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a883a60c1dad | 090D5AC33481 | Using a phone while driving a vehicle should not be allowed anywhere! It can cause many accidents. It can also bring troubles and pain to ones family.
| Claim | Adequate |
0b9386f6005c | 090D5AC33481 | For example, in February 2018, a 17 year old in Alabaster, Alabama killed a ten year old and her father in an accident because the teen was texting while driving. If the teen would have been paying attention to the road and not their phone the accident maybe could have been prevented. Not saying all accidents are caused by phone use, but a majority of them are. | Evidence | Effective |
36a13d1683e8 | 090D5AC33481 | Generally there are 1.6 million crashes involving texting and driving | Claim | Adequate |
a1e5e776d75f | 090D5AC33481 | Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents involving texting and driving. 4,637 people died in the year 2018 because of the accidents. If that does not scare one into not using their phone while driving, then I don't know what will. This is one of the many reasons why I believe driving and the use of a phone should be banned!
| Evidence | Effective |
4dfbaf6f02de | 090D5AC33481 | Another reason cell phone use while driving should be banned; if adults use their phone while operating a vehicle their children will possibly be strongly influenced by it. | Claim | Effective |
0b3bb064b7a4 | 090D5AC33481 | The children will start to think it is okay to do so. It is the year 2019 and all that this generation raves about is having a car and the newest IPhone if we are taught that it is okay to text and drive, someone can earnestly get hurt by these actions. Most accidents involve teen driving, we don't want to give them another reason to be absentminded while driving. | Evidence | Effective |
53297b1e0c8a | 090D5AC33481 | The use of a mobile device while operating a vehicle should be prohibited. Now is the time to admit that driving while using a phone or any mobile devices is dangerous! You wouldn't want you or a loved one to end up critically injured, dead or disabled. Phone usage while driving is one of the many reasons accidents happen everyday. You can always wait until you are out of the car to make that call or answer that text ! | Concluding Statement | Effective |
b50a54358314 | 09133053C474 | I'm Luke Bomberger I am part of the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Lead | Ineffective |
5c69d2936a37 | 09133053C474 | I think you should join too | Position | Adequate |
dfbcba259ead | 09133053C474 | It's fun | Claim | Adequate |
3c88e5541bda | 09133053C474 | you do a lot of activities such as baseball, vollyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading and, whittling on the way back. You play the games where the animals used to be. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2c1cf8d1dc21 | 09133053C474 | You also get to see a lot of wonderful places. | Claim | Adequate |
ae79eb10c685 | 09133053C474 | I've traveled to China and Europe. I saw the Acropolis in Greece, I took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy where the streets were water, I've toured an excavated castle in Crete, and saw the Panama Canal on my way to China. We actually do have time to see places on our way to places. | Evidence | Adequate |
64db004ed267 | 09133053C474 | It opens the world up to you. | Claim | Adequate |
fd6d70ab3a5b | 09133053C474 | It's a life changing opportunity. I'm very gratefull I have that opportunity. It made me more aware of the countries in need and that awareness has always sayed with me. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5d2e2aeeb928 | 09133053C474 | That is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c3707b440343 | 0961B819A4E9 | I would agree to computers that can identify humans emotions would be pretty cool for our inverment. | Position | Adequate |
4966d2d7da1d | 0961B819A4E9 | it would change our inverment becaus ealot of people can just go to a computer and if the happy or sad it would say | Claim | Adequate |
68d9b7a7c663 | 0961B819A4E9 | I think that it would be good, because the people that hate computer would probably end up liking it. It would give them something new to learn on | Evidence | Adequate |
dc36f1b2f171 | 0961B819A4E9 | It can also recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel | Claim | Adequate |
7fc0218b2a88 | 0961B819A4E9 | Mr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions, and they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) will tighten your lips to show anger. The same technology can make computer- animathed faces more expressive. | Evidence | Adequate |
fefdea8f580a | 0961B819A4E9 | Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emothins, but it also may help produce them | Claim | Ineffective |
abf9ce144f43 | 0961B819A4E9 | You can feel other peoples emotional. it may happen becasue they unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression | Evidence | Ineffective |
dcef369fd34c | 0961B819A4E9 | this is why i think it would be a good idea to make computers that can see how someone is feeling. If there sad,or mad. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c34ab25756f1 | 09770DECD26C | I think that students should do at least one extracurricular activity. | Position | Adequate |
54e17fdd940a | 09770DECD26C | A extracurricular activity is a great way to kill time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3f3b345d6956 | 09770DECD26C | First I will talk about advantages to the students. | Claim | Adequate |
33c4f98da785 | 09770DECD26C | First advantage is that the kids can get more exercise and not be just lazy all the time. Another advantage is the kids can meet new people and make new friends. If its something that they like to do it can boost their mood. They might also become better problem solvers. Those are advantages to the students. | Evidence | Adequate |
404503fb5714 | 09770DECD26C | Second I will talk about the advantages to the teachers. | Claim | Adequate |
775cd772a982 | 09770DECD26C | First advantage to teachers is they get to teach about something that they love. They get to know more about the kids and what they like. They could also learn something new themselves if the kids know something that the teachers don't. those are advantages to the teachers that teach extracurricular activities. | Evidence | Adequate |
6f2f9f03d240 | 09770DECD26C | Last I will talk about advantages to the parents. | Claim | Adequate |
0868af748809 | 09770DECD26C | The parents get to do more things by themselves like running errands and just spend time alone. It is also less time for their kid to annoy them. It could also make them feel good that there kid is doing something other than being lazy. Last it could also teach the parents something new about the extra curricular activity. Those are the advantages for the parents of kids doing the activity.
| Evidence | Adequate |
2639324f7ebc | 09770DECD26C | Those are all my reasons why I think kids should do at least one extracurricular activity. My essay also shows that not just the kids have the advantages but the teachers and parents to do. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6d2284059d0a | 099985A2A99C | the author article about studying venus is good. My opnion is that we should study Venus because that can be a good thing for us | Position | Ineffective |
f4a4fd5060a7 | 099985A2A99C | because if something goies wrong here maybe we can use Venus so we can go live over there. Its good that we should study it so they can see that needs to be done and we need to survive if we ever have to leave earth | Claim | Adequate |
1cd76997a994 | 099985A2A99C | I read in the article that is dangerous because they are lava and earthquakes and venus has the hottest surface temperature in any planet . i rad it on paragraph 3 line 10 " venus has the hottest surface termaperatures of any planet in out solar system". i read about the volcanos and eraquakes on paragraph 3 line 13 " erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes". | Evidence | Adequate |
c7a4eae7a573 | 099985A2A99C | they refer venus like " the earths twin" if they call me like that is for a reason maybe it can really be like the earth a place where humans can live there without a problem. | Claim | Adequate |
fbc02450ab33 | 099985A2A99C | Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus> Its on paragraph 3 line 1 " A thick atmosphere of amost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus". the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. Its on paragraph 3 line 3. So its really dangerous but if they want to study it its for a reason maybe there is things they are can do to fix it so it can be a good place where humans can live, | Evidence | Adequate |
7769a1ae7f74 | 099985A2A99C | We should study Venus is a perfect oppurtunity for us to study new planets and see what we can do to have another safe planet. Its gonna be dangerous but i believe that we have the right tools and the right equiment to go over there and we have really good machines so they can work in there . | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
685fc575f97b | 09D40BD05847 | In society techolgy is almost every thing to people. People around the world hundred, thousands worth of technology, lots of people spend more money on technology than they clothes. So to me I think having technology makes people happy. Having technology to see if it makes them happy is kinda of point less to me | Lead | Adequate |
723d85e86c96 | 09D40BD05847 | There is nothing the Facial Action Coding could do for people in the world if you ask me. | Position | Adequate |
b1417052a212 | 09D40BD05847 | Putting up Ads that is based off your emotion is not a smart idea to me | Claim | Adequate |
2d0b1a812373 | 09D40BD05847 | So if im angry im most likely will have a negative vibe and if you put something up that is close to be negative its not going to make me happy. If I am in a good mood more than likely I would not want to see no Ad. Then there expression is compared against a neutral face, some people just look naturally mad. If some one regular face looks mad then how would it read ther face then, that person could be happy. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2a8e47324857 | 09D40BD05847 | I think the Facial Action Coding System is a waste of time. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
559eeee0cfa4 | 09DB075C4ACE | Every teacher should use this in their class room because the teacher could see what each student is feeling inside | Position | Adequate |
4557fecb9208 | 09DB075C4ACE | Also the teacher could see if the student is learning,listening, or even liking what the subject is | Claim | Adequate |
cf8a0d62c51d | 09DB075C4ACE | It says "moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them''. I think that is very true and hopefully it would make people more happy and not feel like they are nothing.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
42ac4ed5d1aa | 09DB075C4ACE | If people could make enough of the Facial Action Coding System for the schools all around the world. I think that would make a big difference on people not lieing about how the feel. | Claim | Adequate |
895a0d73f12a | 09DB075C4ACE | It would help people be better with computers if the computers understand howthe person if feeling. | Evidence | Adequate |
11fbc2a61026 | 09DB075C4ACE | It would me a great game too. | Claim | Adequate |
d8de94b76489 | 09DB075C4ACE | You try to make the other person try to guess your emotion and the computer would tell you if they got it right or not | Evidence | Ineffective |
df8949b06ec5 | 09DB075C4ACE | I think this would be really good to get out to schools to show them how to see different emotions about people and like i said before, it would make a great game. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1ab1030c639a | 0A5B8761B187 | Disagree | Position | Ineffective |
c31923fc7fac | 0A5B8761B187 | I think that if a students have to let them do it not because them say u got to | Claim | Adequate |
55372759ebbd | 0A5B8761B187 | some people can not do some thing like some people can not do sports like working want people some work just there self some teacher don't do activity the principal don't why should the student do some just not that good what. | Evidence | Ineffective |
dd417b39b1d4 | 0A5B8761B187 | Activity thing some just not for everyone cut out for the workout to play sports. | Claim | Adequate |
f4dbba7c9463 | 0A5B8761B187 | It good to play do activiy but it a lot thing to do outside have fun or some we young sports is fun to but no one want to be and a hot gym half of the day out of energy when you get home you get home you going want to go to bed going to want to eat and sleep that it now activty a lot eat and sleep that it now activty a lot of work some don't like now who want sit after scool to do some work | Evidence | Ineffective |
2929f3867c66 | 0A618B980D2D | I would join this program because I can help people in needs and I could travel and see things that I wanted to see a long time ago I could travel all around the world all day every day of the week. | Position | Adequate |
c7c741ef126f | 0A618B980D2D | I like to support Luke for being brave to go out in the bigh world | Claim | Adequate |
a2112db79e7b | 0A618B980D2D | he just got out of high school and he only lives in a small town were very few pepole live. That is the reason i would like to do that program see u next | Evidence | Adequate |
22ed56154254 | 0A618B980D2D | I support Lukes claims because they are very useful for the activty that he is duing | Claim | Ineffective |
2aa5f3fed268 | 0A618B980D2D | i personnaly support Luke for caring because he didn't have to help people survive. | Claim | Adequate |
59474ed29a4d | 0A618B980D2D | Luke is a very brave person and i support him for that | Claim | Adequate |
327e1d23624f | 0A618B980D2D | i like Luke if he was ral or if he is i would like to meet him in person to say how much he helped those people he is a very good person to others. | Evidence | Adequate |
da366deadae7 | 0A618B980D2D | I would join this program to help Luke and save lifes | Claim | Adequate |
16a565a61644 | 0A618B980D2D | I really like Luke he seems like a very helpful person and very succesful in life he didn't give up on school or those animals or the people who needed him to help and they probaly thank him for what he has done. | Evidence | Adequate |
570ad5743cf4 | 0A618B980D2D | I like the fact that the program teachs you resopnsabilty in life | Claim | Adequate |
3eea124f22ff | 0A618B980D2D | how you can't just think about your self and think about others to and be helpful to others and that is just what Luke did he cared for the other people and not just himself and he cared for animals cause if Luke and Don wouldn't have saved them animals they would be dead or extinct. | Evidence | Adequate |
fd26616a742a | 0AB5C0C20670 | Mona Lisa Smile she is 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful, and 2 percent anger. Mona Lisan Smile her emotional is less because here happy is hight and not low. She have being sad but she have being mad. Her anger was 2 percent that is less. She have more emotional smiling. But she have a little fearful. Mona Lisa Smile at last according to the some new computer software that can recognize her emotions. Thomas Huang, ge tge beckmqn institute for Advanced Science at the University of lllinois, working in collaboration with the Prof. Nicu sebe he are the Universitycof tge Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at the developing vetter ways for the human and computers to communicate. And they was talking about the calulate emotions like a math homework? and how can they computers the recongnize of the subtle facial movements. And they have the humans use to express how we feel. And they was staring making comuter constructs a 3-D computer nodel of the face; all the 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. And movement of the one more muscles is called an"action unit." Than Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of tge FACS ( Facial Action Coding System). And theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only Expresses emotions, but also the may even help produce them. May happen because they unconsciously imitata another person of the facial expressions. And whoever thought of that making faces could reveal so much abouf the scepience of the emotions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
65a8f1bc4c01 | 0ABF4F99E166 | There is a saying that goes as this; "You can't make everyone happy." One would typically use this saying if an action they make improves the situation for one person, but creates a worse situation for another. However, if Professor Thomas Huang's new 'Facial Action Coding System' proves to be what he says it can be, then Huang believes that there actually is a way to make everyone happy, even in the school setting. | Lead | Effective |
da693397195e | 0ABF4F99E166 | The implementation of technology able to read the emotional expressions of children in the classroom is valuable for both the teachers and the students. | Position | Effective |
a68b220b794b | 0ABF4F99E166 | Inside a school classroom, there is no doubt that it is hard to please everyone. Therefor, when a student becomes disengaged from the lesson, they often become bored and fall behind in the class. After-all, all students learn differently, so it is inevitable that some of the students will become disengaged. However, with his new technology, Professor Huang predicts that the "classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson" | Evidence | Adequate |
4f07c1f79341 | 0ABF4F99E166 | With this technology implemented, anytime a student starts to fall behind during the lesson, the computer could make slight adjustments to the teacher's plans to help redirect the student back on track. | Claim | Effective |
bc597f39a7ea | 0ABF4F99E166 | It is common knowledge that the more a student falls behind in a class, the harder it becomes to catch up, which in turn makes the student fall behind even more. It is a viscious cycle that all stems from a day of not paying attention that could be averted by this technology | Evidence | Effective |
d884f81d270c | 0ABF4F99E166 | This technology could also help both students and teachers in a long-term manner. In paragraph 7 of the article, it is revealed that this new technology could "even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one" (Paragraph 7). Say there is a classroom without an emotion-sensing computer. In the classroom there is a student who, behind the fake smile is dealing with something that they cannot tackle on their own. The teacher never notices, and the child goes on without help. Now imagine if there was a computer in that class | Evidence | Effective |
d7505cfe5542 | 0ABF4F99E166 | Once it sensed the troubling expressions on the child's face, it could flag down the teacher and alert him or her to the students problem, resulting in the child getting the counceling he or she needs. | Claim | Effective |
23035c9296fe | 0ABF4F99E166 | The amount of improvement a classroom could see if this technology was implemented correctly would be immeasurable. The system could prevent students from falling behind in class because they cannot relate to how the teacher is teaching, and the technology could see through fake expressions hiding more troubled thoughts. With this sort of system, it may actually be possible to "make everyone happy." | Concluding Statement | Effective |
271ec6c78981 | 0ACB0E08934E | The "Facial Action Coding System" is technology that can be used in the class room because some people can't figure out how good or bad someone is feeling. | Position | Adequate |
f29f26a0f9e4 | 0ACB0E08934E | Teachers will be able to know if the student is learning or eithor not paying attention or sleeping in class. | Claim | Adequate |
c9ef47002565 | 0ACB0E08934E | It'll be easier for them to know what's false and what's true expression in their situation they could be in. | Claim | Adequate |
3a09246e2edd | 0ACB0E08934E | In difference in the situation students can't understand someone's expression. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f9e7bdcd0f6f | 0ACB0E08934E | Thanks to the technolgy now it'll be easier to figure out students emotion or anyone. | Claim | Adequate |
00ffd72ef850 | 0ACB0E08934E | The article states, " Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do." | Evidence | Adequate |
c641b2a2113b | 0ACB0E08934E | Finally, yes the technology is worth a big margin but its worth to have the help we can all get to help us know many. | Claim | Ineffective |
62881654075c | 0ACB0E08934E | In my opinion it'll be a better way to learn/read better on our emotional expressions because you"'ll have more information and could know more about everything you want or need to know about the expressions. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. We humans perform this same impressive "calculation" every day, for instance, you can probably tell how a person is feeling simply by the look on their face. | Evidence | Adequate |
3b8ef623dfa6 | 0AD7535C58C0 | The national safety council estimates that 1.4million accidents occur every year due to people using their cell phones. 200,000 of those accidents alone are from texting and driving. How some people believe that texting and driving needs to be closely monitored because of the risk it involves. While other people think that it's alright to use your phone while driving as long as you keep glancing at the road as you are replying to your text | Lead | Effective |
5157df3b8808 | 0AD7535C58C0 | This negatively affects teens and their society, and should be strictly avoided. | Position | Adequate |
0451e6cac6f6 | 0AD7535C58C0 | Using your cell phone causes many distractions for your eyes, your mind, and your actions. | Claim | Effective |
23e981c3d7b6 | 0AD7535C58C0 | It is easily possible for your eyes to slip off the road. Therefore, instead of your eyes locking in on your phone they should be locked on watching your speed, the road and the traffic. At the same time, while driving your mind can only process so much. In addition, your minds need to focus on one thing while driving and that is the road. Simultaneously, the usage of your phone while driving makes your unaware of the happenings that may occur on the road. Current health teens a recent magazine advises when you aren't on the road there's a great danger of missing something pay attention listen because it only takes a matter of time before you get in a wreck. Concentrating is important while driving and breaking the concentrating cause a risk for an accident if you're on the phone tell that person you are driving and that you will call them back later. | Evidence | Effective |
283fb82396c0 | 0AD7535C58C0 | Texting while driving not only endangers yourself but other people on the road as well | Claim | Effective |
8d6e778536af | 0AD7535C58C0 | Texting while driving can limit your response to someone coming out of nowhere, whether if it's a child, an adult, or a group of teens. When having less time to respond to something in the road while texting and driving it may lead to many accidents and deaths. In addition, the usage of your phone while driving can cause a dangerous environment to the people around you on the road. Anyone can walk into the road at any time of the day and staying off your phone prevents anyone including yourself from getting hurt. In the same way, texting while driving causes many dangers risking not only young teens lives, but also adults lives in future accidents. Texting while driving "causes own deaths and others, and need to pay attention to what's going on". Meanwhile, while driving needs to be taken more serious you never know what to expect on the road. | Evidence | Effective |
a686fedef880 | 0AD7535C58C0 | There are many simple solutions to stop texting while driving. | Claim | Adequate |
a02353a6b74e | 0AD7535C58C0 | You can avoid texting while driving by texting before you drive. You can avoid texting while driving by texting before you drive. Henceforth, having safe driving habits all start with keeping both hands on the wheel, eyes on the road and mind focused on what's happening. Moreover, texting and driving may have a reachable desire but there is a solution by placing your phone out of reach. Above all, placing your phone out of reach helps you pay attention to driving instead of wondering what your messages says. Additionally, to prevent texting while driving simply ignore your phone by turning it off. Drivers safety websites notes to turn off your cell phone. Let your voicemail capture your voice and text messages. In summary turning your cell phone off will prevent any possible accidents making a safe environment. | Evidence | Effective |
0961c03f8e39 | 0AD7535C58C0 | The numbers speak for themselves, too many accidents have occurred as a result of people using cell phones while driving. Lives continue to be endangered when people think they need to get in touch with friends or family. If we can just wait until we get to our destination before having to contact or respond to our message's danger can be avoided and lives will be saved. Always remember think before you pull out your cellphone before you commit a crime think of other people lives | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
803bc4c97317 | 0B606C33AC4D | Here in the United States, we have a problem of obesity | Evidence | Ineffective |
a5a50ba9de52 | 0B606C33AC4D | more walking would be involved, | Claim | Adequate |
6290158b60b6 | 0B606C33AC4D | make the streets safer | Claim | Adequate |
15a90ff5a124 | 0B606C33AC4D | stop the polution of the air? | Claim | Adequate |
00dec2023c50 | 0B606C33AC4D | Car-free cities seem to be more safe.
| Position | Adequate |
97e8d1085fb0 | 0B606C33AC4D | Obesity is a big problem in the United States. So instead of us just getting excerise of maybe 20 feet to walking to the car, and then the 45 feet to walk to where we need to go. | Claim | Adequate |
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