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9328b3460fe1	0B606C33AC4D	Lets get rid of cars and if you need some where to go, then walk and dont be lazy and get some excerise. Excerise is not bad for you, and is actually very healthy. Walking is also a good way to relieve stress and get things off your mind. Sometimes people get mad or upset while driving adn there emotions get in the way of there driving and it ends up badly. So if we get rid of cars it would also decrease the number of accidents. When your walking and you get upset or mad you wont have to take it out on the car or anyone else around you. Walking instead of driving is a better motive especially when we have a high obesity rate. There are so many people in this world with insecurity issues and instead of them not doing anything about and wanting there parents to drive them to go hang out with there friends or go to the beach or whatever the thing is, walk to your friends house or walk to the beach that way you feel better about yourself when you get there and feel like you accomplished something and feel like you feel better about yourself.	Evidence	Adequate
ac5cb3aec0a9	0B606C33AC4D	In a lot of cities and or countries, there are a lot of "non-safe" streets. There are always car accidents, people dying in these car accidents, there used in some kind of violence. Car accidents are one of the most caused death. This is because people are in a rush so they have to do over the speed limit, people driving recklessly and feel that "oh im cool" or "watch me do this" and ends up in something that they thought at the time wouldnt of happened because they thought they had control. So if getting rid of cars would deffinetly dramatically decrease the number of deaths we have just by getting rid of the cars. Just think of how many lives will be saved! Most of the time thefts are not captured because they always have a run away vehicle to get a way. If we stop using cars, what are they gonna use to get a way? If they try using public transportation to get away, with other people on the bus, he would look suspicious, and get caught. The streets would be a lot safer, especially for adults that have children. Children get snatched up in what? A bicicyle? No, a car.	Evidence	Adequate
1bc4969d9d7c	0B606C33AC4D	it would be a lot safer for kids and teenagers to go out and have a good time and not worry about a lot going around them.	Claim	Adequate
aa9c65cde94e	0B606C33AC4D	We already have more pollution problems then we need.	Claim	Adequate
6369f95398e6	0B606C33AC4D	People just dont care anymore about how or where they live and they will just throw any kind of trash they want on the ground. So driving cars just helps the people already littering, the cars are just polluting the air we breathe. So instead of us Americans not giving a crap about what were doing to the wonderful beautiful planet we live on, we should start, and help, but not driving the things that pollute are air.	Evidence	Adequate
53a0afc3eaec	0B606C33AC4D	In a result of limiting car usage, Mr. Goldberg says " Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role." So this means that by approving it this year, there will be more public transportation then people driving there personal cars. Getting rid of cars would decrease a lot of the problems we have now.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
620f43230338	0B606C33AC4D	Some of you might think, "well what if we work for a living and need to get to work?"	Counterclaim	Adequate
06fab521a2f3	0B606C33AC4D	Well, you can awlays WALK to the public transportation area. Studies have shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. This leaves us wondering, "Has Obama passed peak driving?"	Rebuttal	Adequate
6ddb9071d916	0B606C33AC4D	Is it gonna make us get lower in obesity, make the streets safer, and stop the pollution of the air? Getting rid of cars will decrease a lot of issues that we have in the world today, so getting rid of or decreasing the car-usage is a positive, not a negative.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
af23c7b9c97d	0B81C3067FF2	That the author did good job at explan the evidences like he saws,	Position	Ineffective
7cf73f8c112f	0B81C3067FF2	"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditition by staying up and ount of their way" That it is imported to study Venus even if it dangers.	Evidence	Ineffective
e2f781c119ad	0B81C3067FF2	Venus ounce look like earth, like "Earth-like planet in our solar system	Claim	Adequate
cc9426fc608a	0B81C3067FF2	Long age, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." That it tells us that it you'st to be livible.	Evidence	Adequate
384bc05d9775	0B81C3067FF2	Venus is a challenging planet to study	Claim	Adequate
f57661d05705	0B81C3067FF2	like it saws, "numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." Venus is a challenging to travel to even if it so close.	Evidence	Adequate
7a796141bb24	0B81C3067FF2	Traveling to Venus isn't imposible	Claim	Adequate
8dd9a37c4025	0B81C3067FF2	like it saws, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatin and innovation." It is posible to trave to Venus.	Evidence	Adequate
fcd4ffe77134	0B81C3067FF2	Venus is a challenging planet, that we like to study about and learn how it was formed.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
fd7df123f926	0B87B0B3278C	In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it may present. The author then goes on to tell us all of his facts that back up his claim	Position	Adequate
eaa0c8b8cc97	0B87B0B3278C	I believe the author makes a very good point.	Claim	Adequate
da74a38ab8b8	0B87B0B3278C	In paragraph 4 the author tells us even though Venus's surface had conditions five times more extreme than what we see on Earth, long ago it was covered with large oceans, rocky sediment and craters. If Venus's conditions used to be so similar to Earth then could it possibly have supported life?	Evidence	Ineffective
261ed0a975d7	0B87B0B3278C	In paragraph 7 the author goes to tell us that scientists over at NASA have some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus like conditions.	Evidence	Ineffective
de1ec5b18a04	0B87B0B3278C	If we can somehow develop the technology to last in Venus like conditions wouldn't it be worth it to see what mysteries it holds. We have the technology at our fingertips, all we have to do is put in the time and effort to get to Venus.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
3eee9aceab20	0B8A0777A6E5	limiting car usage could be a good thing for some people. only if they like to walk and do fun things with their lives.	Position	Adequate
b03ba1f18336	0B8A0777A6E5	it saves people lots of money	Claim	Adequate
696fbc8373a3	0B8A0777A6E5	They could have bigger and better things because they wouldnt have to pay a car note, or pay for gas every week	Evidence	Adequate
80bca0992771	0B8A0777A6E5	Having a life without a car can sometimes be a bit scary exspecially if you need to do ,or be somewhere in the middle of the night . you may be ill and need a doctor immedialty you wouldnt be able to walk .	Counterclaim	Adequate
573458b63e39	0B8A0777A6E5	But lets look on the positive side we do have ambulances and things of that sort so we really dont have that much to worry about.	Rebuttal	Adequate
d14d53cd1594	0B8A0777A6E5	the most important part of this is that we have to be safe. and do things the right way	Claim	Ineffective
31db09e20034	0B8A0777A6E5	I think NO cars is a good things saves me more money for shopping and the finer things in life.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
0cf2e9982192	0B8A0777A6E5	i also wouldnt have to beg my parents to take me anywhere because i would be my own transportation.	Claim	Adequate
ead763ee2857	0BB223A348F6	When does school end? It doesn't because of teachers who give students hard assignments to do over summer break. Summer projects are a fun way to engage students in learning over their 2 month break.	Lead	Adequate
96762aa13b6c	0BB223A348F6	it should be student-designed	Position	Adequate
a6696f10dc36	0BB223A348F6	let students gain leadership skills,	Claim	Effective
e7869ac1996b	0BB223A348F6	let them express their creativity.	Claim	Effective
47e9042e2006	0BB223A348F6	One of the many needed traits in life is leadership and is gained from setting a goal and reaching it. Leadership is an important trait because it shows your character and is necessary in a workplace. An example of a student-designed project is the Science Fair. The Science Fair allows students to choose a project of their own and complete it for a grade. The Science Fair is a perfect example of successful student led projects which also help gain leadership. Another example of a student-designed project is the MYP assignment. The MYP assignment is assigned to 10th graders, in Virginia, and are supposed to make a project from scratch. Their project is allowed to be anything they want and in any format which helps the students gain leadership skills when they finish. Important traits like leadership are gained from student-designed projects	Evidence	Effective
06530ba67eb7	0BB223A348F6	A student that loves cars will try more on a project they designed about cars then a teacher telling them to design a project about Anatomy. Also, if a student knows a lot about a specific topic then it would be easier to write about it compared to a topic they have almost no knowledge of. For example, if I know almost everything that has to do with Poker then I would rather write about that instead of computers which I know nothing about. During the summer, many students will be on vacation with their families. The summer is the one time students get a long relaxing break and are free from work. Summer projects assigned by teachers can be stressful and confusing at times which is why it should be a student-designed project. Students designing their own project would allow them to work on it at their own time and do it at a comfortable pace. Creativity is an important skill which students should be allowed to express.	Evidence	Effective
8f0cdf12a54f	0BB223A348F6	Teachers-designed projects would allow students to have a baseline of where to start from. One positive of teacher-designed projects would be they are professionally designed (by the Teacher).	Counterclaim	Effective
7111ba2aa7f0	0BB223A348F6	However, many teachers assign projects without thinking of the difficulty or issues that students could face. What if a student doesn't know anything about the topic? Well the teachers expects them to learn it themselves which is another reason giving students the ability to choose for them self is a good idea. A project designed by the teacher can take longer than they expect if students aren't fully educated about the topic. Consequently, this leads to students wasting more of their summer from trying to learn about then complete the teachers project.	Rebuttal	Effective
abe867447c00	0BB223A348F6	student-designed projects are more beneficial than teacher designed projects. They both have pros however the positives of student-designed projects outweigh the teachers. Projects designed by students allow them to gain leadership skills, and let them explore their curiosity or creativity.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
ed32b0ad1ee4	0BD82CC1FC8C	Dr. Huang stated that his computer can identify a persons feeling just by scaning them. By the way it look the computer can verify a person experssions by the way that they look even thou some poeple in this world can understand expressions but techology is change and now it can nearly tell human emotion. But yet the differences here are that the computer can see emotions or no emotions at all.	Lead	Ineffective
5d91d88baffd	0BD82CC1FC8C	Well the step to take in order to see if a person is showing emotions it would muscular action units. For the instruction 1&2 will determin that techology can tell which from which like a smile canbe tested by a computer or a real person. A machine can tell the difference.	Evidence	Ineffective
1c12c96323b5	0BD82CC1FC8C	We need to look at the prons and cons cause a person can tell if a person is showing any emotion is how they are useing their mouth's muscular actions such as smiling or frowning. Telling a force one a real smile can be que trickey but a computer can tell the differences.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
ec35221a0c5d	0BDD43321AFD	Remember in elementary school you used to get summer reading logs and checks on books you were 'required' to read during your break? Some students never had a problem with these types of assignments because they loved to read any chance they could get. Unfortunately, there were also the kids who would dread reading and give up after ten minutes or pretend they did the entire assignment. Though at this age, it really didn't matter whether or not you did the reading logs, it was just a little nudge your school would give you to do summer learning. However, when students reach higher levels of school, especially around high school, the requirement of summer projects is actually a requirement. Lots of students complain that it is unfair to do assignments over the one, long break they receive, but depending on the class subject it is for, sometimes these projects are essential.	Lead	Effective
c5e9a723847b	0BDD43321AFD	Schools must be aware that if summer projects are always going to be required, the assignments should be student-designed	Position	Adequate
d44b382522af	0BDD43321AFD	students will have more urge to do them	Claim	Adequate
3c3373b8e4c3	0BDD43321AFD	sometimes the projects can interfere with summer plans, making it troublesome to get work done.	Claim	Adequate
a30ff3873aaa	0BDD43321AFD	Summer is the only substantially long break that students receive off of homework, assignments and tests. Through the months of August until June, school does not cease. Almost every week, robotic-like students must wake up early Monday morning, suffer through eight hours of sitting and listen to a teacher go on about something like, why did the War of 1812 happen, how to dissect a frog, or solve for x. Five days are filled with this repeating schedule with two days to spare, and in my experience one of those days is set aside for weekend homework. No matter how much someone loves school and learning, eventually they need a break. Summer is the time to cut loose, hang out with friends, travel somewhere you've never been before and relax. Almost everyone has seen in a movie how students throw their books and papers up in the air as soon as that last day bell rings. Imagine receiving a final project the last day of school, requiring students to turn in on the first day of their next year of school. Now if that project was teacher-designed it might require a student to: 'write an eight page essay on the effects of propaganda use in your society' or 'create a tri-fold and 3-D display of a past, indigenous, tribe's village'. Just picturing these assignments make some people cringe. However, if summer projects were student-designed, people could create a piece of work that interests them and hopefully enables them to put in more effort on the assignment because it wouldn't feel as much like a school task	Evidence	Effective
22b2ea695630	0BDD43321AFD	Student-designed projects could focus on what students question or wonder about in their day to day lives, peaking their interests and making the task feel more fun and creative. Students could receive a broad outline like 'write an essay' or 'create a display', and turn it into a unique piece that expresses themselves; something like a paper on endangered animals.	Claim	Effective
18804a7dfc06	0BDD43321AFD	During summer a lot of trips and vacations are taken whether with family or friends, near or far. Nevertheless, each one requires people to leave their homes and travel with the minimal amount necessary to save space. In my experience, I once was gone for almost the entire summer. One week I was in Pennsylvania with my relatives and the next I was swimming in the crystal clear waters of the Bahamas. Now imagine if these vacations, no matter how long the duration, were to be taken away from students because of a teacher-designed, summer project. If one was to receive a project of this type, there is no way of telling how much time or the location required to get it done. For example, if teachers were to design a summer research paper on the history of where you live, it might be necessary to go to the public library to view history records. No one can do that or go there if they're skiing all the way in Colorado.	Evidence	Effective
5a2eee6a4a3c	0BDD43321AFD	Student-designed projects allow students to create a work period and timing schedule for when doing the assignment works best for them.	Claim	Adequate
3b7fe780a3bf	0BDD43321AFD	Some, especially teachers, might argue that having students design their own summer projects will lead to the minimal work necessary and a poorly done assignment. Teachers might say that students are primarily focused on their summers and just having fun, rather than getting something done that could benefit them in their next school yea	Counterclaim	Effective
b1fac8fb8f84	0BDD43321AFD	However, if the project is required for school, that typically means it is graded. Students won't try to do the least amount work possible just to save them time, if that means they will earn a D on the project. They will start the year off poorly. The overall effect of the project will outweigh how much time and effort is put into it.	Rebuttal	Effective
762b03efb36b	0BDD43321AFD	Overall, student-designed projects would be more beneficial for both teachers and students because these types of assignments create a unique idea of who you are as a person because it shows individual interests. If a project was deemed boring and just based on facts, teachers would be more likely to receive non creative and possibly plagiarized work. Students wouldn't care to try their best because this one task is taking time out of their long awaited break from school. In addition, student-designed projects also allow teachers assigning them, to have a sense of who their incoming students are, based on their projects.	Concluding Statement	Effective
46f58858850a	0BF9F64D6FD1	Students across all age groups look forward to the last day of school, the day summer vacation begins. From the endless memories summer entails, to the exciting, fun experiences, summer vacation is one of the most beneficial times for students. For many high school students, teachers assign summer assignments or projects that relate to a class they may be taking in the upcoming school year. These assignments tend to require an expansive amount of time and also tend to be rather ineffective. In the summer students want to fill their time with exciting activities that they would enjoy. We live in the age of self exploration with some the most inquisitive students, but we still conform to the age old summer assignment system.	Lead	Effective
56536c118079	0BF9F64D6FD1	In a new modern classroom setting, students should have the liberty to design their own summer projects	Position	Effective
eb9c9c0f803b	0BF9F64D6FD1	because students are more inclined to learn when they have the liberty to decide their work,	Claim	Effective
92290bc34513	0BF9F64D6FD1	the process of self exploration is the key to molding successful minds.	Claim	Effective
984de5a8cdd6	0BF9F64D6FD1	When given a task you do not enjoy, most people do either of two things. The first thing they do is rush the task to get it over with, and the second thing they do is push it off as much as they can. Similarly, when a student is given an assignment that is not of interest to them, the quality of work is very low. In reference to the summer, this general idea is heightened; a majority of students tend to push off assignments to the very latest, creating lackluster work and also not learning much from the assignment. Personally, I have experienced this repeatedly. When I was given a summer assignment for my English class this year, I was eager to read the book. While, the book was interesting the assignment was extremely long. The intended goal of the assignment was to expand the knowledge and analysis of the book, but after completing the assignment, I felt like that once held excitement and knowledge was gone. If I had the ability to design my own assignment relating to the book, I most likely would have enjoyed completing the assignment, allowing for an expansion of knowledge. This does not only apply to my experiences with summer assignments, but also applies to my overall experience as a student. When given the liberty to decide my own work, I am not only excited to work, but I am also more dedicated. When my education is in my hands, I produce some of my best work. Currently as a junior enlisted in a self led research class, I have learned so much about myself and the overall topic I am researching. Although at first the task at hand was daunting, I learned how to organize myself effectively and complete a thorough research project that I am happy with. By having the research project on my own, I am constantly thinking about it and I spend more time to work. Giving students the ability to decide their course of work is one of the most beneficial decisions a teacher can make for the future of a student.	Evidence	Effective
425b162eb5e2	0BF9F64D6FD1	Some of the most successful people are regarded for their fame and success due to self exploration. In Benjamin Franklin's famous autobiography, he shares his experiences through self exploration. Growing up in a poor household, Franklin's father could not afford to send him to a traditional college education, but through Franklin's own personal endeavors and exploration, he became one of America's founding fathers, discovered lightning, and paved a legacy that is still remembered today. Simple self exploration can start with these summer projects. When a student is given their own freedom, remarkable results can follow. The purpose of a curriculum is to mend our future minds into strong, independent thinkers, so by implementing simple strides of self exploration, schools and teachers are able to mold the minds of successful students. In my own experiences, self exploration has made a remarkable impact. When I was 15 I started my first company, learning everything on my own with the help of a few mentors along the way. Not only did I grow as a person, but my knowledge for business also grew tremendously. Through the use of online resources, videos, and contacts, I was able to produce something I am truly proud of. The work I put in, was time I wanted to because I was truly passionate about what I was doing. That passion is what we need to strive for. From simple opportunities for self exploration during the summer to long term projects, as a society we need to move towards encouraging self education and self exploration.	Evidence	Effective
efce07da0947	0BF9F64D6FD1	The overall benefit of students having their education in their hands, outweighs the potential negative repercussions.	Concluding Statement	Effective
98ebd90f6d94	0BF9F64D6FD1	Some may predict that students may slack off when given the opportunity to create their own summer projects.	Counterclaim	Effective
3c1e34baca6e	0BF9F64D6FD1	While this is possible, when a student is pushed, surprising results follow. In addition, giving students that necessary push is how we can create a brighter future.	Rebuttal	Adequate
7fd23fc76157	0BFD128F5C01	Hi! Have you ever wanted to find a way to help people and animals when they think they have nothing to live for when they actually do? Do you want to give people food and shelter? Well we got just the right group for you to join!	Lead	Adequate
e6bc4916c669	0BFD128F5C01	Join the Seagoing Cowboys program so you can help people in need! We think that you would be perfect for the program! Here are some reasons why you should join!	Position	Adequate
2eda975a1bb5	0BFD128F5C01	You can help people and animals when needed.	Claim	Effective
068d648fdd99	0BFD128F5C01	Trust us there might be a lot of people who need it.	Evidence	Ineffective
02ec559e7b58	0BFD128F5C01	You would also see great places like China, Greece, and other places in Europe! You might get to see the Great Wall of China, too! Wouldn't that be amazing!	Claim	Effective
4bea5c18f19d	0BFD128F5C01	You might save lives and meet great people who are talented and smart and would also need you.	Claim	Effective
3a298730952a	0BFD128F5C01	You get to travel on seas!	Claim	Effective
a31515a6bb5d	0BFD128F5C01	The Alantic Ocean, Pacific Ocean, and others! You might get seasick, but we have some ginger for you that might help.	Evidence	Ineffective
e943359e7bf4	0BFD128F5C01	So those are the reasons why we think you should join the program. If you like the idea of all the things that are listed feel free to join! Thank you, and we hope to see you there!	Concluding Statement	Adequate
33e13d16c0d4	0C24337CD49E	In the begin in the story it talks about how she had 83 percent happy and 9 percent digusted smile and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. And that her science teacher had graded her latest lab assignment. And that mona lisa at least according some new computer of showing her emotions.	Lead	Ineffective
2e6d4fa8cb4c	0C24337CD49E	In the body paragraph it talks about how that you have to show your emotions. And the neutral face showing no of there emotions. I wonder why the neutral face does want to show emotions. It will be good if they show emotions. But I think that the neutral face does want to show emotions. Becuase some people might look at them.	Evidence	Ineffective
f4f2379eb81a	0C24337CD49E	In the conclusion part it talks about how you are suppose to smile. And putting on happy face works. If you make a happy face you are showing your emotions to other people. I think that a lot people should put on there happy face. Becuase they will be showing there emotions to people. I think that some people don't want to smile becuase they don't like to smile. Or they hate to smile in front of people. I wonder why some people don't want to smile. I think that some people don't want to smile in front people. Becuasue they are afraid to smile in front of people.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
7fb32bdc9d9e	0C751C31DE85	Would you like to be forced to choose an extracurricular activity that you don't like?	Lead	Ineffective
f635fc9c8c9e	0C751C31DE85	The principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea	Position	Adequate
3a937170491c	0C751C31DE85	not every students like extracurricular activity	Claim	Adequate
8616e9edf70a	0C751C31DE85	there are not a variety of activities to choose from	Claim	Adequate
8fc0cd2a86bc	0C751C31DE85	some students already participates in some extracurricular activities outside of school.	Claim	Adequate
715f815b915c	0C751C31DE85	Extracurricular activities are not everyone's favorite, most students would rather do their school work than extracurricular activities. One reason for that is the amount of work the students are receiving. The teachers are giving students an extreme amount of work that the student's interest towards extracurricular activities has declined. A way to fix the problem is to make the lessons less ornate, and more simple.	Evidence	Adequate
8e0b8232beeb	0C751C31DE85	The school has some choices for extracurricular activities such as sports, year book, and student council. There are not many selections that are available for them. For example, if a student doesn't have a favorite choice, then they would be forced to choose something they don't favor. That would diminish their view towards school and the principal. The school can create more choices for the students to pick from, and it could make a difference.	Evidence	Adequate
525cbc74494c	0C751C31DE85	Extracurricular activities such as swimming which is not possible to be done in school. I think schools should focus on the main subjects such as Math, Science, and English, and not extracurricular activities. Even if there are extracurricular activities in school, there should be a choice for it.	Evidence	Adequate
6edcb5499be7	0C751C31DE85	In conclusion, the principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea because not every students like extracurricular activity, there are not a variety of activities to choose from, and some students already participates in an extracurricular activities outside of school. Extracurricular activities should be a choice not a must.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
cc186c61fdf4	0C8DFEAE0ADA	I think Luke's point of view of convincing people to go on a Seagoing Cowboy trip.	Position	Ineffective
3c0ce0241a7d	0C8DFEAE0ADA	The text states Luke joined the program is it was a once in a lifetime opporortunity. The text states,Luke said why would I pass this up this is anopporortunity of a lifetime. The text alo states, he said being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him it opened up the world to him. Another thing Luke said is. "It makes people moreof the other countries in need. The text states,the cattle boat trip is an unbeliveable opportnity for a small town boy. The text also states,Luke said that awareness stayed with him leading his familly to host a numberofinternational students and exchange visitors for many years. The text also states,Luke found time to have fun on board, especially on the return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Another thing Luke said is he was so grateful for the opportunity. The text states,Luke got to see all these different countries like china,and Europe. The text also states that Luke got to tour an excavated castle in Crete. Another thing that Luke said is sometimes you won't no when it will happen	Evidence	Ineffective
72d80bd63901	0C8E8861F91A	I agree with the claim against the value of using this technology to read student's emotional expressions.	Position	Adequate
fd7ffc09bc4a	0C8E8861F91A	First off, we perform these calcutions everyday, as we can tell if our friend is happy or sad by looking at their face most of the time. Also, video imagery tells us that the facial emotions for each emotion are universal.	Evidence	Ineffective
0e863cbe6dd6	0C8E8861F91A	Another big reason is that we really don't know just how much computers can do, it can be where computers detect whether you're happy or sad.	Claim	Ineffective
75193de8c995	0C8E8861F91A	Performing this calculation every day, we would have trouble describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. However, we can also use human anatomy to help paint precisely enough to convey specific emotions. New computer software has anatomical information as electronic code. Video imagery which is the new emotion-recognition software which tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. The software can detect mixed emotions by weighing the different units.	Evidence	Adequate
0b5aba2c95e3	0C8E8861F91A	In a whole, this is a lot to disagree with, since computers are taking over our world now so I believe this is a great idea. Reason being is that we have video imagery, the amazing and undiscovered knowledge of a computer, and our own brains because we calculate expressions on our own every day. These our all major factors that align with the fact that I believe technology should be able to read students' emotional expressions.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
cfa772548c4f	0C952AD5C1EA	In the "German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars", there is a new district that has forbidden street parking, driveways, garages. The residents of this upscale community are suburbans poineers. In france, there is one street that has a tram that runs to downtown. The tram is only thing that drives on the road. there are 2 places to park, one is you park at a large garage at the end of the development , two is to buy a space for 40,000 dallors and also a home. 70% of vauban do not own cars and 57% sold there cars. I say they should all have cars and drive on then roads because its easier to get around and faster. they should make deals with everyone because so everyone has a chance to drive.	Evidence	Ineffective
c4921c24f6df	0C952AD5C1EA	, they should not use cars	Position	Adequate
cfeea3fa2a44	0C952AD5C1EA	they would have to pay for gas	Claim	Adequate
c721de9acce1	0C952AD5C1EA	people would cause accidents and get hurt or killed.	Claim	Adequate
0c3a23c2ec01	0C952AD5C1EA	Cars can be very dangerous and could brake down or cause your life.	Evidence	Adequate
b64b09c06e1f	0C952AD5C1EA	They can be expensive and some that you can not afford. Cars can eat your money away just by draveling long distance and always got to check your car before you go anywhere.	Evidence	Adequate
3bd64c3369a7	0C952AD5C1EA	cars are apart of people lives and every day there will be a car on a road. the united states expanses suburban ideas about the car cultures. Americans are making all sorts of kind of cars and trying to build them more safer and better for the people driving them.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
41a34afe6a55	0D220BA8BA23	The Facial Action Coding System is a new descoverage of the scientifics. This new descoverage can help in some situation. It can help in many situations with the acception of the person. Fothermore it could be and not helpfull used in school	Lead	Adequate
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Lets get rid of cars and if you need some where to go, then walk and dont be lazy and get some excerise. Excerise is not bad for you, and is actually very healthy. Walking is also a good way to relieve stress and get things off your mind. Sometimes people get mad or upset while driving adn there emotions get in the way of there driving and it ends up badly. So if we get rid of cars it would also decrease the number of accidents. When your walking and you get upset or mad you wont have to take it out on the car or anyone else around you. Walking instead of driving is a better motive especially when we have a high obesity rate. There are so many people in this world with insecurity issues and instead of them not doing anything about and wanting there parents to drive them to go hang out with there friends or go to the beach or whatever the thing is, walk to your friends house or walk to the beach that way you feel better about yourself when you get there and feel like you accomplished something and feel like you feel better about yourself.

Evidence

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In a lot of cities and or countries, there are a lot of "non-safe" streets. There are always car accidents, people dying in these car accidents, there used in some kind of violence. Car accidents are one of the most caused death. This is because people are in a rush so they have to do over the speed limit, people driving recklessly and feel that "oh im cool" or "watch me do this" and ends up in something that they thought at the time wouldnt of happened because they thought they had control. So if getting rid of cars would deffinetly dramatically decrease the number of deaths we have just by getting rid of the cars. Just think of how many lives will be saved! Most of the time thefts are not captured because they always have a run away vehicle to get a way. If we stop using cars, what are they gonna use to get a way? If they try using public transportation to get away, with other people on the bus, he would look suspicious, and get caught. The streets would be a lot safer, especially for adults that have children. Children get snatched up in what? A bicicyle? No, a car.

Evidence

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it would be a lot safer for kids and teenagers to go out and have a good time and not worry about a lot going around them.

Claim

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We already have more pollution problems then we need.

Claim

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People just dont care anymore about how or where they live and they will just throw any kind of trash they want on the ground. So driving cars just helps the people already littering, the cars are just polluting the air we breathe. So instead of us Americans not giving a crap about what were doing to the wonderful beautiful planet we live on, we should start, and help, but not driving the things that pollute are air.

Evidence

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In a result of limiting car usage, Mr. Goldberg says " Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role." So this means that by approving it this year, there will be more public transportation then people driving there personal cars. Getting rid of cars would decrease a lot of the problems we have now.

Concluding Statement

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Some of you might think, "well what if we work for a living and need to get to work?"

Counterclaim

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Well, you can awlays WALK to the public transportation area. Studies have shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. This leaves us wondering, "Has Obama passed peak driving?"

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Is it gonna make us get lower in obesity, make the streets safer, and stop the pollution of the air? Getting rid of cars will decrease a lot of issues that we have in the world today, so getting rid of or decreasing the car-usage is a positive, not a negative.

Concluding Statement

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That the author did good job at explan the evidences like he saws,

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"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditition by staying up and ount of their way" That it is imported to study Venus even if it dangers.

Evidence

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Venus ounce look like earth, like "Earth-like planet in our solar system

Claim

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Long age, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." That it tells us that it you'st to be livible.

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Venus is a challenging planet to study

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like it saws, "numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." Venus is a challenging to travel to even if it so close.

Evidence

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Traveling to Venus isn't imposible

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like it saws, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatin and innovation." It is posible to trave to Venus.

Evidence

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Venus is a challenging planet, that we like to study about and learn how it was formed.

Concluding Statement

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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it may present. The author then goes on to tell us all of his facts that back up his claim

Position

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I believe the author makes a very good point.

Claim

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In paragraph 4 the author tells us even though Venus's surface had conditions five times more extreme than what we see on Earth, long ago it was covered with large oceans, rocky sediment and craters. If Venus's conditions used to be so similar to Earth then could it possibly have supported life?

Evidence

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In paragraph 7 the author goes to tell us that scientists over at NASA have some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus like conditions.

Evidence

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If we can somehow develop the technology to last in Venus like conditions wouldn't it be worth it to see what mysteries it holds. We have the technology at our fingertips, all we have to do is put in the time and effort to get to Venus.

Concluding Statement

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limiting car usage could be a good thing for some people. only if they like to walk and do fun things with their lives.

Position

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it saves people lots of money

Claim

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They could have bigger and better things because they wouldnt have to pay a car note, or pay for gas every week

Evidence

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Having a life without a car can sometimes be a bit scary exspecially if you need to do ,or be somewhere in the middle of the night . you may be ill and need a doctor immedialty you wouldnt be able to walk .

Counterclaim

Adequate

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But lets look on the positive side we do have ambulances and things of that sort so we really dont have that much to worry about.

Rebuttal

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the most important part of this is that we have to be safe. and do things the right way

Claim

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I think NO cars is a good things saves me more money for shopping and the finer things in life.

Concluding Statement

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i also wouldnt have to beg my parents to take me anywhere because i would be my own transportation.

Claim

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When does school end? It doesn't because of teachers who give students hard assignments to do over summer break. Summer projects are a fun way to engage students in learning over their 2 month break.

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it should be student-designed

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let students gain leadership skills,

Claim

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let them express their creativity.

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One of the many needed traits in life is leadership and is gained from setting a goal and reaching it. Leadership is an important trait because it shows your character and is necessary in a workplace. An example of a student-designed project is the Science Fair. The Science Fair allows students to choose a project of their own and complete it for a grade. The Science Fair is a perfect example of successful student led projects which also help gain leadership. Another example of a student-designed project is the MYP assignment. The MYP assignment is assigned to 10th graders, in Virginia, and are supposed to make a project from scratch. Their project is allowed to be anything they want and in any format which helps the students gain leadership skills when they finish. Important traits like leadership are gained from student-designed projects

Evidence

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A student that loves cars will try more on a project they designed about cars then a teacher telling them to design a project about Anatomy. Also, if a student knows a lot about a specific topic then it would be easier to write about it compared to a topic they have almost no knowledge of. For example, if I know almost everything that has to do with Poker then I would rather write about that instead of computers which I know nothing about. During the summer, many students will be on vacation with their families. The summer is the one time students get a long relaxing break and are free from work. Summer projects assigned by teachers can be stressful and confusing at times which is why it should be a student-designed project. Students designing their own project would allow them to work on it at their own time and do it at a comfortable pace. Creativity is an important skill which students should be allowed to express.

Evidence

Effective

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Teachers-designed projects would allow students to have a baseline of where to start from. One positive of teacher-designed projects would be they are professionally designed (by the Teacher).

Counterclaim

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However, many teachers assign projects without thinking of the difficulty or issues that students could face. What if a student doesn't know anything about the topic? Well the teachers expects them to learn it themselves which is another reason giving students the ability to choose for them self is a good idea. A project designed by the teacher can take longer than they expect if students aren't fully educated about the topic. Consequently, this leads to students wasting more of their summer from trying to learn about then complete the teachers project.

Rebuttal

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student-designed projects are more beneficial than teacher designed projects. They both have pros however the positives of student-designed projects outweigh the teachers. Projects designed by students allow them to gain leadership skills, and let them explore their curiosity or creativity.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Dr. Huang stated that his computer can identify a persons feeling just by scaning them. By the way it look the computer can verify a person experssions by the way that they look even thou some poeple in this world can understand expressions but techology is change and now it can nearly tell human emotion. But yet the differences here are that the computer can see emotions or no emotions at all.

Lead

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Well the step to take in order to see if a person is showing emotions it would muscular action units. For the instruction 1&2 will determin that techology can tell which from which like a smile canbe tested by a computer or a real person. A machine can tell the difference.

Evidence

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We need to look at the prons and cons cause a person can tell if a person is showing any emotion is how they are useing their mouth's muscular actions such as smiling or frowning. Telling a force one a real smile can be que trickey but a computer can tell the differences.

Concluding Statement

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Remember in elementary school you used to get summer reading logs and checks on books you were 'required' to read during your break? Some students never had a problem with these types of assignments because they loved to read any chance they could get. Unfortunately, there were also the kids who would dread reading and give up after ten minutes or pretend they did the entire assignment. Though at this age, it really didn't matter whether or not you did the reading logs, it was just a little nudge your school would give you to do summer learning. However, when students reach higher levels of school, especially around high school, the requirement of summer projects is actually a requirement. Lots of students complain that it is unfair to do assignments over the one, long break they receive, but depending on the class subject it is for, sometimes these projects are essential.

Lead

Effective

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Schools must be aware that if summer projects are always going to be required, the assignments should be student-designed

Position

Adequate

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students will have more urge to do them

Claim

Adequate

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sometimes the projects can interfere with summer plans, making it troublesome to get work done.

Claim

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Summer is the only substantially long break that students receive off of homework, assignments and tests. Through the months of August until June, school does not cease. Almost every week, robotic-like students must wake up early Monday morning, suffer through eight hours of sitting and listen to a teacher go on about something like, why did the War of 1812 happen, how to dissect a frog, or solve for x. Five days are filled with this repeating schedule with two days to spare, and in my experience one of those days is set aside for weekend homework. No matter how much someone loves school and learning, eventually they need a break. Summer is the time to cut loose, hang out with friends, travel somewhere you've never been before and relax. Almost everyone has seen in a movie how students throw their books and papers up in the air as soon as that last day bell rings. Imagine receiving a final project the last day of school, requiring students to turn in on the first day of their next year of school. Now if that project was teacher-designed it might require a student to: 'write an eight page essay on the effects of propaganda use in your society' or 'create a tri-fold and 3-D display of a past, indigenous, tribe's village'. Just picturing these assignments make some people cringe. However, if summer projects were student-designed, people could create a piece of work that interests them and hopefully enables them to put in more effort on the assignment because it wouldn't feel as much like a school task

Evidence

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Student-designed projects could focus on what students question or wonder about in their day to day lives, peaking their interests and making the task feel more fun and creative. Students could receive a broad outline like 'write an essay' or 'create a display', and turn it into a unique piece that expresses themselves; something like a paper on endangered animals.

Claim

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During summer a lot of trips and vacations are taken whether with family or friends, near or far. Nevertheless, each one requires people to leave their homes and travel with the minimal amount necessary to save space. In my experience, I once was gone for almost the entire summer. One week I was in Pennsylvania with my relatives and the next I was swimming in the crystal clear waters of the Bahamas. Now imagine if these vacations, no matter how long the duration, were to be taken away from students because of a teacher-designed, summer project. If one was to receive a project of this type, there is no way of telling how much time or the location required to get it done. For example, if teachers were to design a summer research paper on the history of where you live, it might be necessary to go to the public library to view history records. No one can do that or go there if they're skiing all the way in Colorado.

Evidence

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Student-designed projects allow students to create a work period and timing schedule for when doing the assignment works best for them.

Claim

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Some, especially teachers, might argue that having students design their own summer projects will lead to the minimal work necessary and a poorly done assignment. Teachers might say that students are primarily focused on their summers and just having fun, rather than getting something done that could benefit them in their next school yea

Counterclaim

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However, if the project is required for school, that typically means it is graded. Students won't try to do the least amount work possible just to save them time, if that means they will earn a D on the project. They will start the year off poorly. The overall effect of the project will outweigh how much time and effort is put into it.

Rebuttal

Effective

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Overall, student-designed projects would be more beneficial for both teachers and students because these types of assignments create a unique idea of who you are as a person because it shows individual interests. If a project was deemed boring and just based on facts, teachers would be more likely to receive non creative and possibly plagiarized work. Students wouldn't care to try their best because this one task is taking time out of their long awaited break from school. In addition, student-designed projects also allow teachers assigning them, to have a sense of who their incoming students are, based on their projects.

Concluding Statement

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Students across all age groups look forward to the last day of school, the day summer vacation begins. From the endless memories summer entails, to the exciting, fun experiences, summer vacation is one of the most beneficial times for students. For many high school students, teachers assign summer assignments or projects that relate to a class they may be taking in the upcoming school year. These assignments tend to require an expansive amount of time and also tend to be rather ineffective. In the summer students want to fill their time with exciting activities that they would enjoy. We live in the age of self exploration with some the most inquisitive students, but we still conform to the age old summer assignment system.

Lead

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In a new modern classroom setting, students should have the liberty to design their own summer projects

Position

Effective

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because students are more inclined to learn when they have the liberty to decide their work,

Claim

Effective

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the process of self exploration is the key to molding successful minds.

Claim

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When given a task you do not enjoy, most people do either of two things. The first thing they do is rush the task to get it over with, and the second thing they do is push it off as much as they can. Similarly, when a student is given an assignment that is not of interest to them, the quality of work is very low. In reference to the summer, this general idea is heightened; a majority of students tend to push off assignments to the very latest, creating lackluster work and also not learning much from the assignment. Personally, I have experienced this repeatedly. When I was given a summer assignment for my English class this year, I was eager to read the book. While, the book was interesting the assignment was extremely long. The intended goal of the assignment was to expand the knowledge and analysis of the book, but after completing the assignment, I felt like that once held excitement and knowledge was gone. If I had the ability to design my own assignment relating to the book, I most likely would have enjoyed completing the assignment, allowing for an expansion of knowledge. This does not only apply to my experiences with summer assignments, but also applies to my overall experience as a student. When given the liberty to decide my own work, I am not only excited to work, but I am also more dedicated. When my education is in my hands, I produce some of my best work. Currently as a junior enlisted in a self led research class, I have learned so much about myself and the overall topic I am researching. Although at first the task at hand was daunting, I learned how to organize myself effectively and complete a thorough research project that I am happy with. By having the research project on my own, I am constantly thinking about it and I spend more time to work. Giving students the ability to decide their course of work is one of the most beneficial decisions a teacher can make for the future of a student.

Evidence

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Some of the most successful people are regarded for their fame and success due to self exploration. In Benjamin Franklin's famous autobiography, he shares his experiences through self exploration. Growing up in a poor household, Franklin's father could not afford to send him to a traditional college education, but through Franklin's own personal endeavors and exploration, he became one of America's founding fathers, discovered lightning, and paved a legacy that is still remembered today. Simple self exploration can start with these summer projects. When a student is given their own freedom, remarkable results can follow. The purpose of a curriculum is to mend our future minds into strong, independent thinkers, so by implementing simple strides of self exploration, schools and teachers are able to mold the minds of successful students. In my own experiences, self exploration has made a remarkable impact. When I was 15 I started my first company, learning everything on my own with the help of a few mentors along the way. Not only did I grow as a person, but my knowledge for business also grew tremendously. Through the use of online resources, videos, and contacts, I was able to produce something I am truly proud of. The work I put in, was time I wanted to because I was truly passionate about what I was doing. That passion is what we need to strive for. From simple opportunities for self exploration during the summer to long term projects, as a society we need to move towards encouraging self education and self exploration.

Evidence

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The overall benefit of students having their education in their hands, outweighs the potential negative repercussions.

Concluding Statement

Effective

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Some may predict that students may slack off when given the opportunity to create their own summer projects.

Counterclaim

Effective

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While this is possible, when a student is pushed, surprising results follow. In addition, giving students that necessary push is how we can create a brighter future.

Rebuttal

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Hi! Have you ever wanted to find a way to help people and animals when they think they have nothing to live for when they actually do? Do you want to give people food and shelter? Well we got just the right group for you to join!

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Join the Seagoing Cowboys program so you can help people in need! We think that you would be perfect for the program! Here are some reasons why you should join!

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You can help people and animals when needed.

Claim

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Trust us there might be a lot of people who need it.

Evidence

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You would also see great places like China, Greece, and other places in Europe! You might get to see the Great Wall of China, too! Wouldn't that be amazing!

Claim

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You might save lives and meet great people who are talented and smart and would also need you.

Claim

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You get to travel on seas!

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The Alantic Ocean, Pacific Ocean, and others! You might get seasick, but we have some ginger for you that might help.

Evidence

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So those are the reasons why we think you should join the program. If you like the idea of all the things that are listed feel free to join! Thank you, and we hope to see you there!

Concluding Statement

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In the begin in the story it talks about how she had 83 percent happy and 9 percent digusted smile and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. And that her science teacher had graded her latest lab assignment. And that mona lisa at least according some new computer of showing her emotions.

Lead

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In the body paragraph it talks about how that you have to show your emotions. And the neutral face showing no of there emotions. I wonder why the neutral face does want to show emotions. It will be good if they show emotions. But I think that the neutral face does want to show emotions. Becuase some people might look at them.

Evidence

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In the conclusion part it talks about how you are suppose to smile. And putting on happy face works. If you make a happy face you are showing your emotions to other people. I think that a lot people should put on there happy face. Becuase they will be showing there emotions to people. I think that some people don't want to smile becuase they don't like to smile. Or they hate to smile in front of people. I wonder why some people don't want to smile. I think that some people don't want to smile in front people. Becuasue they are afraid to smile in front of people.

Concluding Statement

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Would you like to be forced to choose an extracurricular activity that you don't like?

Lead

Ineffective

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The principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea

Position

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not every students like extracurricular activity

Claim

Adequate

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there are not a variety of activities to choose from

Claim

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some students already participates in some extracurricular activities outside of school.

Claim

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Extracurricular activities are not everyone's favorite, most students would rather do their school work than extracurricular activities. One reason for that is the amount of work the students are receiving. The teachers are giving students an extreme amount of work that the student's interest towards extracurricular activities has declined. A way to fix the problem is to make the lessons less ornate, and more simple.

Evidence

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The school has some choices for extracurricular activities such as sports, year book, and student council. There are not many selections that are available for them. For example, if a student doesn't have a favorite choice, then they would be forced to choose something they don't favor. That would diminish their view towards school and the principal. The school can create more choices for the students to pick from, and it could make a difference.

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Extracurricular activities such as swimming which is not possible to be done in school. I think schools should focus on the main subjects such as Math, Science, and English, and not extracurricular activities. Even if there are extracurricular activities in school, there should be a choice for it.

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In conclusion, the principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea because not every students like extracurricular activity, there are not a variety of activities to choose from, and some students already participates in an extracurricular activities outside of school. Extracurricular activities should be a choice not a must.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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I think Luke's point of view of convincing people to go on a Seagoing Cowboy trip.

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The text states Luke joined the program is it was a once in a lifetime opporortunity. The text states,Luke said why would I pass this up this is anopporortunity of a lifetime. The text alo states, he said being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him it opened up the world to him. Another thing Luke said is. "It makes people moreof the other countries in need. The text states,the cattle boat trip is an unbeliveable opportnity for a small town boy. The text also states,Luke said that awareness stayed with him leading his familly to host a numberofinternational students and exchange visitors for many years. The text also states,Luke found time to have fun on board, especially on the return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Another thing Luke said is he was so grateful for the opportunity. The text states,Luke got to see all these different countries like china,and Europe. The text also states that Luke got to tour an excavated castle in Crete. Another thing that Luke said is sometimes you won't no when it will happen

Evidence

Ineffective

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I agree with the claim against the value of using this technology to read student's emotional expressions.

Position

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First off, we perform these calcutions everyday, as we can tell if our friend is happy or sad by looking at their face most of the time. Also, video imagery tells us that the facial emotions for each emotion are universal.

Evidence

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Another big reason is that we really don't know just how much computers can do, it can be where computers detect whether you're happy or sad.

Claim

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Performing this calculation every day, we would have trouble describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. However, we can also use human anatomy to help paint precisely enough to convey specific emotions. New computer software has anatomical information as electronic code. Video imagery which is the new emotion-recognition software which tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. The software can detect mixed emotions by weighing the different units.

Evidence

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In a whole, this is a lot to disagree with, since computers are taking over our world now so I believe this is a great idea. Reason being is that we have video imagery, the amazing and undiscovered knowledge of a computer, and our own brains because we calculate expressions on our own every day. These our all major factors that align with the fact that I believe technology should be able to read students' emotional expressions.

Concluding Statement

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In the "German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars", there is a new district that has forbidden street parking, driveways, garages. The residents of this upscale community are suburbans poineers. In france, there is one street that has a tram that runs to downtown. The tram is only thing that drives on the road. there are 2 places to park, one is you park at a large garage at the end of the development , two is to buy a space for 40,000 dallors and also a home. 70% of vauban do not own cars and 57% sold there cars. I say they should all have cars and drive on then roads because its easier to get around and faster. they should make deals with everyone because so everyone has a chance to drive.

Evidence

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, they should not use cars

Position

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they would have to pay for gas

Claim

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people would cause accidents and get hurt or killed.

Claim

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Cars can be very dangerous and could brake down or cause your life.

Evidence

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They can be expensive and some that you can not afford. Cars can eat your money away just by draveling long distance and always got to check your car before you go anywhere.

Evidence

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cars are apart of people lives and every day there will be a car on a road. the united states expanses suburban ideas about the car cultures. Americans are making all sorts of kind of cars and trying to build them more safer and better for the people driving them.

Concluding Statement

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The Facial Action Coding System is a new descoverage of the scientifics. This new descoverage can help in some situation. It can help in many situations with the acception of the person. Fothermore it could be and not helpfull used in school

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FACS can be used in school for knowladge.

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