to graduate at many public and private schools, students must meet graduation requirements. There are multiple classes a student must take to graduate that are electives. These classes take up space in kid's schedules restricting the amount of core classes a student can take. If schools allow these kids to take these classes in their free time, students will be able to complete these courses and move onto classes they will use in the future. For example, all school require students to partake in a health class throughout their high school careers. If students are capable of taking this class in the summer rather than in the school year, a new gap in their schedule opens for another class. Also, online schools prevent advance students from burning out. Many children who were placed in advanced learning at a young age experience a burn out. This occurs when the student does not have to work as hard in their education as others. This produces a poor work ethic, which is essential in the real world. By allowing these students to take an extra course online, they will be challenged forcing them to improve their work ethic and time management. Online school gives students a chance to get ahead in their education
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In conclusion, students should be given the opportunity to participate in online school because they will have the ability to work at a their own speed, reduce their stress levels, and participate in more classes. If students are unable to take online courses, they are more likely to get off track in their learning. By giving students this education outlet, students will be more likely to graduate and be ready to dive into their adult lives.
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Every child leads a different life and is born into a different environment - but the one thing that every child deserves is the chance to receive a quality education. People across the globe have fought for this vital opportunity for decades, advocating for those whose path to knowledge is obscured by circumstance
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Students who have obstacles such as mental health issues or the lack of local education would greatly benefit and be better accommodated from the opportunity to take classes online and from their home.
Position
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A system of at-home classwork would greatly help any student with a learning disability or intellectual setback
Claim
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Many children struggle with slight disabilities such as dyslexia or ADHD - small occurrences that hinder the learning process. However, these minuscule variations can have major effects on the way a student absorbs information and needs to be accommodated in the classroom, a setback that many public schools aren't equipped to handle. This can prove detrimental to the development of the student - without the proper instruction formatted for the style in which they learn, their true academic potential can remain untapped. With classes taken inside the home, this can change. In the environment they know best, surrounded by people that understand how they need to be aided, the child can thrive without the pressure to adapt to the method of learning endorsed inside the mainstream school. They can explore options in their education and take the time they need to properly understand new concepts, all within their home and without the restraint of a larger public entity telling them to conform.
Evidence
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Students that don't have access to public education in the areas in which they live would highly benefit from the ability to take online classes.
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While a rarity, there are some areas of the globe where young people are denied the chance to receive an education. This is nearly never the fault of the student - where they live, the government of the country that they live in, and their gender or physical appearance are all traits that they cannot control. When the terrorist group Al-Qaeda was present in Pakistan, many Pakistani girls couldn't go to school or leave their houses due to the militia's belief that women were not deserving of rights or an education. While these girls were being denied the opportunity to be educated, this doesn't mean that they weren't deserving - online classes could've and still could improve that situation. Through the availability of methods to access classwork in the home, children that have been circumstantially denied the chance to attend school could be granted that chance again, and with potentially less risk. Classes taken within the home would allow students in difficult life situations to gain back their opportunity to learn, and continue furthering their intellectual development despite their circumstances.
Evidence
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Anxiety can severely stunt the educational career of a budding child, but would be lessened through the attendance of classes from home.
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Anxiety can infiltrate every corner of a student's thought process, and whether the stress is academically related or not, it affects the way that a child learns and grows. Participation grades, group projects, popularity expectations, and the rumor mill of regular public school can take a more severe toll on children with anxiety disorders, making it hard for these students to see school as a place to gain knowledge. Instead, they begin to dread it, sick and tired of the constant pressure and nervousness they experience in the classroom. However, when attending classes within the home, these judgments can be alleviated. The anxiety within the student is eased by being in a familiar environment, a place where they can decide what interactions to engage in and when. An opportunity like at-home classes can transform an anxious child's perspective of education from a negative and stressful experience into something positive and beneficial, helping them progress academically while accommodating to their mental health.
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The opportunity to receive at-home education and attend classes through an online program would provide important accommodations to students that otherwise feel out-of-place in the regular public school system, namely those with mental setbacks or difficult geographical circumstances. While it is a privilege and would most likely take time to implement, the chance for a personalized education is a chance that all children deserve. 
Concluding Statement
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I think some students with benefit from distance learning and some wont.
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Some student wont have any devices to set up a video confrence with.
Counterclaim
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Some students might now have internet at home or other places.
Evidence
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Distance learning is also good because it gives students a chance to catch up on school work at home and they wont have to sit in a classroom all day.
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Distance learning is also very helpful because some students might not be able to attende schools but with distance learning they wont have to go to a school to learn with other kids they can be in there own space to concentrate.
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Distance learning also has some benefits like parents wont have to get up so early to make sure there kids get on the bus and some parents might not have cars to get there children to school.
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Students wont get in to fights our get in trouble at school if there home they can have 1 on 1 with the teachers there having a video confrence with there so many great things about distance learning.
Evidence
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Distance learning has some flaws to because sometimes it might not always work there could be bugs in the software or the quality of the video might not be great
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also distance learning is something that not alot people might be able to attende. Some people might not even have access to devices or internet they can go to a public library but thats will be only temporary and students wont be able to do distance learning aftoen because the software might be to expensive.
Evidence
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Some people might think distance learning is a waste of time because students who dont pay attention in school wont pay attention if there in distance learning.
Counterclaim
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But it is also good because students who have bad grades or cant focus in a classroom setting can take the oppertunity to use distance learning to pass there classes with ease.
Rebuttal
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Distance learning is also good for students looking to be home schooled
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they have this program to get them threw there high school/middle schools classes.
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In conclusion i am with and against distance learning.
Concluding Statement
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Having different opinions for advice is a good thing. If someone asks multiple people advice on a problem then the outcome would be their is different answers for different people.
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When they get different answers from different people then they can narrow the most logical answer from the different people.
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Finding multiple opinions is the best way to correct or enforce your idea or create an idea.
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That is why having multiple opinions on a subject is a good thing.
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If you go up to one of your friends and ask for some advice. Then, you ask someone else about that same advice. After you will probably get a difference in opinions.
Evidence
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Although it is good to have multiple opinions your not always going to get a straight answer.
Counterclaim
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Like if someone has 5 candidacies and they ask each person separately a majority of the candidates will have different answers. So, if someone has both of the same answers then the person who is asking will probably lean more to the similar answers. Just because the people go towards that answer doesn't mean that it is logical.
Evidence
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If a person has an idea or needs an idea about something they are going to want to get advice about something. If they have an idea then they can either change the idea or enforce there idea from the different opinions. If they don't have an idea then they can get ideas from the peoples advice.
Evidence
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That is why having multiple perspective of an opinion is good.
Claim
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Having a difference in opinion, to find a way to decide on different opinions, giving advice, and deciding on changing or enforcing ideas. It all has to do with how having multiple people giving advice is a good thing. though sometimes having a difference in opinion it is not perfect it is not all that bad to have different opinions. who ever asks can narrow the idea which can enforce or maybe change the outcome of the idea. They can give advice because of having a difference in opinion. All of the ways of having advice of multiple people can all help each other.
Concluding Statement
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Having Online Classes show positive and negative results in a student. Online Classes are like regular classes, that teaches you the S tandards of Learning . Like every other class, students listen to what the teacher has to say and answer questions on that objective, of what the teacher taught them.
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Students that take online classes do have its benefits. For example, if you don't have enough credits, counselors tell students that are going to graduate if they do or do not have enough credits, they can take online classes.
Claim
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As long as you sign up with the school your attending, complete the course and earn the credit; they're able to graduate.
Evidence
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Another reason are Programs,
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if you're in a high school program, you might have to take an "Exit-Test" exam. An example of that is C.I.S.L. (Center of Intelligence Studies of Languages), throughout high school you learn a new language, besides English, at the end of junior or senior year, and you'd take this exam to see how much you learn by taking an reading, writing, speaking, and listening test.
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Another example is College,
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some young adults can't afford to leave home or to busy taking care of their family, to even see a sight of college in their future. That's why Online Colleges were made, to help those who can't help themselves nor have the money of affording a tuition. College online classes, are the same as high school you listen to a professor on a matter subject and take a quiz or test, from what you learned from them
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Another reason Online classes are beneficial they're different schedule classes.
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For example you have to work 11:30 A.M. through 8:30 P.M. Then you can schedule a class for 10:00 P.M. You can pick your time of the day class. Different from being in a real school, you have to be at that class at a certain time and day, or you're marked absent or tardy.
Evidence
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But there are also some consequences in Online Classes; online classes, are actually classes and real professors grade you on your work, so if your slacking or getting real low quiz and test scores, you've failed the class, and you don't get any credit from that class. Then you have to redo the whole course, because with no credit you can not graduate. Another reason Online classes have negative results, is that they have the rights to kick you out the class, in the beginning of the course, they're suppose to give you an agreement and term contract, and if your attendance is poor, they'll kick you out the class.
Counterclaim
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However, I believe that online classes are very beneficial for students.
Position
Adequate
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To take classes from home or from school, doesnt really matter, as long as you get the class credit and complete your recommencement, you can graduate.    
Concluding Statement
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Taking one's own advice may be beneficial when common sense is involved, but seeking multiple opinions helps one make a better choice.
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People depend on other's gratification and it feels great when someone likes the outcome of a decision. In order for this to happen, one should ask multiple people for advice and shouldn't only take their's. When I take my own advice, it is often biased towards what I want, and I don't necessarily see all points of view of the decision I have to make. Taking my own advice is beneficial in situations where common sense is used and in situations where I have no one to to ask, such as logical situations or doing school work.
Evidence
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With more important decisions that go beyond common sense, seeking multiple opinions avoids bias, leads to multiple perspectives, and opens up new possibilities.
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When someone seeks advice, they should ask multiple people because it ensures them that their choice will be least biased. People should avoid bias because some opinions may not benefit them and may only benefit the person who is giving the piece of advice. When people ask for advice, each person they ask most likely has a different opinion. When all these opinions are considered, the chance of bias is reduced. When someone takes their own advice, they may have a slight inclination to go for what they want to do, and they may not consider all options. For example, I have a decision to make of whether or not I want to move for my father's work to Generic_City. I only considered my own preferences for a while, and I automatically said that I didn't want to go. I refused to leave my friends, my school, my routine, and everything else that makes my life splendid here. When I finally decided to hear what my parents had to say, my choice became less biased. My parents helped me see the benefits of moving, which I had not thought about because I didn't want to think that I would enjoy moving. In addition they helped me see it in their point of view, which leads to the next point.
Evidence
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Talking to more than one person when faced with a difficult situation leads to multiple perspectives.
Claim
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With each person one asks for advice, there is ridiculously small chance that they would all have the same exact opinion. Each person is different and has a new perspective of the dilemma. Seeking advice from my parents would yield different perspectives than if I ask my friends or siblings. For instance, when I talked to my friends about the possibility of me moving to Generic_City, they were disappointed, as expected. They didn't want me to move, and they didn't want me to leave them. When my parents talked to me about moving to Generic_City, I was able to see it in their perspective. To them it would be a fabulous opportunity to study abroad, meet new people, learn a new culture, and visit a wonderful country. This new perspective opened me up to the idea of living in a completely different country.
Evidence
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seeking multiple opinions may open up new possibilities that should be considered when making a decision
Claim
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. Each person one talks to may offer a different alternative to the decision at hand. This leads to an array of new and sometimes worse options. When talking to my parents about moving to Generic_City, they told me that moving to Generic_City now would be the most beneficial because if we didn't move before high school, we would probably have to leave in the middle of the school year later on. In addition, some friends helped me see that moving to Generic_City would open an entirely new set of doors. My brother fantasized about the enjoyable vacations we could have and meeting new people at a new school. The more people one talks to, the more opinions they get, and the more opinions they get, the more options they hav to make the best choice.
Evidence
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Crucial aspects of making a good choice are avoiding bias, seeing the decision through other people's perspective, and considering all options. Seeking advice from multiple people leads to all of this, making asking people for advice an important task to do when faced with a choice to make. Avoiding bias aids in making a decision to which the outcome is beneficial to all concerned. New perspectives helps to consider how everyone feels about a choice. Finally, considering all options and outcomes makes for an easier time deciding which choice is better overall. Even when making petty choices that most people make each day, such as choosing what to eat and what to wear, people may benefit from a bit of advice. The world would be a wonderful place if everyone asks someone for advice before doing something that could change the course of events. Choices wouldn't be irrational, and petty fights wouldn't break out and start arguments or wars. All it takes to make a good decision and to be satisfied by the outcome is to talk to people and ask for their opinion. What is so difficult about this?
Concluding Statement
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My phone buzzed with his name appearing at the top. God, I don't wanna talk to you right now, take a hint man. My boyfriend and I had just had a huge fight and I'm texting my friend Generic_Name for advice. After explaining her opinion she says to listen to other peoples advice then decide what to do. When faced with an issue normally our first reaction is to try to solve it on our own, although most of the time our head is way up in the clouds and we need another person to drag us back to the reality of the issue. Although most times, you need a few more than just that one person to help you make the correct choice.
Lead
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seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.
Position
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getting advice could be a good thing, since many different people have all had vastly different experiences.
Claim
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At the Virginia school of Technology they completed a study on getting advice from just one person compared to reciving advice more more than one person. Both people were given the same issue but only one was able to receive more than one persons advice. One of the conductors of the experiment, Dr. Joy Engstrom, stated that, " The person who received more than one piece of advice seems to have made the more logical choice than the person with only one piece of advice, fixing the situation faster and healthier." Therefore, asking more than just one person for advice can help you pull out a stronger and better outcome of the situation. Plus, receiving more advice can also hep you make a more logical choice then acting on what just one other person thinks is best. The advice given also probably would apply to other situations as well, so you are learning and growing as a person.
Evidence
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receiving advice from more than one person can also help to build trust with the people you ask.
Claim
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A study done by Jake Miller at the Maryland University of Health shows that when someone comes to another person for advice their trust in them normally increases. Mr. Miller Claims that, " You install a certain level of trust in someone when you ask them for advice, if it be something small or something huge. Asking for their opinion on a situation also boosts the overall relationship." More over, their advice doesn't only just help the situation it helps strengthen your relationship with those people. Plus, most of the time people are more open to helping you when you have a sturdy relationship with them. Not only does asking for advice show that you trust the people your asking but it can even help strengthen a whole groups relation and trust.
Evidence
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different sets of advice can also bring you to the best possibly out come. Creating a more logical and better choice to make.
Claim
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At the University of Utah a survey went around asking students if they made better choice when they asked more people for advice or if they made a better choice when they asked one person for advice 70.2% said they made a better choice when asking more people compared to the 29.8% that claimed they made a better choice when asking one person. However, majority claimed the best outcome would be asking just more than one person, still a lot of students replied just one person. From past experiences asking one person can make you think that that option and only that option will be the best, when in reality its actually not. When asking for advice you need someone who gives their opinion on what hey would do, not try to snatch away your judgment and brainwash you to their opinion.
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asking more people for their opinion can not only help you build trust with the people you ask, but help you learn more about them and their experiences and make the best choice. So in the future it is much recommended that you seek more than just one persons opinion on a situation your not so sure about. 
Concluding Statement
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One morning, Generic_Name the Pterodactyl hopped outside of his old nest. The nest has been in his family for generations but had started to wear down. The twigs were falling out left and right and they would poke him while he slept. Not to mention that it was located in a dangerous neighborhood. Generic_Name decided it was time to sell the old nest and move into a new one. He asked his pterodactyl friends where to move in. Generic_Name the Pterodactyl said, "you should move in with me and we could be roommates!" Generic_Name thought about it, but politely declined his friend's offer for Generic_Name was a messy house keeper and only played video games. He then asked Generic_Name the Pterodactyl who answered with, "I know a great realtor by the name of Generic_Name the Velociraptor." Later that day Generic_Name looked up Generic_Name on Boggle, the search engine for dinosaurs, and found that Generic_Name was a pretty sketchy realtor. Finally he asked his good friend Generic_Name the Pterodactyl for advice. Generic_Name was not only a good house keeper, but also knew the Jurassic Area pretty well. He told Generic_Name, "Make sure to look for nests that are in good neighborhoods and are in good condition." Generic_Name was a great help, and after many hours of research, Generic_Name was finally able to call another nest home. Some people often ask for advice from multiple people (or pterodactyls in Generic_Name's case).
Lead
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Seeking multiple opinions on something can help
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give you clearer and better feedback,
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can even help you decide for yourself.
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The more trials you have in an experiment, the more accurate your results will be. Let's use Generic_Name for an example. If Generic_Name had only listened to Generic_Name, then he would be up to his ankles in empty potato chip bags and energy drinks. It was because he asked multiple pterodactyls, that he was able to get the right advice. This doesn't mean that Generic_Name was planning on being messy or that Generic_Name was trying to scam Generic_Name. They were just trying to be good friends. From a scientific perspective, when planning a science experiment, you would want to have at least three trials. This is because something out of the ordinary could happen in your first trial and that it usually takes at least three trials to recognize a pattern in the experiment. If you are asking for advice - don't pick your favorite person. When I say this I mean people like your parents, your boss, etc. Although they could have good opinions, you might listen to them more than the other people who are trying to give you real feedback. Not only that but you don't want to have a person to lie to you and say that there was nothing wrong with your outfit or that your story didn't have confusing plot lines, when they both do. But on the other side of the feedback spectrum, don't pick someone who is going to crush your spirits. I once had a teacher in 6th grade that inspired me to learn more about the world's history and pushed me to learn. I even considered being a historian when I was older. Then, in 7th grade, I got a 72 year-old teacher who instead of having us learn about the Spanish-American War - stopped the whole class to look at pictures of his grandson. Don't get me wrong, I love looking at adorable picture of babies. But during the year, I lost my love for history and never thought about being a historian since. So what I'm trying to say is that you should pick someone you trust and that you respect and know that they will do the same for you.
Evidence
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Facts101. com says that your gut is right 85% of the time. I've been in the scenario multiple times where I circled an answer on a quiz, but convinced myself that I was wrong and circle another answer. So I turned in my paper when I was done and my teacher graded them. She gave them back and it turned out that I was right the first time! Whenever I need help deciding something I try flipping a coin in the air. Before it lands, I most likely all ready know what I want because I'm hopping for it to land on heads so I can go out with my friends instead of getting a early start on my chemistry project. If you ever need help deciding something try using this trick.
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To sum up, seeking advice from multiple pterodactyls - I mean people, can give you better and more honest feedback, and can help you decide for yourself. So don't be afraid to ask for opinions because in the end it might just help you soar
Concluding Statement
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Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.
Position
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Sometime going to other people for advice can help you with many different situations
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Some people may have a very good explanation to whats going on,they just maybe more experienced then you,
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can be seen for another point of view.
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Your having a problem in yous relationship,and you want to work it out but you dont know whats going on. Maybe your not spending enough time with your husband or wife. So you go to a friend you can trust,and yall talk about what to do,then you go back home and work it out.
Evidence
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Your've building a car with your dad and you try to start it but it wont turn on. You and your dad are lost on what to do. So you go to a mechanic,and turns out u was missing some key parts to the motor.
Evidence
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the person you go to see may look at the problem from a different point of view.
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Your arguing with a sibling about something and both of you think you right. Your sibling goes to your parents about the situation. Both of you tell your side of the argument. Your sibling is right,but you wasnt completely wrong either.
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in my opinion going to other people for advice is a great choice if your torn about what to do. Different people mean different results. The more people more results. This will conclude my essay thank you.
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Have you ever needed advise but didn't know who to ask? You think about who to ask do you ask your uncle is it your grandpa teacher who? The answer is all of them
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it is much better to ask multiple peoples opinions than just one for multiple reasons.
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not every one thinks the same way.
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By asking more people you will have a solution that works best for you. Remember that you don't have to take any one persons advise you can use the the advise given to you to form your own solution. Over all you get a more personalized response to your problems or question.
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not every one has the experience and knowledge on your situation.
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Not everyone knows how to do it or what to do. If you ask your dad and he knows nothing about it you cant just give up. you have to ask multiple people someone will give an answer. However you cant stop there you need something that works for you and some body who might have more experience in that area of life and give something that works better for you.
Evidence
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if you have a question and you ask more than person you are going to get a more valid response.
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I mean if the majority of people give one response it probably the correct answer. You dont to ask one person only to find out that they're wrong. I would also advise you to ask the person why they think what they think. asking more than one person will help you better stand the problem and by doing that we can narrow it down to give the most valid response.
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Thats why its better to ask multiple people. You will have a valid and personalized response from people of all different backgrounds.
Concluding Statement
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When you ask someone for advice on something do you try to get a second opinion? Well if you have not I bet not getting multiple opinions is not the best choice to make because its smarter to get multiple. Say even if the other opinions are not something you would want or do it is still smart to get because they could help but they wouldn't effect you if they do not help.
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