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dcf01e7f34b7 | 0D220BA8BA23 | In school can be used for give a lesson,because it will give examples of muscles on your face, | Claim | Ineffective |
8ef413ee3f02 | 0D220BA8BA23 | for example on of them can be orbiculris. It can teach the kids that good to show they emotions and how they show them and how they muscles act when they do them. Fothermore it can show the students that they muscles not only express emotions they can make them to. | Evidence | Ineffective |
741f06e649f1 | 0D220BA8BA23 | Also this can help with students that have problems in they houses and they try to hide they problems | Claim | Adequate |
1ed2e15cd4f6 | 0D220BA8BA23 | It can be also used for bullying to see why kids are quiet and scared. | Evidence | Adequate |
2c76406a236c | 0D220BA8BA23 | This experiment it can be help in differents part of the country no only in schools, it can help for example in hospitals | Claim | Ineffective |
eabb0cb543d2 | 0D220BA8BA23 | to see how the people that can't move they face or have a muscles problems can tell how they feeling | Evidence | Ineffective |
f3897da24ecb | 0D220BA8BA23 | It's always important to know how other person feel about, because if they sad or angry make them laugh so they can have a big smile in they faces. | Evidence | Adequate |
1b24924076f0 | 0D34A4F5331B | In that work we gonna explain, give ideas and talk a little bit about the problems at the study of Venus because that planet is very dangers to survival | Position | Adequate |
adde127a436e | 0D34A4F5331B | Though Venus is a "sister" of the Earth Planet is not the same, Venus is not safetly to people live in their | Claim | Adequate |
6cf0830530a1 | 0D34A4F5331B | because doesn't have the sufficient oxygen to survival. Thoughthe austronomers are fascined with Venus because is the most similar planet to the Earth. But this planet obviusly have a differents to Earth like, the surface on Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees that is crazy and impossible to survival and in venus are present Volcanos eruptions. | Evidence | Adequate |
3a688cdcf413 | 0D34A4F5331B | A idea for the NASA from me to send people to study the planet, is implement a new jetplane more security for thr austronomers for they can survival and can study the planet. And a new uniform most special for the can have the capacity to survival that dangers problems at Venus. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d999c6b13523 | 0D34A4F5331B | With that work we can explain and understand better about the problems with that planet and have ideas to a better study. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
24a9efd1355d | 0D359BCEE452 | By the author of this topic is really persauding by true facts where it makes u think. | Position | Ineffective |
68f96e9f4780 | 0D359BCEE452 | During all this time all the best and expert sciencetist are working together to test a method nd see if we can live on that planet without dying or not producing food or water or even shelter. | Claim | Ineffective |
16b684a34bd9 | 0D359BCEE452 | While testing we figured out that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. | Evidence | Ineffective |
de25de69a05a | 0D359BCEE452 | So that is why I think during the proccess on living venus or in the future testing methods if we could live pn venus or see if we can grow crops or bring like equiment to test samples on we can evole on this planet near us. | Claim | Ineffective |
c6a4f7795d66 | 0D359BCEE452 | Even the thought of going to a new planet is a big turn of events because we dont know how its atmosphere works or gravity or air/oxygen or weather climate change or anything but we are learning about it really fast where we have to make a high expert group of people to risk their lives to see if we can produce our species or our tech,food,citys, or even animal life | Evidence | Ineffective |
fec42e4977a1 | 0D359BCEE452 | in conculsion to make sure that we sure we dont make the smallest mistake to screw up the plans for us to live or visit venus in future but in mean time we have people training to become the best of the best for this secret peoject if it happens. So that is all i gotta say and i hope it does happen to make history on the board for people to live on a new generation. So our main goal is all about Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Even NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venuss surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0965b6fcca6f | 0D3AA8470CC4 | limting use of aoto-mobiles can help change the envierment | Position | Adequate |
059fe79384a4 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | just simply slow down the use of them | Claim | Adequate |
6dc198c1188b | 0D3AA8470CC4 | simply make green cars | Claim | Adequate |
f3a4e205bce4 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | which has great gass mileage and keeps the enviorment clean. Now some people are atill going to drive there big gas sputering cars around but only a few percent of people change how long you drive or what you drive it can really make a differnce on the world to day you could possiable be saving the next generation
So to all those who agree with me buy a green car or stick with your but drive less often there are other ways to get around without use of a car or motercycle there are bicycles roller scates scooters just to name a few and they also help you get in shape. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ef1dc4d83f56 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | If you dont agree with me then why are you still reading go hop on your envirment killing machiens and ruin our lovely home called earth. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3043c3d4bb98 | 0D45F6F0E185 | First of all, I feel like it's pretty reliable, | Position | Ineffective |
4d63277151ef | 0D45F6F0E185 | BUT one of the parts that threw me off was when Professer Nicu Sebe said that shes "83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry." | Evidence | Ineffective |
d4ffcca06f04 | 0D45F6F0E185 | Professer Nibu said the process begins when the computer construts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an "action unit. Then his friend Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FAC (Facial Action Coding). Dr Huang then observed that "The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression." | Evidence | Ineffective |
e12660b040d3 | 0D45F6F0E185 | By using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks the facial movements in either or real face or painted picture of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions, each expression is compared against a neutral face. In fact, Dr. Huang said that we humans perform the same impressive calculation everyday, like for instance, me going to one of my close friends and seeing them frowning I will assume that they're upset about something. | Evidence | Ineffective |
511e2758dc5a | 0D45F6F0E185 | According to the machine if you frown at it, the next ad will be different. | Evidence | Ineffective |
80edf8211362 | 0D45F6F0E185 | I feel like a machine like this would be very useful for computers so they can track if a student is getting distracted, tired or bored, because I feel like it could give the student a warning or something to not fall asleep during a test. | Claim | Adequate |
c91ae1ac4e72 | 0D45F6F0E185 | And lastly, no, the expirement didn't really make me happy, I tried smiling and it felt awkward. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e5a06bcdc827 | 0D45F6F0E185 | According to the "Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion" moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but it may even help producethem in a way, | Claim | Adequate |
00248c5ce57a | 0D45F6F0E185 | which was very shocking to me because I never knew anything could work like that. Reading this article made me feel smarter in a way, learning something I've never heard or seen before | Evidence | Ineffective |
5da15662bc30 | 0D45F6F0E185 | But in conclusion I feel as if this article is helpful and should be seen to my peers. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a565db498e4f | 0D6F9BEBACE4 | They caluclate Mona Lisa emotional they said that she has 83 percent of happyness, 9 percent of disgusted, 6 percent of fearful and 2 percent angry. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles then Dr. Hung relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman creator of FACS ( facial action coding system).
For example your frontails parslterails muscle ( above your eye) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbicularis oris ( around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. In a classroom computer could recognize when student is becoming confused or bored at the same time technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.
When feeling down look in the mirror and do these falling steps 1. rasie your lips at the corners of your mouth. 2. then squit your eyes slightly to prduce wrinkling ( crow's feet) at the corners of your eyes. 3. holding that rasie the outer parts of your cheeks up toward your eyes that you smiling as a reowned drama coach constantin stanislvsky had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emtions on stage and watching your loves one die will make you cry its the same way watching a movie of someone dieing. | Evidence | Ineffective |
652c5cf012cc | 0D7FAACC389B | I feel like that the use of the emotional expressions of students in a class room is not good. | Position | Adequate |
f2257406b14c | 0D7FAACC389B | First of all it is not 100% offical | Claim | Adequate |
700e99e89ff6 | 0D7FAACC389B | Second of all it could fill you computer with viruses. | Claim | Adequate |
6f294c4e5b7e | 0D7FAACC389B | last one is that it could be a lot of money to get in and most likly to fix it. It is a lot of work getting one of those and the thing is why buy it or even consider it, if it is not offical. | Claim | Adequate |
90deb85bcf3f | 0D7FAACC389B | The facial action coding system is not totaly offical. | Claim | Ineffective |
0f3ad1c8d4c4 | 0D7FAACC389B | In the story it says that it uses you face to tell what going on or something. They say that they can tell if it is a real smile or a fake one by your muscules. The muscles called orbicularis make croe's feet around your eyes, but then a fake smile, the mouth is streched sidesways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle called the risorius. Then is said that if an ad pops up and you are happy then the facial action coding system is going to think you like it then more and more are going to be poping up. Sense it said that it can tell eveything just by four face. The rusults won't be right. For people that wear makeup the facial action coding system is not going to get the right results. You might have a facial problem or something wrong with you muscles. That you wouldn'd be able to simle perfectly. Then it will give you wrong results | Evidence | Ineffective |
2f783dfa9868 | 0D7FAACC389B | The fact that facial action coding system is basiclly thinking and telling you how to feel it doesn't really know what you really feel. | Claim | Adequate |
1813fe468ae8 | 0D7FAACC389B | I feel like sense the camera is always going to just be watching you to see what you are feeling that is creepy. Like it said it if thinks your happy when an ad pops up it's going to pull up more and more ads and you might even get a virus. It is going to end up making some damages to your computer. Most likely people are not going to feel safe. What if someone gets to hack you computer. They are going to be watching you all day, everyday. | Evidence | Adequate |
951ec2c22e4c | 0D7FAACC389B | Sense it said that it will cost a lot of money to get it. I won't be fair if some schools have it and if some don't. | Claim | Adequate |
ee4f8da8e1fe | 0D7FAACC389B | The facial action coding system will be hard to get. Some school can just get enough for the basic's. If they can't even get enought to get one what if is stops working or something goes wrong. The people are going to have to find more moeny just ot fix it. Most likely, they are going to have to stop doing some clubs or some after school activities thing like that. Just to try to afford the moeny to fix the program. | Evidence | Adequate |
6c213c5ec564 | 0D89C8189022 | Computers can do many things for us. The idea that a computer can read your emotions is amazing | Lead | Adequate |
8cb9d52e5dd6 | 0D89C8189022 | I do not belive it is true. I will believe it when I see it. | Position | Ineffective |
92d390222e7b | 0D89C8189022 | In paragraph 8 it says " But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ising the zygomatic major and different muscle, the risorius." however this may be true for most people; there has to be someone out there in our world of 7 billion that smiles there smiles with their zygomatic muscle or their risorius muscle | Evidence | Adequate |
9cf5c25d26c7 | 0D89C8189022 | Everyone has diffrent emotions and everyone shows them diffrently | Claim | Adequate |
750d9f876e06 | 0D89C8189022 | The muscles in our face does say a lot about the emotions we are feeling. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d416222c15dc | 0D89C8189022 | I do belive to understand ones emotions it has to be very clear someone is sad, with tears, or you know the person well, In paragraph 5 the artical states " For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face." | Evidence | Adequate |
fe3cad0ebbb4 | 0D89C8189022 | In paragraph 3 it brings up "Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness" | Claim | Adequate |
12c7bd242708 | 0D89C8189022 | but there are way more than 6 emotions that can be reconized | Evidence | Adequate |
e0b67c3f7664 | 0D89C8189022 | This is why I believe computures can not read your emotions | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
edffcb0abddb | 0D91BAF9E8F6 | Luke wanted to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A cattle boat came up and gave him the opportunity to be in the Seagoing Cowboy program. Luke's friend inited him to go on the cattle boat because his friend knew he wanted to be on one. Luke's life changed right after graduation.
Luke did not know his life would change soon. It was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many counties were left in the ruins. UNRRA hired " Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that wereshipped over seas. It says that Luke and Don signed up.
He crossed the Antlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. Luke also found time on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.
Luke said " It made more aware of people of other countries and their needs." Then awareness stayed with him. The cowboys played beseball and volleyball games on board when Luke was on. There was plenty of games they played on board.
Helping at his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared him is what the paragrph said so what it is saying is when he was little then he went to his aunt Katie's farm and played around and it helped him with his future with animals. | Evidence | Ineffective |
df4050e115ac | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | For students, summer projects can feel like a lot, summer break is supposed to be filled with fun times and vacations while projects are almost the exact opposite. Removing summer projects all together isnt an option, | Lead | Effective |
e6be044be148 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | so when it comes to the question "should summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed" teacher-designed projects reign supreme, as it benefits both the student and the teacher in multiple different ways.
| Position | Effective |
a7388b24b94f | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | As a teacher, your main job is proving students with a learning experience that will help them grow as people. Having a student design a summer project would not be nearly as powerful as the impact a teacher-designed project would. | Claim | Effective |
172974386dd1 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers are well informed and know a lot more than most students and because of this it is their responsibility to provide a student with a project rather then have them create one themselves. This is especially reinforced in younger children, such as grades k-6, as they still need a lot of direction and having a student-designed project would not be as viable or coherent as a teacher-designed project. | Evidence | Adequate |
9e689c66b257 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers have it difficult sometimes, as they are trying their best to provide students with a learning experience, but teachers also deserve to have their job be a little easier | Evidence | Adequate |
efee4263f461 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Creating a teacher-designed project as opposed to a student-designed one, would be far easier to grade and create a rubric for | Claim | Effective |
f0ab4586af84 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | . In student-designed projects you have a lot of variety and no one follows a central guideline, however in a teacher-designed project, you can maintain the variety but also contain a set of rules that benefits both the students and teachers, as the students have more clearly defined rules to guide and provide structure to their projects. This also benefits the teachers, as they can easily grade the assignment and provide a fair grading experience. | Evidence | Effective |
df0681b1771f | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Finally, teachers have everyone's best interest at heart when designing projects. Teachers will always design something challenging and beneficial to the students education. | Claim | Effective |
dd27b9c0336b | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Students, especially younger ones, cannot be trusted to design a project that would be as beneficial as a teacher-designed project. Students often take shortcuts or the easy way out and while sometimes this can be beneficial to the students and their education, it is more often harmful then doing it the right way and teaches them to be lazy. A teacher-designed project on the other hand, would be designed with the thoughts of providing an enriching experience to the student and hopefully making them a more successful and educated person. | Evidence | Effective |
ec0a648bf7c6 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers play well informed, and important roles in a students life while they develop, and education is a very big part of student development so, projects should be designed with a teachers interests at heart. Because of that, when it comes down to it, teacher-designed projects are generally more helpful, easier, and responsible then a student-designed project would be. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c011fa1feaf7 | 0DB48DDD9022 | I feel like I am for the value of this use of technology, because you can calculate other peoples facial emotions and your facial movements. | Position | Adequate |
8e6ac3f9c82b | 0DB48DDD9022 | I feel like if you can calculate emotions on a persons face you could understand that person better and what there feeling. | Claim | Adequate |
ec07e6ffe34e | 0DB48DDD9022 | You could do a 3-D model of the face and put in all of the muscles just like a human has on their face.
You could understand if their happy, suprised, or even sad. Your frontalis pars lateralis muscles ( above the eyes ) raises your eyebrows when your suprised or scared.
Your emotions could be all over the place.
You could have certian facial expressions.
For an example, you could have your fear look. You could've saw something that you're afraid of and have a fear look. The software could even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.
I know that everyone has different facial features, but some people have the same facial expressions.
I personally think that we should all have different facial features because no one can be the same and no one is perfect. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0d8a026f5b45 | 0DB48DDD9022 | This technology could observe how our face is formed in the future.
| Claim | Ineffective |
b8fc136de6aa | 0DB48DDD9022 | This new technologyis the same technology for making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or surgery. " Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication " that Dr. Huang had. Computured need to understand that, too " said Dr. Huang.
Your personal computer can't handle the complex of the algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0662a80017a8 | 0DB48DDD9022 | You sometimes has to ask yourself
" Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?" and " Can your lab partner recognize which one? " So I think that this technology is a good idea. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
f473bc4b6068 | 0DC3BDC76434 | In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit even with the dangers on the planet. | Lead | Adequate |
d9e071f47769 | 0DC3BDC76434 | Venus is the sister planet to Earth but the surface of Venus presents a challange to any living thing. Venus is also called the "Evening Star" despite it being a planet.
Venus is a planet that the most like Earth but we bearly studied it because we'll have to get on the planet to do so. Venus has around the same density and size as the Earth but Venus' surface is 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus' Atmosphere is dangrous as well with 97% of it being carbon dioxide and the clouds made out of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Many people may be wondering " If our sister planet is so in hospitable, why are scientists even thinking about any further visits? Astronomers are really fascinated by our sister planet because how close to Earth it really is, Venus even has valleys, mountains, and craters just like our Earth.
For future visits NASA has came up with an idea to has hover crafth that floats 30 or so miles so we wouldn't have to step on the boiling planet. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5939f4967636 | 0DC3BDC76434 | Venus is a worthy pursuit because the more we know about our sister planet the more things we get to do with it. | Position | Ineffective |
6c66de01c4d3 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In the article it talks about a facon mars that has appeared on Viking 1 while looking for a place to land. | Lead | Adequate |
f9f421835316 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | The face is a natral land form | Position | Adequate |
76b01afb2bd0 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | because thats like saying our land forms were made by aliens and thats why we have mountains, valleys, and plains. | Evidence | Ineffective |
65d21b9d4f96 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In the article it says "Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural land form. There was no alien monument after all.". | Evidence | Adequate |
b0b227b18b4e | 0DDCAFAEA487 | The article also states about the face on mars"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West." | Evidence | Adequate |
82a9c8075fde | 0DDCAFAEA487 | Another quote that proves this is a land form is "Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on mars."The photo of mars is a land form because it says right there in the passage it is a lava dome and it is about the same hieght as the face on mars. | Evidence | Adequate |
9efad0507ecf | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In paragraph 6 it says "although few scientists belived the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia bacame a priority fo NASA whe Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended." | Evidence | Ineffective |
1bccace3f49f | 0DEDD9E3222F | In this essay, I'm going to talk about the new softare, that is called the Facial Action Coding system, which can help the computer to knows if we are sad, happy or angry. Putting the example of the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's called Mona lisa. | Lead | Adequate |
7a7de1996f13 | 0DEDD9E3222F | this software is a very good idea, for the teachers and the students too. | Position | Adequate |
fa1e707f2eb9 | 0DEDD9E3222F | The software can calculate "emotions" like math homework. Just recognizing the subtle facial movemets that persons use to express how they feel. | Evidence | Adequate |
adb6388f044f | 0DEDD9E3222F | The new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries | Claim | Adequate |
452001bee6fd | 0DEDD9E3222F | It's a new software that can recognize emotion, and it's the last innovation from prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague Are experts that are trying to do better ways for human an computers to communicate. This process begins when the computer does a 3-D model of the face; creating at least of 44 major muscles making it move like human muscles. Eckman has classifies six emotions ( happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and saddnes) Associating each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example: your muscles above your eyes rais your eyebrowns when you are surprised. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. | Evidence | Adequate |
b81bcd8815a2 | 0DEDD9E3222F | A big example is The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona lisa. Da vinci studied anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles for paint special emotions | Claim | Ineffective |
9353d4a72337 | 0DEDD9E3222F | This subject is really intented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how this can computer can do. Your PC can't handle the use to decode Mona lisa smile. But this invent can write down simple instructions that "encode" differet emotions. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. | Evidence | Ineffective |
efdcd98a5652 | 0DEDD9E3222F | This software makes the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused, then it could modify the lessons, like an human | Claim | Adequate |
705fc0d85749 | 0DEDD9E3222F | It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial
Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama coach tells to his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage because empath might happen when you see someone else expressions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
95f0b7da38ab | 0DEDD9E3222F | In conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2cdb5b6334a1 | 0E185FDC7CCE | May 19,1950 9:30 A.M.
"Wow, I Just had a dreamed about when I started to become a seagoing cowboy, man those were the doy days." "Well time for breakfast" I said. Then Like went downstairs and ate some bread. Then I went outside and went to the store and buy some food. Then he went to his family's house to talk to some of the visitors.
May 20, 1950 11:00 A.M.
the next day I got up and did the some the same thing as yesterday but today was a bit different because today My friend Don was trying to find me. Don was able to find me at the ice shop and said that we need to go the Seagoing cowboys program today to teach any of the people who has signed up.
1:34 P.M.
When got there, the place when they held the program was different becaue no one was there. Then we was a sign that said" ANY EXPERIENCED SEAGOING BOYBOYS COME IN." "Ok then" said Don. Then we When inside there were some old Seagoing Cowboy I remenber.
1:40 P.M. 1950
Then an old man got up and said, " Thank you you all for coming, I am her to tell you than we need your help." "What kind of help?" asked some Seagoing Cowboy. Well we need you all to go on a little trip back to Europe to help some People out over there becuase some the Students over there needs some adive about some of the jobs you did back in 1945. "Ok, sure thing" said most of the Seagoing cowboys. but some of the rest asked 'what, why??" Well the ship leaves the next day so pack some of your things you well need.
May 21, 1950 Noon
Don and I got on the Ship and into a bunk room. "Well just like old times" said Don
"yup" I said back. "Well I am going to explore the ship do you come?" I asked. "How about we unpack out things." Don said "Ok" I said.
June 2, 1950 9:00
"there is a thunder storm out side I wonder if lighing is going to hit the ship?" I asked. The odds of that .. BOOOM!!! Then the alarm came one and said everyone to get to the life boats. Don and I tried to pack our thing but we only pack hlaf of our things and that fell over board while we got in to the life boats.
June ? 1950 ?:??
Don and I woke up one the beach of a nearby city with a few Seagoing Cowboys. "Where are we??" asked Don "I don't know" I said. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b268a5cdbe72 | 0E424AAB5B39 | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents | Position | Adequate |
2a0276ca69cb | 0E424AAB5B39 | because In the text it states that venus is actually a planet and venus is the second planet from the sun. The text also states that venus is simple to see from a far distant. Finally, it says that numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study in etc. If you look back in paragraph 1& 2 that's where I got all the information from to support my answer. | Evidence | Ineffective |
916d7ff46b41 | 0E424AAB5B39 | In conclusion studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because if you just reread everything in this passage it's basically telling you alot of information about venus. If you look back in the passage in read paragraph 8 it's giving you information about venus it says that venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The last in final thing is that our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. So that basically tells you everything about why studying is a worthy pursuit despite for venus. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
77e0ed938496 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | There are many dangers that come along with studying planets. Along with the dangers, there are also countless benefits to learning more about different planets. In the passage, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author addresses the point that Venus is worth taking a closer look at and focusing on, no matter the dangers it could put one in. | Lead | Effective |
b00f58b5d941 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | Although many people believe that the author doesn't support this idea well, the author provides researched evidence and past experiences all throughout the passage to support this idea. | Position | Effective |
e24a1a6ee50f | 0E49EB72AAA4 | In, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author includes well researched evidence to support the idea that Venus is worthy of studying further. | Claim | Adequate |
2cd53d75a9e7 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | When explaining NASA's ideas on sending humans to Venus, the author states, "NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray." This provides evidence that shows what a solution is to avoiding some of the difficulties that occur when trying to explore Venus. The author was able to support his idea throught the use of NASA and it's research. The passage continues to come up with a plan on the best way to float above Venus when the author says, "At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth." This factual evidence that is included ensures that the author is supporting this idea to the fullest of his potential. Researched and factual evidence that is provided all throughout the passage shows how the author supports this idea thoroughly and well. | Evidence | Effective |
7b369889decf | 0E49EB72AAA4 | The also supports his idea of studying Venus depsite the dangers because he includes past experiences that make this idea stronger. | Claim | Effective |
b526ae19cda4 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | When explaining past explorations to Venus, the author states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Facts that have been presented that occured in the past help the author support his idea that there is reasons why people should look into further studying Venus. These past facts present the idea that Venus once looked like Earth did, and if that is true, there are reasons why it should be looked into further. | Evidence | Effective |
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